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its still too boxy and rigid. loosen up the lines and it could be really cool. also, i think that it needs jsut a little something to differentiate it from the current head. I know they are different but the colors and such are a little too similar. add a little flair or something bold/unique and this could be really nice

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Your problem is the mouth/muzzle area...it's really jagged looking and looks completely flat. You need to try and make the whole logo look more 3D. I would give suggestions, but I'm not that great at logos myself, so I don't have much advice.

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In a word, no. You're not really on the right track, but if you're serious about doing more original logos in the future, I can show you the process. Everyone works a little differently, but I can give you the basics and you can adapt it to work for you over time as you get better. Just PM me sometime if that interests you.

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