mcrosby Posted May 25, 2016 Share Posted May 25, 2016 I've been on an MLB script kick lately. This one is rough, but you get the idea. https://twitter.com/OutOfThisWC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Broncoboy7 Posted May 25, 2016 Share Posted May 25, 2016 Here is what I think should be changed The circle: I think that should be removed, so it isn't sticking out and doesn't look funky. The line: Add a line there to make it look more like an A. Also, maybe change the outside edge color from light blue to their tan color to make it look more like their current colors. You got a nice script there! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcrosby Posted May 25, 2016 Author Share Posted May 25, 2016 https://twitter.com/OutOfThisWC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Lucas Posted May 25, 2016 Share Posted May 25, 2016 I really like where you're going with this script stuff. You hit the Braves' one out of the park and this one is not too far behind. Have you done a 'Diamondbacks' script? I think any serious concept has to eliminate "D-backs." P.S. I never had a problem with the Braves' script, but after seeing your design, I can't help but be disappointed with their current wordmark. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NICnoK Posted May 25, 2016 Share Posted May 25, 2016 I'd try working on the connection between the i and z. When I first looked at it I read it as Arirona. That said, I like it and it really dig the concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Broncoboy7 Posted May 25, 2016 Share Posted May 25, 2016 Now that's a good script, although I understand why you kept the light blue. No big deal, looks great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcrosby Posted May 25, 2016 Author Share Posted May 25, 2016 3 minutes ago, NICnoK said: I'd try working on the connection between the i and z. When I first looked at it I read it as Arirona. That said, I like it and it really dig the concept. https://twitter.com/OutOfThisWC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
keithisgood Posted May 25, 2016 Share Posted May 25, 2016 10 hours ago, mcrosby said: First, this looks fantastic. But just a thought, wouldn't it be more snake-like for the tail to come from the serif on the final a and have the Capital A instead be some sort of fang? Guess I'm just curious on how that would look. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coco1997 Posted May 25, 2016 Share Posted May 25, 2016 This is really impressive. I never really thought of the D-Backs using a script before because they're a more modern team, but you found a way to pull it off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carolingian Steamroller Posted May 25, 2016 Share Posted May 25, 2016 I would have the tail coming out of the last "a" in Arizona, this way it litteraly is a tail of the word mark. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tigerslionspistonshabs Posted May 25, 2016 Share Posted May 25, 2016 WOW. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ted Cunningham Posted May 26, 2016 Share Posted May 26, 2016 14 hours ago, NICnoK said: I'd try working on the connection between the i and z. When I first looked at it I read it as Arirona. That said, I like it and it really dig the concept. While it didn't quite read as Arirona to me, a lowercase script z is such a fun letter. Have the tail from the A go through the loop on the z! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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