DomTheAthlete29 Posted July 21, 2013 Share Posted July 21, 2013 This was my proposal for a college apart of the FCS fantasy league here on the creamer boards. Just wanted to get some C&C on it.Version 4Version 1Version 2Version 3 Someone be a World Champ, please!Fantasy Football Keeper League.....PM me if you want to join!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JCRGraphix Posted July 21, 2013 Share Posted July 21, 2013 Solid look. Plain black and white is underrated. I'm not sure about the breaks in the monogram though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thepjguy Posted July 21, 2013 Share Posted July 21, 2013 Weird logo but nice pulling it off! Thumbs up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B@ltim0r3R@v3n5 Posted July 22, 2013 Share Posted July 22, 2013 maybe i just have something against raider like jersey color schemes but i dont like this set. its too plain to me for a black and white set but thats just me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CLAW Posted July 22, 2013 Share Posted July 22, 2013 I agree in the sense that a little color would look cool. But I side with JCR the Brooklyn Nets look is very sleek. I also like how you incorporate the cross as the T. THE OFFICIAL SITE OF THE FICTIONAL-NORTH AMERICAN HOCKEY LEAGUEhttp://thenahl.weebly.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KCScout76 Posted July 22, 2013 Share Posted July 22, 2013 I love it - simple and Penn State style  Kansas City Scouts (CHL) Orr Cup Champions 2010, 2019, 2021     St. Joseph Pony Express (ULL)  2023 Champions   Kansas City Cattle (CL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drdougfresh Posted July 22, 2013 Share Posted July 22, 2013 The asymmetry in the monogram is really bothering me, to be honest. I don't know if it was intentional or not, but here's what I'm talking about:Those teal lines are the same length, so you can see that the cross is not centered on the mark -- it might not make much of a difference in some cases, but where you've got those four rectangles in the middle of the logo, it's really sticking out to me. I'd also look at the way you have breaks on the monogram, and how they don't apply at all to the cross. Last thing I'd work on is maybe making the G a little more pronounced, I think it'd look like an O from a decent distance.Overall though, I like the simplicity a lot. Nice start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted July 22, 2013 Share Posted July 22, 2013 @Doug - Thanks for the comments and tips, the asymmetry was a mistake on my end, knew something looked off thanks for catching that. Let me know how version 2 looks!As for the colors, I really want to stick with the simplistic look of black and white; IMHO it works well for a religous-affiliated university. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Midway Posted July 22, 2013 Share Posted July 22, 2013 A prime example of how cleanliness in design can be louder than chrome helmets and bizarre number fonts. Well done top to bottom. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B@ltim0r3R@v3n5 Posted July 22, 2013 Share Posted July 22, 2013 The logo looks admittedly better with the touch up and I hope you got that I was saying that its a good jersey but personally I just think a little more white could be used on the home like a stripe or something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drdougfresh Posted July 22, 2013 Share Posted July 22, 2013 Much better with that update. Can't wait to wax the floor with this team Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted July 23, 2013 Share Posted July 23, 2013 After talking with the 'client' he wanted a uniform that played on the "ghost" motif.. This is what I came up with! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GriffinM6 Posted July 23, 2013 Share Posted July 23, 2013 That looks great. Maybe a wordmark on the chest could make this look even better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JCRGraphix Posted July 23, 2013 Share Posted July 23, 2013 I liked your first update better, but it's all about what the client wants, so well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
St Louis Cardinals Posted July 23, 2013 Share Posted July 23, 2013 what kind of pattern is inside the number? #9 LSU vs. TCU Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattb6 Posted July 23, 2013 Share Posted July 23, 2013 I really like the first ones better. It feels very Brooklyn Nets-like. The second white one is great, but the black is too hard to read. But if the person wants it that way you executed it greatly. Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abqryan Posted July 24, 2013 Share Posted July 24, 2013 I'd suggest switching the number colors on the most recent update, it'd provide more contrast to the jerseys and make them much easier to read without undoing the essence of your concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted July 24, 2013 Share Posted July 24, 2013 what kind of pattern is inside the number?Gothic iron work.I'd suggest switching the number colors on the most recent update, it'd provide more contrast to the jerseys and make them much easier to read without undoing the essence of your concept.It was meant to look like the numbers were "ghostly'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted July 25, 2013 Share Posted July 25, 2013 Final update, client liked the style so I took it an ran with it! Think it looks great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thepjguy Posted July 25, 2013 Share Posted July 25, 2013 I dont really numbers on the helmet... liked the logo. But still wow! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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