ujju2 Posted April 29, 2014 Share Posted April 29, 2014 They look pretty good. I'm just wondering, what program are you using? The L isn't really working. Second one reminds me of a swastika made of lightning. First one is probably best. It's simple and more effective. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted April 29, 2014 Author Share Posted April 29, 2014 They look pretty good. I'm just wondering, what program are you using? The L isn't really working. Second one reminds me of a swastika made of lightning. First one is probably best. It's simple and more effective.I'm using Photoshop Elements 10, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRicSlick Posted April 29, 2014 Share Posted April 29, 2014 They look pretty good. I'm just wondering, what program are you using? The L isn't really working. Second one reminds me of a swastika made of lightning. First one is probably best. It's simple and more effective.I'm using Photoshop Elements 10,I'm sorry to say this, but these look like they where done on paint. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PSUcelticsWON95 Posted April 29, 2014 Share Posted April 29, 2014 They look pretty good. I'm just wondering, what program are you using? The L isn't really working. Second one reminds me of a swastika made of lightning. First one is probably best. It's simple and more effective.I completely agree Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thebigcahuna Posted April 30, 2014 Share Posted April 30, 2014 7th grade right here too!8th get on my level http://rs1170.pbsrc.com/albums/r536/Thebigcahuna/Mobile%20Uploads/Signature_zps9e3690ed.png~320x480?t=1404617911 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted April 30, 2014 Author Share Posted April 30, 2014 I experimented with option one, and came up with 2 more logos:Eliminating Yellow:MORE YELLOW!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted April 30, 2014 Share Posted April 30, 2014 It's getting there. I'd experiment with the font. I think it would be desirable for the font to have similar motion to the lightning bolt. There are lots of free fonts out there-- dafont.com , 1001fonts.com, for starters --just double-check to see if the rights to the fonts cover what you're using them for. You can even type in the text you want on these sites for a preview of the font.Also, I'm not familiar with the program you're using, but you so need to address how the lines in the lightning bolt are connecting. There really shouldn't be those little gaps in the final product.Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted April 30, 2014 Author Share Posted April 30, 2014 It's getting there. I'd experiment with the font. I think it would be desirable for the font to have similar motion to the lightning bolt. There are lots of free fonts out there-- dafont.com , 1001fonts.com, for starters --just double-check to see if the rights to the fonts cover what you're using them for. You can even type in the text you want on these sites for a preview of the font.Also, I'm not familiar with the program you're using, but you so need to address how the lines in the lightning bolt are connecting. There really shouldn't be those little gaps in the final product.Keep up the good work.I really didn't want to use this excuse, but I'm not amazingly coordinated with the pencil tool. I'll try to get a different font and color in the blank spots by THRS night. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TShaw528 Posted April 30, 2014 Share Posted April 30, 2014 It looks sorta like Tampa Bay Lightning logo now Also what about a yellow bolt but white circle? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spearhead Posted May 1, 2014 Share Posted May 1, 2014 Clean the lines up more. I think the original concept would work better if the bolts folded in and up rather than out and down. Also, sharper angles. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ujju2 Posted May 1, 2014 Share Posted May 1, 2014 It looks sorta like Tampa Bay Lightning logo nowAlso what about a yellow bolt but white circle?Fully agree. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prefix270 Posted May 1, 2014 Share Posted May 1, 2014 Original logo...Try starting your bolt from left to right and make your zig-zag more at an angle like traditional lighting bolts are usually depicted. Then I would play with the size of the JA letters within the bolt nest. Have you tried making all three the same size and have the same "bolt" treatment?Patrick Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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