oneorange Posted March 8, 2007 Share Posted March 8, 2007 Here is the second concept team that I have been working on: The Oklahoma Firebirds. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
espo Posted March 8, 2007 Share Posted March 8, 2007 The logo is good but the uniforms are bland. Try some striping that matches the colors of the logo with the current color scheme on the uniforms. I think it would help a lot. Also striping on the helmet might work too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moser316 Posted March 8, 2007 Share Posted March 8, 2007 Mullet and Trans Am sold seperately In all seriousness, nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koizim Posted March 8, 2007 Share Posted March 8, 2007 One way to improve these jerseys would be to have a wings extending from the armpits to the center of each shoulder. Engine, Engine, Number Nine, on the New York transit line, If my train goes off the track, pick it up! Pick it up! Pick it up! Back on the scene, crispy and clean, You can try, but then why, 'cause you can't intervene. We be the outcast, down for the settle. Won't play the rock, won't play the pebble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JCC Posted March 8, 2007 Share Posted March 8, 2007 Nice work, I love it. I think it would be better if you add more red on the main set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted March 8, 2007 Share Posted March 8, 2007 Its a good idea, but the home and away need a lot more red Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oneorange Posted March 8, 2007 Author Share Posted March 8, 2007 Mullet and Trans Am sold seperately In all seriousness, nice work.The Mullet/Trans Am life is still going strong in most parts of Oklahoma. I'll personally pass on the Mullet - but a smooth looking Trans Am on route 66 is what life is all about. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EJ_Barlik Posted March 8, 2007 Share Posted March 8, 2007 looks good to me 5-time Defending NL East Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JBPerry Posted March 8, 2007 Share Posted March 8, 2007 One nitpick, don't use Copperplate Gothic <embed src="http://www.clocklink.com/clocks/5005-Blue.swf?TimeZone=CST&TimeFormat=hhmmssTT" width="180" height="60" wmode="transparent" type="application/x-shockwave-flash">joshuabperry@sbcglobal.netMy Webpage Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cola Posted March 8, 2007 Share Posted March 8, 2007 Definitely needs more red in the home and away, after all, they are the FIREbirds...and please lose the gradient- that never works for a sports logo nor would end up on a uni. Other than that, the design was executed well and it's a great start.EDIT: on second look, the laces on the football are POORLY executed...I think you could clean that up a lot. It may be minor but it kinda shows you got lazy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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