sideshowbob Posted April 9, 2007 Share Posted April 9, 2007 Okay, I'm really stuck with this one. It is for a team called the snappers, probably a hockey team. As you can see, this really has no direction so I figured you guys could help me give it some. I also need some color ideas along with design ideas, currently I tried the maryland terps colors but it's not reall working out. If you got any ideas, let's hear em...UPDATE BELOW New and Improved Adrenaline Online:http://adrenalinedesignstudio.synthasite.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1991 Posted April 9, 2007 Share Posted April 9, 2007 you might want to use some dark outline color such as black, dark blue,etc. just something to make it stand out a little. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beansdooma Posted April 9, 2007 Share Posted April 9, 2007 Tilt the head up to get rid of the annoying white space between it and the shell. After that, add some more angular lines and make the outlines change in size, and like 1991 said, add a dark outline too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sideshowbob Posted April 9, 2007 Author Share Posted April 9, 2007 update, added blue outline and tilted the head, definelty looking better, thanks for the suggestions, anybody else got any ideas? New and Improved Adrenaline Online:http://adrenalinedesignstudio.synthasite.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leggman01 Posted April 9, 2007 Share Posted April 9, 2007 use your black outline to shade the areas on the feet and the underside of the shell (eliminating the 2nd shade of brown, and simplifying a little - also, fill the yellow to the right of it's mouth with the black underside of the shell - work on getting the perspective of the mouth & eyes right...the eyes look like they are on a completely different plane than the mouth and nostril holes - also, the back leg seems a bit oddi'd also add some claws to the snappers feet...snapping turtles have pretty nasty claws Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sideshowbob Posted April 10, 2007 Author Share Posted April 10, 2007 okay, thanks alot leggman, your ideas helped A TON! two version here, one with claws and one without, personally I like the one with claws but I wanted to see what you guys thought. I'm going to start a wordmark today and pick out a city. I've decided this will be a hockey team. If you guys have any more ideas, keep em coming, they are definetly helping! New and Improved Adrenaline Online:http://adrenalinedesignstudio.synthasite.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cola Posted April 10, 2007 Share Posted April 10, 2007 how about some texture on the shell and legs? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sideshowbob Posted April 11, 2007 Author Share Posted April 11, 2007 okay, one more update for the day, I decided the team will be located in Hudson Valley New York after a little resaerch taught me that the snapping turtle is the official state reptile of the state of New York. Your comments have done wonders for this comments, what do you guys think so far? New and Improved Adrenaline Online:http://adrenalinedesignstudio.synthasite.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leggman01 Posted April 11, 2007 Share Posted April 11, 2007 while i like the addition of a pattern on the shell, this doesn't do it for me - the head is still oddly mis-shapen/out of kilter and the back leg looks almost disconnected...it's a good start, though, and i do like the choice of font for the wordmark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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