geofferson Posted October 27, 2006 Share Posted October 27, 2006 Hi Everyone! I drew this logo for a touch football team of mine. I am pretty happy with it, but would like to make it better. Please tell me what you think, and what I can do to make it better. I am open to all criticism and will update my logo as often as possible. Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OB33 Posted October 27, 2006 Share Posted October 27, 2006 Amazing work, my only suggestion would be to simplify the neck a little bit. I think when the logo gets real small it would look kind of whacky. But other than that minor issue this is great. #CHOMPCHOMPCHOMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FiddySicks Posted October 27, 2006 Share Posted October 27, 2006 Looks to me like he's either super angry or reciting some lines from Shakespere. AHHHHH!!!!! TO BE OR NOT TO BE!!!!!! Either way I like. On 11/19/2012 at 7:23 PM, oldschoolvikings said: She’s still half convinced “Chris Creamer” is a porn site.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mings Posted October 27, 2006 Share Posted October 27, 2006 The wordmark reminds me of Nitro's DC Sentinels logo.Just in style, not saying you copied it. I don't think he ever released that logo on this board anyways. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moser316 Posted October 27, 2006 Share Posted October 27, 2006 "Silly bitch, your weapons cannot harm me! Don't you know who the :censored: I am? I'm the Juggernaut, Bitch!"Wait, wrong character.Seriously, I like where you're going with this logo. Issues with the wordmark notwithstanding, I think it needs an extra layer of white trim between the lettering and the background to really make it pop. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geofferson Posted October 27, 2006 Author Share Posted October 27, 2006 OB33 - Thank you very much for your suggestion! I definitely agree with you. I will tweak and play around with the neck when I revise the logo. That was just the constructive criticism I was looking for!bucfan56 - LOL I totally didn?t notice that he looked like a character out of Shakespeare. Great observation! I must admit, your comment made me laugh pretty hard. Thank you.Joshuamings - Thank you very much for pointing out the similarity. I am a huge fan of Nitro, and his work was used as a starting point. Your observation has informed me that I need to put in more time to make it my own. Afterall, I want this logo to be my own. I still have a lot of work to do. The last thing I want is to plagiarize Nitro?s hard work.Moser316 - Ohh man? Classic line! LOL Casting Vinnie Jones as the Juggernaut was Hollywood gold! I really like your idea of adding an extra layer of white trim. You will definitely see that in my next revision Thank you guys! I hope the comments and criticism keep on coming... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sideshowbob Posted October 27, 2006 Share Posted October 27, 2006 that logo is insane! New and Improved Adrenaline Online:http://adrenalinedesignstudio.synthasite.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyclopsis Joe Posted October 27, 2006 Share Posted October 27, 2006 Man, just hope that no one in the league picks the name "Wolverines".edit: no one is two words! I don't speak for democrats, democrats don't speak for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jezus_Ghoti Posted October 27, 2006 Share Posted October 27, 2006 I think the hand on the left should be flipped, so the palm is facing down (looking like it could slam down and crush you) or else maybe in a fist, crushing something. I also would like to see some points of reference in there (the tops of buildings maybe?) that show how huge the guy is.Edit: Added some more ideas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chief. Posted October 27, 2006 Share Posted October 27, 2006 Wow, awesome work you have here. This is just a suggestion, but maybe you could have him crushing a football with the right (his left) hand. I like the detail in his palm and I don't want that covered up, but who knows a football might work. Your color choice is perfect, but I'm not feeling the wordmark anyway. I think the wordmark needs to be bolder to match the sentinel. Great work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nwtrailtrekker Posted October 28, 2006 Share Posted October 28, 2006 why cant i see it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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