Capt. America Posted May 5, 2015 Share Posted May 5, 2015 I would like to see an Eastern New Mexico Greyhounds update if at all possible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suplauren Posted May 5, 2015 Share Posted May 5, 2015 What might be throwing you off is the bottom part of the beak not extending past the outer circle giving it the appearance of being shorter than it really is. That's definitely it. The bottom part looks much shorter than the top. Maybe stretch it out so it pokes a little bit outside the circle? It may look more balanced. laurenlogos.tumblr.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren69 Posted May 5, 2015 Author Share Posted May 5, 2015 Tried elongating the bottom part of the beak but it just wasn't working for me so I went with a simple notch under it to show it's length. Also did one where I dropped the raven down so the whole beak shows and incorporated the mountain from their current logo. https://www.behance.net/Ren1969 https://twitter.com/Ren1969_Rene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted May 6, 2015 Share Posted May 6, 2015 On the ravens logo, I prefer the bottom one where the raven's neck blends in with the circle, if you ditch the mountains and centered the head. Or if you want to keep the mountains, consider touching them up to make them flow more naturally with the smooth flowing raven. They look too rough as is, but I'm liking your style on your latest works and this whole thread. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suplauren Posted May 6, 2015 Share Posted May 6, 2015 I like both of them, though I think I prefer the incorporation of the mountain a little more. laurenlogos.tumblr.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren69 Posted May 6, 2015 Author Share Posted May 6, 2015 Appreciate the feedback guys! https://www.behance.net/Ren1969 https://twitter.com/Ren1969_Rene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeauxColonels Posted May 6, 2015 Share Posted May 6, 2015 On the ravens logo, I prefer the bottom one where the raven's neck blends in with the circle, if you ditch the mountains and centered the head. Or if you want to keep the mountains, consider touching them up to make them flow more naturally with the smooth flowing raven. They look too rough as is, but I'm liking your style on your latest works and this whole thread.Agreed. I think the beak ends up looking much better in the bottom one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hd1graphics Posted May 18, 2015 Share Posted May 18, 2015 Keep up the good work all of these are amazing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren69 Posted May 26, 2015 Author Share Posted May 26, 2015 https://www.behance.net/Ren1969 https://twitter.com/Ren1969_Rene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren69 Posted June 6, 2015 Author Share Posted June 6, 2015 Kept their current word mark in place just made outlines bolder to match mascot.EDIT: Reduced the size of the triangle as suggested & moved mascot more to the left so it appears more centered. https://www.behance.net/Ren1969 https://twitter.com/Ren1969_Rene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suplauren Posted June 7, 2015 Share Posted June 7, 2015 Just saw the Roadrunner! I love it. Its a little static but that helps distinguishes it from all the other running roadrunner logos.The Okra is good. I feel like the negative space on the left side of the triangle one is a little weird. Maybe shrink the triangle a little? laurenlogos.tumblr.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren69 Posted June 7, 2015 Author Share Posted June 7, 2015 Thanks suplauren, glad your digging these new additions. Yeah, with the roadrunner I didn't want it in the usual running pose so I chose to go with more of a ready to take off look. As for the okra the pose he's in makes it look off centered inside the triangle. I'll try moving him left or reducing the size of the triangle as you suggested. https://www.behance.net/Ren1969 https://twitter.com/Ren1969_Rene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PSUcelticsWON95 Posted June 7, 2015 Share Posted June 7, 2015 Haven't looked at this thread in a while, but you've done some really fantastic work. I love Delta State, but I agree with suplauren, but I'm glad you plan on working to fix that problem. Great work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren69 Posted June 7, 2015 Author Share Posted June 7, 2015 Edited previous post of Delta State with smaller triangle. https://www.behance.net/Ren1969 https://twitter.com/Ren1969_Rene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suplauren Posted June 10, 2015 Share Posted June 10, 2015 Looks so good with the smaller triangle! laurenlogos.tumblr.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren69 Posted June 10, 2015 Author Share Posted June 10, 2015 Looks so good with the smaller triangle!Thanks, glad you like it. Have you done any redesigns lately? https://www.behance.net/Ren1969 https://twitter.com/Ren1969_Rene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren69 Posted June 10, 2015 Author Share Posted June 10, 2015 https://www.behance.net/Ren1969 https://twitter.com/Ren1969_Rene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren69 Posted June 12, 2015 Author Share Posted June 12, 2015 Clean version. https://www.behance.net/Ren1969 https://twitter.com/Ren1969_Rene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PSUcelticsWON95 Posted June 13, 2015 Share Posted June 13, 2015 Both of them are good, but I really like the shading on the first one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren69 Posted June 13, 2015 Author Share Posted June 13, 2015 Good to hear your digging the Owls logo PSU & yeah I like it more WITH shading too. https://www.behance.net/Ren1969 https://twitter.com/Ren1969_Rene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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