Vicious Posted April 20, 2015 Author Share Posted April 20, 2015 Alright folks. Here is the latest update. I duplicated the right side over to the left, but I still kept is asymmetrical. I darkened the yellow a bit, and I re-worked the ears. I also straightened out the fur on the top of his head to stand up more crown-like. Let me know your thoughts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drakexedge Posted April 20, 2015 Share Posted April 20, 2015 Perfect! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted April 20, 2015 Share Posted April 20, 2015 The improvement of the logo through this series has been phenomenal. The white lower jaw is really throwing me though, it should be yellow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JB83 Posted April 20, 2015 Share Posted April 20, 2015 The improvement of the logo through this series has been phenomenal. The white lower jaw is really throwing me though, it should be yellowThis ^ Looks off to me too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted April 21, 2015 Share Posted April 21, 2015 I love threads that have huge growth. Look at FFWALLY's Pasco Bulldog thread, of DavidMiller5's ram logo thread. I really see the progression here, and you've taken a huge step forwards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicious Posted April 21, 2015 Author Share Posted April 21, 2015 Thanks a lot guys. Here is the latest update. I toned down the purple to be less in your face. Added a wordmark. removed the white chin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wgeddes122 Posted April 21, 2015 Share Posted April 21, 2015 looks great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whitefoot Posted April 21, 2015 Share Posted April 21, 2015 I like the white chin. Maybe post a side by side comparison of the yellow chin and the white chin.I also suggest a thicker purple outline above "Richmond" to match the thickness of the outline of "Royals" (on the white background version).The progression is great. The new mane works well. Amazing wordmark! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
j'villejags Posted April 21, 2015 Share Posted April 21, 2015 To summarize:Great stuff, man. As others have mentioned, the progress of your concept has been phenomenal. My NFL concept series (in progress) --ATL, CLE, NE, WAS done. AZ updated 04/21/23. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drakexedge Posted April 21, 2015 Share Posted April 21, 2015 I second the comment about thickening the stroke above "Richmond" but otherwise that wordmark looks great. I also liked the white chin better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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