cyandlux Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 You can comment on the layout and elements but NOT the actual logo, that C&C is over. I need some help on the layout....whatcha think?ˇˇˇˇˇˇˇˇˇˇˇlook down for updatesˇˇˇˇˇˇˇˇˇˇˇ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gordie_delini Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 I can't really tell - it's too small Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted June 21, 2007 Author Share Posted June 21, 2007 Fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drevel Posted June 22, 2007 Share Posted June 22, 2007 I like it. It is really well organized & the logos are broken up onto different pages so they are not overcrowded & take away from each other.What does it say at the bottom of each page? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrAsterisk Posted June 22, 2007 Share Posted June 22, 2007 As far as the layout is concerned, there are two things I dislike. One is the thick black line on the bottom of the first page. I understand the reasoning to set apart the title page, but I think it would look better in the same style as the others. Also, all of the pages look like they have some consistent "theme", except for the fourth one, which seems like a miscellaneous listing. I don't know if there's any feasible thing that can be done about this, but it's just the smallest bit irksome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davidson Posted June 22, 2007 Share Posted June 22, 2007 think you need to go back to teh logo c&c. that logo is boss-eyed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted June 22, 2007 Author Share Posted June 22, 2007 think you need to go back to teh logo c&c. that logo is boss-eyed....and in English??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davidson Posted June 22, 2007 Share Posted June 22, 2007 layout is fair enough. the logo looks sqint tho. i would spend more time on that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sideshowbob Posted June 22, 2007 Share Posted June 22, 2007 I think it looks great, very proffesional New and Improved Adrenaline Online:http://adrenalinedesignstudio.synthasite.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted June 22, 2007 Author Share Posted June 22, 2007 Ive moved all of the unis and hats on to the same page and the fields onto a seperate page. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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SDX Posted June 24, 2007 Share Posted June 24, 2007 Really like that, how will it be bound together? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted June 24, 2007 Author Share Posted June 24, 2007 Really like that, how will it be bound together?I was thinking of getting something from Staples with a clear front, like a presentation folder in black perhaps. How many should I make? I was thinking Superintendant and principal......should I make more? For all people on the board? Vice Principals? Coaches? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted June 30, 2007 Share Posted June 30, 2007 The layout is nice. I understand you may not be looking for critique on the logos for now--but I honestly think you can do better with the logos. I like what you've got going though, for what it's worth. But if you say your high school is as great as it is, I think you can come up with something much better than what you've got. Sure it's going to take time, but as big of a project as this seems to take on, especially personally for you because you take pride in your time at PRHS, and if you feel its that worth it you should definitely put a lot more time, effort, and research into it. To put it in lamense terms, for the moment these logos aren't owning up to as much time and effort you've put into the description and layout. The bearcat itself looks really flat. Not enough depth. It looks very immobilized. Build on that. Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted June 30, 2007 Share Posted June 30, 2007 You may not be looking for critique, but for what it's worth, no offense meant, but that 'PR' mark lacks creativity, looks uninspired, and just does simply not look good. You might want to work on that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
averyj Posted June 30, 2007 Share Posted June 30, 2007 You can comment on the layout and elements but NOT the actual logo, that C&C is over. I need some help on the layout....whatcha think?ˇˇˇˇˇˇˇˇˇˇˇlook down for updatesˇˇˇˇˇˇˇˇˇˇˇYou may not be looking for critique, but for what it's worth, no offense meant, but that 'PR' mark lacks creativity, looks uninspired, and just does simply not look good. You might want to work on that.He's not, cy said it in the first post. You know, I rarely visit ccslsc anymore. I really should fix that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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