Nick in England Posted February 28, 2010 Share Posted February 28, 2010 Here's where I am at so far...C&C please. I'm not finished though... I am trying to track down a vector version of the Don't Tread On Me snake logo. Not sure if this is a proprietary Nike logo or not... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted February 28, 2010 Share Posted February 28, 2010 Nice job. You modeled it after the current one, but the one now is wrong. The stripes are the wrong colour. Should be swapped. @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rentz Posted February 28, 2010 Share Posted February 28, 2010 That looks pretty good! Bit bizarre seeing blue stripes and stars on red (I know there is a US Soccer logo with that but it still doesn't seem right to me). I would make the ribbon-thing (not sure what it's technically called) bigger and perhaps overlap the shield. Of course I don't really know the 'rules' of soccer logos so my advice may not be very good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nick in England Posted March 1, 2010 Author Share Posted March 1, 2010 Based on C&C so far here are two updates. I'm still after the Snake logo in vector format - which will complete the somewhat barer designs of the first two.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cola Posted March 1, 2010 Share Posted March 1, 2010 Last update is looking good although I think you forgot a few lines and strokes on the banner left side. I would also decrease the size of the stars- they are really tight in that space. Also, why not go 13 stripes if you are already at 11? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ESTONES6 Posted March 1, 2010 Share Posted March 1, 2010 How do you feel about adding cold into the crest somewhere? I believe the current one has some gold right? SAINT IGNATIUS WILDCATS | CLEVELAND BROWNS | CLEVELAND CAVALIERS | CLEVELAND INDIANS | THE OHIO STATE BUCKEYES Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aawagner011 Posted March 1, 2010 Share Posted March 1, 2010 I think it looks great. However, I would drop the word soccer from it. Maybe just United States? The newest update with the crest and sash integrated together is a good look. I could envision something where the market version of the fan's shirt could have the Don't Tread on Me slogan in the crest, but maybe the player's version has the name of the opponent. Just a thought. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
illwauk Posted March 1, 2010 Share Posted March 1, 2010 I would make the colored pieces of the stars grey/silver instead of red. I also think that if you're gonna have "don't tread on me" worked into the design, you should probably try to find way to work a snake into the crest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nick in England Posted March 1, 2010 Author Share Posted March 1, 2010 I also think that if you're gonna have "don't tread on me" worked into the design, you should probably try to find way to work a snake into the crest.see my post above Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nick in England Posted March 1, 2010 Author Share Posted March 1, 2010 so - I am trying to come up with a snakes head that might suit this logo. My plan would be to overlay it on the stripe layer.I'me hopeless as drawing - so your help honing this early snake attempt would be useful... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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