Jump to content

Fantasy Football Logo


geofferson

Recommended Posts

Hi Everyone! :flagcanada:

I drew this logo for a touch football team of mine. I am pretty happy with it, but would like to make it better. Please tell me what you think, and what I can do to make it better. I am open to all criticism and will update my logo as often as possible.

Thank you!

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Amazing work, my only suggestion would be to simplify the neck a little bit. I think when the logo gets real small it would look kind of whacky. But other than that minor issue this is great.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

"Silly bitch, your weapons cannot harm me! Don't you know who the :censored: I am? I'm the Juggernaut, Bitch!"

Wait, wrong character.

Seriously, I like where you're going with this logo. Issues with the wordmark notwithstanding, I think it needs an extra layer of white trim between the lettering and the background to really make it pop.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

OB33 - Thank you very much for your suggestion! I definitely agree with you. I will tweak and play around with the neck when I revise the logo. That was just the constructive criticism I was looking for!

bucfan56 - LOL I totally didn?t notice that he looked like a character out of Shakespeare. Great observation! I must admit, your comment made me laugh pretty hard. Thank you.

Joshuamings - Thank you very much for pointing out the similarity. I am a huge fan of Nitro, and his work was used as a starting point. Your observation has informed me that I need to put in more time to make it my own. Afterall, I want this logo to be my own. I still have a lot of work to do. The last thing I want is to plagiarize Nitro?s hard work.

Moser316 - Ohh man? Classic line! LOL Casting Vinnie Jones as the Juggernaut was Hollywood gold! I really like your idea of adding an extra layer of white trim. You will definitely see that in my next revision B)

Thank you guys! I hope the comments and criticism keep on coming...

:grin:

Link to comment
Share on other sites

I think the hand on the left should be flipped, so the palm is facing down (looking like it could slam down and crush you) or else maybe in a fist, crushing something. I also would like to see some points of reference in there (the tops of buildings maybe?) that show how huge the guy is.

Edit: Added some more ideas.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Wow, awesome work you have here. This is just a suggestion, but maybe you could have him crushing a football with the right (his left) hand. I like the detail in his palm and I don't want that covered up, but who knows a football might work. Your color choice is perfect, but I'm not feeling the wordmark anyway. I think the wordmark needs to be bolder to match the sentinel. Great work!

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Archived

This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.

Guest
This topic is now closed to further replies.
×
×
  • Create New...

Important Information

By using this site, you agree to our Terms of Use.