Ramirez#24 Posted July 1, 2003 Share Posted July 1, 2003 THE NEW ONE: http://www.geocities.com/bosox2434/avs2.jpgQuestions And Comments Please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cuss16 Posted July 1, 2003 Share Posted July 1, 2003 Looks good, love the foot! Doh! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sc49erfan15 Posted July 1, 2003 Share Posted July 1, 2003 Move over Discrim! We got another TATC designer! :laugh: I can't say I like it, but it's creative. Also, I wouldn't put "looks good" or anything like that on your message...kinda makes you look conceited...just some advice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted July 1, 2003 Share Posted July 1, 2003 good advice 9erfan :: anyways, my biggest suggestion is to be much more creative with your designs, almost anyone can slap a logo on RC's template, color in some template areas and say they're a designer. I know you're new but its just some advice to gain some respect from the "elders" of the board (and no im not talking about age, im a board "elder" and im 16 years old ) keep working at it, you'll catch on. GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ramirez#24 Posted July 1, 2003 Author Share Posted July 1, 2003 Thanks guys for the advice. Ill take all that into concideration when I make one tommorow morning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cuss16 Posted July 1, 2003 Share Posted July 1, 2003 I think the foot looks good. Doh! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-kj Posted July 1, 2003 Share Posted July 1, 2003 It's certainly... interesting. Not my style, but interesting.You're new to this, apparently, so I'll make a suggestion or two.First and foremost, try hard to make it look like something that would be worn on the ice. Yours, for example, has the current Avs logo on the sleeves, but it's out of place, and not rotated correctly. Also, make it a complete jersey, by adding a player name and sleeve numbers.If you have a hockey jersey, lay it down like it is in the picture, and note how everything lays out.Takes awhile to get there sometimes, but I'm sure with some work, you'll be as good as GMS and the "elders." Buy some t-shirts and stuff at KJ Shop! KJ Branded | Behance portfolio POTD 2013-08-22 On 7/14/2012 at 2:20 AM, tajmccall said: When it comes to style, ya'll really should listen to Kev. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeppermintRecords104 Posted July 1, 2003 Share Posted July 1, 2003 also i noticed your mountian doesn't make it all the way to the side...... just makes sure you make your jersey complete... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STL FANATIC Posted July 1, 2003 Share Posted July 1, 2003 GMS he did a bit more than filling in template areas. He drew a mountain across the jersey, I'd call it creative. It's a very interesting idea, but I dunno if I like it. JUSTIN STRIEBEL | PORTFOLIO | RESUME | CONTACT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted July 1, 2003 Share Posted July 1, 2003 i didnt mean like thats all he did, i was just making an example of what not to do, id say its creative, but needs something else... :: GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ramirez#24 Posted July 1, 2003 Author Share Posted July 1, 2003 Thanks guys for all the help! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KCScout76 Posted July 1, 2003 Share Posted July 1, 2003 Very nice concept _ I like the design. Touch up those mountains and thin those lines down, other than that very good job Ramirez#24."We've got a winner" Kansas City Scouts (CHL) Orr Cup Champions 2010, 2019, 2021 St. Joseph Pony Express (ULL) 2023 Champions Kansas City Cattle (CL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Discrim Posted July 1, 2003 Share Posted July 1, 2003 move over indeed! first off, what is an ave? i know what an av is, but what's an ave? :: i am sort of angered that u used the foot, only cus i hate that thing as a crest, nothin personal. you might wanna tone down the mountains too, to where the striping at the bottom of a jersey usually is. i did a UTEP hockey jersey like that once, looked great. A strong mind gets high off success, a weak mind gets high off bull Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saintsfan Posted July 1, 2003 Share Posted July 1, 2003 Personally I like this design- would make a neat alternate for the Avs. I said on another thread recently that I reckon with alternates you should have a licence to go a bit wild- alternates should be there for designers to be a bit adventurous rather than just be a way of showcasing a third color in your color scheme. (Although the white lakers uni is pretty cool!) 2011/12 WFL Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ramirez#24 Posted July 1, 2003 Author Share Posted July 1, 2003 I updated it with most of the suggestions you guys gave(i posted the link in the original post).Thanks for the feedback! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jlucas4092 Posted July 3, 2003 Share Posted July 3, 2003 Not bad. Personally, I love the Avs current home sweater though, so I'd be interested to see your away sweater.BTW, it's AVS, not AVES. Sorry, just a pet peeve from an Avs fan. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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