TheSoundofThrowingPennies Posted March 15, 2014 Share Posted March 15, 2014 Feel free to critique the design as well, though it was just a personal project. Also credit goes to a user on these boards for the logo, which I tweaked a bit, though I can't seem to find the original post anymore. Basically the background of this presentation will be a team's secondary color, and the color of the font will be the same color as the team's numbers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derschwigg Posted March 15, 2014 Share Posted March 15, 2014 I'm not a big fan of the Impact/Haettenschweiler type font being used for regular copy. I'd shoot for Conduit ITC or Trade Gothic. You'll get the same clean look with significantly more readability. My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tv15 Posted March 15, 2014 Share Posted March 15, 2014 Big fan of the logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JRB14 Posted March 15, 2014 Share Posted March 15, 2014 derschwigg pointed out that the font is too hard to read. I agree with him on that, but also the colour choice for your Broncos concept makes it hard to read. I had to tilt my laptop to read your work. Someone also commented on you Broncos redesign after the Super Bowl, on the use of the Nike logo. They said that unless you work there, it doesn't make sense to put it on your work. It's your work, and it's good work, too. Put your name on it, not the swoosh. I don't know if you wanted comments on your concept itself, but here's some thoughts I had. You have three different looks going on here, and even said so in the description of your third jersey. While I'm a fan of each jersey and uniform on their own, I'm not a fan of them all together. I don't like the shoulder yoke, to be honest, either. make the yoke black, and For the white and blue jerseys, swap out the black for each of the two colours. I also like your pants design on the third. Maybe try it with your grey/orange/white colour scheme on the other pairs, and this will look great. Also, add the helmet logo, and these will be perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
upperV03 Posted March 15, 2014 Share Posted March 15, 2014 Font is not hard to read but fairly inconsistent in the thicknes of the lines. Look at the 1 and the 5 for example, very inconsistent in the thickness of the font. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheSoundofThrowingPennies Posted March 15, 2014 Author Share Posted March 15, 2014 derschwigg pointed out that the font is too hard to read. I agree with him on that, but also the colour choice for your Broncos concept makes it hard to read. I had to tilt my laptop to read your work. Someone also commented on you Broncos redesign after the Super Bowl, on the use of the Nike logo. They said that unless you work there, it doesn't make sense to put it on your work. It's your work, and it's good work, too. Put your name on it, not the swoosh. I don't know if you wanted comments on your concept itself, but here's some thoughts I had. You have three different looks going on here, and even said so in the description of your third jersey. While I'm a fan of each jersey and uniform on their own, I'm not a fan of them all together. I don't like the shoulder yoke, to be honest, either. make the yoke black, and For the white and blue jerseys, swap out the black for each of the two colours. I also like your pants design on the third. Maybe try it with your grey/orange/white colour scheme on the other pairs, and this will look great. Also, add the helmet logo, and these will be perfect.Ya I've always felt that the Nike logo makes it more professional, but now I know how to make my own vectors and typefaces, thanks to that incscape tutorial! So when I present concepts from here out, I'll have my own logo! Lol. I'm pretty surprised you like the looks lol. I'm actually debuting a new concept thread this weekend which is why I wanted feedback on the presentation. I was originally going to stay from scratch for Denver, but I'll try to present this design with your suggestions. Thanks for the feedback! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JTswag187 Posted March 15, 2014 Share Posted March 15, 2014 It's hard to read and your numbers waste a lot of space. Also you should include secondary logos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PackerFan98 Posted March 15, 2014 Share Posted March 15, 2014 I like the logo and the alt, but not a fan of the home and away unis Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bbb Posted March 15, 2014 Share Posted March 15, 2014 l don't like grey numbers on white jersey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mamiller99 Posted March 15, 2014 Share Posted March 15, 2014 More orange on the away That's what- She Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wonderbread Posted March 15, 2014 Share Posted March 15, 2014 Can't see the helmet logo, numbers are illegible being grey on white, and your words are the same. Also the inclusion of grey and removing blue to look more like the Rockies is exactly something Nike would do Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHcreative Posted March 16, 2014 Share Posted March 16, 2014 Am I the only one around here that absolutely hates these "real-life" templates? I much prefer the simple 2-D ones; I feel as though they focus much better on the design itself and are way more aesthetically pleasing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asianman Posted March 16, 2014 Share Posted March 16, 2014 The alternate uniform kind of reminds me of Boise State's Nike Pro Combat uniforms from a couple of years ago. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Impaler Posted March 16, 2014 Share Posted March 16, 2014 The logo is fantastic and should be used by the team as a secondary for the current scheme. As far as everything else, not a fan. I don't know why you would scrap such a bright and vibrant color scheme for essentially just a dull grey. Colorado is known for the mountains sure, but also bright sunny blue skied days and beautiful sunsets behind the mountains. It's a trend in sports today that I don't understand, all this dull grey third stuff that Nike puts out. Unimaginative and boring. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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