cohenj21 Posted June 22, 2012 Share Posted June 22, 2012 Ducks look much better. Tampa honestly looks kind of tacky. If you want the lightning bolt emphasized, you could use it as a side stripe or on the bottom of the jersey but right now I can't see those being worn. I like the direction you're going, but it's a little over the top right now. Hope this helps! "Those who believe in telekinetics, raise my hand." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hockey week Posted June 22, 2012 Share Posted June 22, 2012 good lord! Kill those tampa jerseys with fire!Seriously though, that would never be acceptable in the hockey world. Plus, the logo would be halfway under their armpits or on their sides, so it wouldn't be all that practical either I'll respect any opinion that you can defend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackBolt3 Posted June 22, 2012 Author Share Posted June 22, 2012 good lord! Kill those tampa jerseys with fire!Seriously though, that would never be acceptable in the hockey world. Plus, the logo would be halfway under their armpits or on their sides, so it wouldn't be all that practical eitherRelax, relax. It was all a joke. The real jerseys will be up soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackBolt3 Posted June 23, 2012 Author Share Posted June 23, 2012 Real uniforms! Features a subliminated lightning pattern down the shoulders. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patchey13 Posted June 23, 2012 Share Posted June 23, 2012 You should really work on cleaning up your presentation. You have random splotches of colour all around the jerseys, missing chunks on the templates, stripes cutting off out of nowhere and the image itself is very pixelated. Save as a .png file to prevent compression of the image. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cohenj21 Posted June 23, 2012 Share Posted June 23, 2012 Much better lol. The color scheme is really good, but for me, the bolt around the collar is overkill. Other than that, good job. "Those who believe in telekinetics, raise my hand." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackBolt3 Posted June 25, 2012 Author Share Posted June 25, 2012 New week, back to work with.....4. Phoenix CoyotesCurrent color scheme, with purple. New logos with new moon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cohenj21 Posted June 25, 2012 Share Posted June 25, 2012 I love the new logos, but I think the jerseys have too many things going on. I think there is too much purple on the home jerseys, I would definitely cut down on that. Road jersey is better than the home, try and model your amount of purple off of the road jersey. Again, new logo looks really good and I am looking forward to the Islanders. "Those who believe in telekinetics, raise my hand." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dbroalexander Posted June 25, 2012 Share Posted June 25, 2012 Cut the use of purple down a little bit and maybe make it darker... also put the black and maroon outlines on the circle above the coyote so he's a part of the logo, not just on top of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackBolt3 Posted June 27, 2012 Author Share Posted June 27, 2012 5. Florida Panthers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fox Posted June 27, 2012 Share Posted June 27, 2012 That Coyotes primary logo is fantastic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wildwing64 Posted June 27, 2012 Share Posted June 27, 2012 Update 2:Made duck foot primary and added more white to home.If you're gonna make the D-foot the primary and have diagonal striping on the front, you need to switch the direction of the striping. The D sorta feels like it's flying upwards in that direction while the stripes are going down the other way, and as a result your design is filled out on one side and you've got an empty space of nothing on the other.Also, I don't think the D-foot works well at all in that colour scheme. There is contrast between eggplant and jade but not enough to make them both suitable for this particular logo. I'd recommend replacing the purple background with black, and maybe swapping yellow and jade around. PotD: 24/08/2017 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dbroalexander Posted June 27, 2012 Share Posted June 27, 2012 The Panthers need red.... I personally don't like the double blue for the Panthers.. but that's just personaly opinion, But... if I look past that it's actually a pretty neat concept Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackBolt3 Posted June 28, 2012 Author Share Posted June 28, 2012 6. Philadelphia FlyersNothing groundbreaking here. Just a simple look for a team that has never changed there logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan33 Posted June 28, 2012 Share Posted June 28, 2012 Looks good but you might want to make the logos a little smaller. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackBolt3 Posted June 29, 2012 Author Share Posted June 29, 2012 Last concept before a vacation,7. Buffalo Sabres Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wILL-INI Posted June 29, 2012 Share Posted June 29, 2012 The sabres crest is a little complex, I also think your shoulder numbers are a little low. There is also the yellow color issue, on the Wordmark and the numbers you have a different color yellow going on. On the stripe that goes around to the back, at the bottom does it touch the bottom, and why does the very bottom stripe then get cut off? It should be solid all the way through, it looks goofy. One final issue, the type of the wordmark. Using the same font as your logo? It could use some help... Sorry to rip into it, it's pretty solid, just a couple little things. The biggest, the color issue. It's a sign of a rushed idea.*on the issue of presentation, we can all read size 18 font just fine. size down your words a little, they over power your actual design. "Classic" does not mean it gets a free pass for being bad design.Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigBubba Posted June 29, 2012 Share Posted June 29, 2012 There are two shades of yellow on that Sabres jersey and two shades of burgundy on that Coyotes jersey. Also, a silver NOB would be hard to read on a navy jersey (Sabres). Nobody cares about your humungous-big signature. PotD: 29/1/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackBolt3 Posted June 29, 2012 Author Share Posted June 29, 2012 Ugh, it's the same color on my screen. Sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dbroalexander Posted July 3, 2012 Share Posted July 3, 2012 I don't like the Sabres jerseys... look like they'd fit better with the blues Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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