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Evan, I know this is new for you, but this is a good start. It's a simple form with a dynamic flow and a consistant style. It's not clip-arty and it's recognizable from a distance.

There's some stuff to clean up, though. The helmet looks like an old-time football helmet. The scarf needs to be more recognizable as a scarf, because it's kinda big in the front. The font in the wordmark is a good "feel" for Aviators, but the "via" kind of blend together. Try breaking those serifs apart.

I think after another round of playing with it, you'll have something. I'd like to see that.

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well thanks for the comments dudes. Trich, i've decided to try to work out and clean up the logo. The word mark in the I is seperated from the A and the head (helmet like object or aviating cap not sure what the name of it is) is flatter and is more proportional to the size of the head. The scarf in the front has less black as the outline to help a little. Still though, if anyone has anymore suggestions to make this the best logo I can make it feel free to tell me. Anyways, without further ado....

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alright i brightened the red up a bit, and i designed a new "chicago" font and such. I tried to seperate the i but it sorta chopped the flow of the script. Thanks for the suggestion though.

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i thihk there needs to be a small space in between the 'v' and 'i'. It kinda looks like avrators, for some reason i read the 'v', but the the part of the v' connects to the 'i', formng a cursive 'r', avrators.

I just read it Airators... which would be fine, but I don't think this is a logo for a bunch of lawn care specialists.

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skarf is too thick in the front. Helmet still looks like football. Why is his skin so funny colored?

Her probably just wants that shade, and so the skin just gets a little transformed.

The helmet should not include an ear cover. It should cut infront and behind the ear, and then have the strap attach.

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I like the logo, you did a nice job. I think with a few little tweaks this could be a really world-class logo.

The skin tone looks like he is a living-dead zombie. Add some more red to that tone, and he will look more alive, I think. If you loe the color as is, go for it.

The helmet - I TOTALLY see what you are going for, and i think it looks like a genuine old pilot's helmet. Problem is, it kinda does look like a old football helmet. Try adding some flight goggles to the top of his helmet, this may make all the difference.

Your latest work mark set is very nice.I like the one with the grey, witht he overall black outline. I'd also like to see, one similar, but with a thick white outline around the letters themselves. You did an awesome job altering the textto allow the word 'aviator' to be legible.

The scarf is indeed a little thick. Maybe thin it up in the front, and add some black line to make it look folded up, or 'scrunched' under his chin.

I love this logo, and think you are very close. I know my feedback is long, and sounds like I think you should change everything, but thats not true. I reccomend, because I like.

Good job, Evan!

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thanks for the comments dudes, I will work hard to make this the best logo I can make it. The goggles might take some time to produce but i will try to get them on there, or at least attempt and show with what they looked like. And tahts about it for now, keep posted!

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