AnthPollock Posted July 18, 2012 Share Posted July 18, 2012 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
undead Posted July 18, 2012 Share Posted July 18, 2012 Lookin' real good. Portfoliobobschultz6' class="bbc_url">@bobschultz6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted July 18, 2012 Share Posted July 18, 2012 OH wow, I REALLY like that. That could very well be a professional team. Great job man. @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raymie Posted July 18, 2012 Share Posted July 18, 2012 We're getting a USL Pro team next year. Please submit this to them! It's an awesome design in awesome colors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnthPollock Posted July 18, 2012 Author Share Posted July 18, 2012 Thanks for the great comments guys, here's a little update Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted July 18, 2012 Share Posted July 18, 2012 We're getting a USL Pro team next year. Please submit this to them! It's an awesome design in awesome colors.Actually, if you email them with a good presentation, this might work. I'm doing logos for an NPSL(4th tier), that will most likely move up later, but it'd be cool to see this logo used @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnthPollock Posted July 18, 2012 Author Share Posted July 18, 2012 Thanks for the information, I might have to give that a try! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted July 18, 2012 Share Posted July 18, 2012 The logo is solid overall, but there are two things that look awkward to me. One is that it looks like the tip of the lizard's tail has been cut off. The other is that it looks like that serif-tail has just been awkwardly tacked on to the S. An idea I have that could fix both would be to curve the lizard's tail downward, so that it curves into the crest rather than meeting it abruptly. Then, instead of the tail on the S you have now, do a sand-coloured swish under the word "Lizards", tapering to a point on the right. That would leave you with the essence of both things you're doing right now, plus it would look like the lizard's tail is really long, running down the side of the crest and then re-emerging (albeit different-coloured) beneath the wordmark. Just something to experiment with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnthPollock Posted July 19, 2012 Author Share Posted July 19, 2012 Fixed the tail Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AtticusFinch1 Posted July 19, 2012 Share Posted July 19, 2012 Love this design. Love the colors as well. Excellent. My criteria for logos is very simple - would I purchase merchandise with this logo on it. I would be all about this one and I don't watch soccer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GFB Posted July 19, 2012 Share Posted July 19, 2012 Pretty good, though you should either decide if you want the S to form a tail or a serif. Right now you have both and it's troubling me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted July 19, 2012 Share Posted July 19, 2012 Pretty good, though you should either decide if you want the S to form a tail or a serif. Right now you have both and it's troubling me.+1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted July 20, 2012 Share Posted July 20, 2012 Everything looks good. My only nit-pick would be how the wordmark rests in a black rectangular area that arches, but the letters in the word do not slant on that same arch. Rather they just stand straight up and down. For example, I think the L in Lizard should slant leftward, the A should slant a little leftward, the Z very little leftward. Then the A can stand straight up and down because it's in the center. Then on the right side the RDS should slant to the right with the S slanting the most, just so the letters matches the flow of the black rectangle they rest in. It's minor and maybe it's just me that thinks this is a good idea. Overall, it's very solid. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnthPollock Posted July 28, 2012 Author Share Posted July 28, 2012 Hows this as another idea? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted July 28, 2012 Share Posted July 28, 2012 I think the new one is spot-on! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cohenj21 Posted July 29, 2012 Share Posted July 29, 2012 They both look great but I prefer the original. You couldn't really go wrong with either, though. "Those who believe in telekinetics, raise my hand." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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cohenj21 Posted July 29, 2012 Share Posted July 29, 2012 Perfect. Best of both worlds. Love it. "Those who believe in telekinetics, raise my hand." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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cohenj21 Posted July 29, 2012 Share Posted July 29, 2012 I like it as a stand-alone concept, but it looks very much like your Arizona concept, the soccer ball is the same and so is the crest shape. If these are two stand-alone concepts they look great but if your intention was to put them in a league together you should differentiate a little more. "Those who believe in telekinetics, raise my hand." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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