Greg_Fryman Posted November 25, 2012 Share Posted November 25, 2012 This a concept that I have been working on for OOTP. I figured I would share it with you guys to see how I can make it better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
St Louis Cardinals Posted November 25, 2012 Share Posted November 25, 2012 very nice. i would change the bottom part of the logo to red on the white hat #9 LSU vs. TCU Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lancealot Posted November 25, 2012 Share Posted November 25, 2012 I would use the road cap with both jerseys and have a double stripe on the pants that go all the way up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GriffinM6 Posted November 25, 2012 Share Posted November 25, 2012 I think this is very nice. But it isn't softball, so you need to burn those maroon pants in a lake of molten lava, and replace them with grey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KidBro Posted November 25, 2012 Share Posted November 25, 2012 Let's see a white jersey and grey pants added to this set. Also, like said before, maroon pants are a no. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greg_Fryman Posted November 25, 2012 Author Share Posted November 25, 2012 I made some of the changes that were brought up and I really like how they turned out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
St Louis Cardinals Posted November 25, 2012 Share Posted November 25, 2012 gray pants with white jersey? #9 LSU vs. TCU Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCall Posted November 25, 2012 Share Posted November 25, 2012 - White jersey/white pants- Gray jersey/gray pants- Maroon jersey/either color pants (white home, gray road   https://dribbble.com/MakaioCall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Robmarty009 Posted November 26, 2012 Share Posted November 26, 2012 These are very nice Greg, though I must say, the primary logo reminds me a lot of my Pitts Hammers logo. Even the typeface you used looks familiar. But nonetheless I like this piece. I especially like your alternate. Very well done with that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greg_Fryman Posted November 27, 2012 Author Share Posted November 27, 2012 .... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lancealot Posted November 27, 2012 Share Posted November 27, 2012 That looks good but make the stripe go all the way up the pants Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kw11333 Posted November 27, 2012 Share Posted November 27, 2012 Wow, i like that "W" logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Greg_Fryman Posted November 29, 2012 Author Share Posted November 29, 2012 Once again looking for some input to improve. This is a secondary for a much larger concept that I am doing which will have a full body logo but kinda stuck on the helmet something looks off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hugevolsfan Posted November 29, 2012 Share Posted November 29, 2012 The eye holes do not look right & the bottom of the helmet change those & I believe it will make it better.For the eyes maybe round of the edge closes to the hornsThe bottom needs something just not real sure what. My Fictional Football League Version 3 My Fictional Football Leagues WebsiteMy Church Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattwillcox Posted December 1, 2012 Share Posted December 1, 2012 I'm not going to get upset about this because it's just a concept and you've given me credit. But, if you're looking to use some of the work from my portfolio then ask me first. Don't just trace two of my fonts, throw them into a concept and not tell me.And that Thunder logo looks similar to something Raysox did a while back... Portfolio Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greg_Fryman Posted December 2, 2012 Author Share Posted December 2, 2012 I'm not going to get upset about this because it's just a concept and you've given me credit. But, if you're looking to use some of the work from my portfolio then ask me first. Don't just trace two of my fonts, throw them into a concept and not tell me.And that Thunder logo looks similar to something Raysox did a while back...Roger! Didn't think it was going to be an issue since I didn't claim that it was mine. As far as the thunder logo I attached the image I used for reference but thanks for trying to put that out there. I did use your font because I thought that was what it was for people post fonts like that here all the time. Im still learning the ropes of this forum but don't post that second comment insinuating stuff like that.I removed the images as well since there was an issue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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