OB33 Posted August 30, 2006 Share Posted August 30, 2006 Last year some of you may have remembered my shark logo for my EFL team, the Columbus Sharks. I already showed the basic unis on the EFL page but I added a couple more touches and thought maybe I could get some advice on what I could change. This year I kept the logo more or less the same the gills are now blue and the blue has darkened from a bright royal blue to a more common navy, primarily to add more pop to the neon green. Also tried to add some more design to the jersey by adding the logo/wordmark to the collar and putting gills on the side.(I know, no helmets just try and imagine for now)C&C #CHOMPCHOMPCHOMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fonz Posted August 30, 2006 Share Posted August 30, 2006 Pretty cool how you made a shark out of Sharks. I'd just recommend darkening up the green. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DomTheAthlete29 Posted August 30, 2006 Share Posted August 30, 2006 I like this concept, I would leave the neon green, but darken up the blue to like a navy almost. Logo is very cool looking. Someone be a World Champ, please!Fantasy Football Keeper League.....PM me if you want to join!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sideshowbob Posted August 30, 2006 Share Posted August 30, 2006 i really like it, i like the shade of green, i think that maybe you should put a thicker blue outline around the logo New and Improved Adrenaline Online:http://adrenalinedesignstudio.synthasite.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianVlietDesign Posted August 30, 2006 Share Posted August 30, 2006 The logo is not too bad, could be better though. But, the colors chosen need to go. I'm not feeling the Purple and Lime green combo. The green is just too bright. However, I do like your uniform design. NYCFC - MLS CUP CHAMPIONS - 2021 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DJR118 Posted August 30, 2006 Share Posted August 30, 2006 i like the wordmark but i think it needs to be thicker - and overall it reminds a bit too much of the seahawks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tBBP Posted August 30, 2006 Share Posted August 30, 2006 Brilliant. Simply brilliant. A perfect example of how the K.I.S.S. method and abstraction can work together (speaking of the logo). People think shark, they think vicious, "in your face" almost. Neon green certainly does that. it also, for some reason, adds a dimension of "speed", and sharks, as we all know, usually don't or can't stop moving, and when they move, they move rather quickly.It all works for me. just darken the blue just a tad lil bit and there you have it. *Disclaimer: I am not an authoritative expert on stuff...I just do a lot of reading and research and keep in close connect with a bunch of people who are authoritative experts on stuff. || dribbble || Behance || Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BostonBlazer Posted August 30, 2006 Share Posted August 30, 2006 The color scheme and logo are great. I'd make the letters in the logo bolder though. http://www.reverbnation.com/richardyerardihttp://www.ahlfans.net Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Telemundo219 Posted August 30, 2006 Share Posted August 30, 2006 That's a cool concept but not the green. Add like a cool blue. Plus, do you still have the football uni template? I was looking all over for that. College sports as we know them are just about dead. The lid is off on all the corruption that taints just about every major program and every decision that the schools or the NCAA make is only about money, money, and more money. We'll have three 16+ team super-conferences sooner rather than later, killing much of the regional flair and traditional rivalries that make college sports unique and showing the door to any school that doesn't bring money to the table in the process. Pretty soon the smaller schools are going to have to consider forming their own sanctioning body to keep the true spirit of college sports alive because the NCAA will only get worse in it's excess from here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lumbergh Posted August 30, 2006 Share Posted August 30, 2006 The logo is not too bad, could be better though. But, the colors chosen need to go. I'm not feeling the Purple and Lime green combo. The green is just too bright. However, I do like your uniform design. I believe the colors are BLUE and neon green, no purple in there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnnyFriedRice Posted August 30, 2006 Share Posted August 30, 2006 I love the neon green. I posted a shark-inspired concept months ago and used neon as well. It does pop. Plain and simple. Some people here didn't like it then, either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OB33 Posted August 31, 2006 Author Share Posted August 31, 2006 Darkened the blue a bit, I realized yesterday how much a color can change from monitor to monitor it went from what I thought was a navy on the PC to an almost royal on my laptop. Haven't had a chance to really work on the logo yet and I'm still learning the ins and outs of vectors so I'll see if I can make any improvements.And for those that don't like the green--I hear you and fully understand what you're saying, but I'm not changing it. Not that I disrespect your opinion I just really wanted to use this color on something. #CHOMPCHOMPCHOMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frenchie Posted August 31, 2006 Share Posted August 31, 2006 Holy !!!!Now THIS is Creative!!!Loving it...This has to be the best hybrid Wordmark-Logo I have ever seen.I used to make cartoons out of people's names' letters, (for fun with the kids) and I totally dig this one...I totally respect your decision on not changiing the green, while I would personnally, use just a little less, at the risk of copying the seahawks. The lime green is one of my favourite colours a can complement almost any dark colour.I would love to see (I may even try it for myself-not publishing) switching the blue and green in the logo/wordmark.And I think adding some thickness to the letters would just make it look even MORE like the sahpe of the Shhark, give it a shot.Again, one of hte most creative concepts I've seen in years...AWESOME @Frenchie_TO Owner of the Rochester Americans of the MLH Owner of the Toronto Frenchies of the GCFHL6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Le Québécois Posted September 1, 2006 Share Posted September 1, 2006 simply genius.... the colors and the woodmark...the only thing though, the pelvic fins (both sides of the shark) are located in front of the dorsal fin...so my suggestion would be to illustrate the pelvic fins between the ''H'' and the ''A'' instead of between the ''A'' and the ''R''....other than this, the way you illustrated a shark with the woodmark is very creative... well done! Le QUÉBÉCOIS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StefOn Posted September 1, 2006 Share Posted September 1, 2006 The logo might be somewhat inspired from this one... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Le Québécois Posted September 1, 2006 Share Posted September 1, 2006 Oh? Busted? Le QUÉBÉCOIS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OB33 Posted September 1, 2006 Author Share Posted September 1, 2006 The logo might be somewhat inspired from this one... I had a feeling that might be brought up, to be honest the first time I ever saw that logo was this summer in a surf magazine that I got while I was out in California. And as you can tell from the original thread I made the logo back in summer '05.With that said, I'm fairly sure I've convinced none of you that it wasn't inspired by that but I can assure you that I had never seen that logo before. #CHOMPCHOMPCHOMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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