Sidney Posted June 17, 2021 Author Share Posted June 17, 2021 Hi guys I'm back lol, I've been busy these days hope everybody is doing well I was looking for logos to work on College sports logo (as usual) and all of a sudden.... I came across Washburn University athletic logo. I've designed a new version of their mascot Ichabod Washburn. What you think about this face version? My next attempt will be to put the hand near the hat. C&C are appreciated. https://imgur.com/gWbaKKj Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted June 17, 2021 Author Share Posted June 17, 2021 On 6/18/2021 at 1:14 AM, Sidney said: Hi guys I'm back lol, I've been busy these days hope everybody is doing well I was looking for logos to work on College sports logo (as usual) and all of a sudden.... I came across Washburn University athletic logo. I've designed a new version of their mascot Ichabod Washburn. What you think about this face version? My next attempt will be to put the hand near the hat. C&C are appreciated. https://imgur.com/gWbaKKj My bad for posting that I can't get the link to work to show the picture here directly.... 1 Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted June 18, 2021 Author Share Posted June 18, 2021 (edited) Here is the full body on display.... What you think? Edited June 18, 2021 by officeglenn 2 Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted June 23, 2021 Author Share Posted June 23, 2021 Here is the final version of the Washburn university logo.... What you guys think? 3 Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted June 23, 2021 Author Share Posted June 23, 2021 Here is one of my rebrand I've done a long time ago about my hometown football (soccer) team Les Girondins de Bordeaux. You'll see the normal logo and the alternative? I've used elements of their past logos. It's a different feeling but I'm really happy with the result. C&C are appreciated. And the symbol on the top "The biohazard" symbol is the city icon of Bordeaux, it's "Le chiffre de Bordeaux" the shield of the port composed by 3 moons. C&C are ppreciated 2 1 Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted August 5, 2021 Author Share Posted August 5, 2021 Hi guys, I got back to a design of mine the Siena Saints, I thought I could've done better around the neck area. here are the 2 modifications what you guys are thinking? Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted August 5, 2021 Author Share Posted August 5, 2021 Here is something I've been working on lately. I've been all around google and here to see if that design has been done but I don't think.... So here is it, C&C are appreciate to keep improving the design. 5 Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted August 5, 2021 Author Share Posted August 5, 2021 I'm playing around and which one you think works better? 1 Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stumpygremlin Posted August 6, 2021 Share Posted August 6, 2021 23 hours ago, Sidney said: Hi guys, I got back to a design of mine the Siena Saints, I thought I could've done better around the neck area. here are the 2 modifications what you guys are thinking? I like the second of the new ones. That still clearly shows the collar and is just cleaner. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheGiantsFan Posted August 6, 2021 Share Posted August 6, 2021 You've got some good stuff here, my friend! You have some nice illustration skills that I probably won't have for a while I'll definitely have to borrow your Bordeaux crest idea (with credit, of course) for a future team of mine very soon. As for Chicago, I prefer Option A to emphasize "Chicago Fire" a lot better. 1 Quote BEHANCE | PORTFOLIO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted August 6, 2021 Author Share Posted August 6, 2021 58 minutes ago, TheGiantsFan said: You've got some good stuff here, my friend! You have some nice illustration skills that I probably won't have for a while I'll definitely have to borrow your Bordeaux crest idea (with credit, of course) for a future team of mine very soon. As for Chicago, I prefer Option A to emphasize "Chicago Fire" a lot better. Thanks for the kind words, I do appreciate You got some interesting stuffs aswell, the Californian league and the Cities fonts work, I like them a lot! For the Bordeaux & Chicago team just tell me what you need I'll send you PNGs or AI fold. Come PM we'll talk 1 Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted August 20, 2021 Author Share Posted August 20, 2021 Hi guys, was a bit busy this days, but I still managed to work a bit! Here is a first version of The Las Vegas Raiders, I've decided to insert gold in the logo, the shield around is half shield and half pirate flag... Tried something really different that I haven't seen. C&C are appreciated in order to improve it 5 1 Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vtgco Posted August 20, 2021 Share Posted August 20, 2021 Well, I really like the update to the head/helmet/swords! I'm not a big NFL guy, but it feels like a nice cleanup without being too unnecessarily different, and the introduction of gold is nice and not too obtrusive. That said, I think the tears and changes to the shield shape feel a bit awkward. If you're gonna do that tear effect at all, it might look better if it was on both sides and the wordmark took up more horizontal space (there's an odd gap on the left), but I honestly think it'd be better to just keep the original shield. I'm with @TheGiantsFan; I prefer the text on version A for the Fire. I really like the attempt to make a C from the Florian cross, and the color balancing is great. I'm not sure it'd be better or not, but I'd be curious to see a version without the white gap in the blue section, and with a "19" on the left side to balance the "97". Good work! Siena's logo looks excellent; the illustration is really well executed and it's a massive upgrade over the real thing! I like the old version a bit more than the updates, actually, though the second update is solid. I'd just add a little tuft of hair on the neck above the back of the collar for a bit of that texture you're going for. The thing that really bothers me is that that wordmark falls flat in comparison to your excellent logo. The white text and many outlines feels outdated (green text would be better), the font is kinda bland, and it feels like a separate color scheme from the logo. If you want the team to be green & gold, you might have to recolor the dog (more green instead of black, metallic gold instead of brown?) to make it work... Otherwise, you should go with green and black with a silver halo for the wordmark. Sorry to sound so critical; the actual ideas/illustrations are really good stuff that deserve some cleaned up composition to accompany them! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted August 20, 2021 Author Share Posted August 20, 2021 No worries @vtgco everything you said seems fair! critics is part of the forum, There are some interesting ideas you've mentioned! Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted August 21, 2021 Author Share Posted August 21, 2021 What you think about that version? 2 Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted August 21, 2021 Author Share Posted August 21, 2021 More classic Raiders, maybe I went a bit too far on my first attempt. 8 Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted September 2, 2021 Author Share Posted September 2, 2021 Hi guys, I'm back with an other design, the Carolina panthers, I've done this from my phone so there are some adjustments I'll do when I'll be able to use my graphic board. What you guys think about the design? any improvement? 3 Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MellowTheMyth Posted September 3, 2021 Share Posted September 3, 2021 Definitely would go A for the Panthers. The whiskers being in white gives the logo a bit more clarity. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted September 3, 2021 Author Share Posted September 3, 2021 I had to put the 2 options ^^wasn't really sure. So nothing in particular about the face? Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Htown1141 Posted September 3, 2021 Share Posted September 3, 2021 4 hours ago, Sidney said: I had to put the 2 options ^^wasn't really sure. So nothing in particular about the face? a couple of like perspective things are throwing me off about this. The bottom part of the jaw is a little wonky, with the far tooth being larger than the near tooth and a lack of indention to delineate where the bottom jaw starts on the far side. The far ear is a tad off too, it looks more like it's flying higher than the more pinned back shape of the fully shown ear (I think something like the original sketch might be better for that). I love the new shape, but it is now kinda missing that original "vaguely north and south carolina" shape that made the head uniquely built for the panthers. To remedy this, maybe try to incorporate something *sorta* like this shape? I have no clue if it would work and I don't think it really needs it, but using it as the nose or modifying the snout could possibly make it work. This has been my favorite series on here in a minute, and this panthers logo looks like a great refresh! And uh, white whiskers 2 Quote I have a dribbble! Thank you jaha32! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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