FGM13 Posted August 4, 2013 Share Posted August 4, 2013 Very good... maybe try making the chin rounder?Tres bon... peut-etre faire le menton moins pointu? GO OILERS-GO BLUE JAYS-GO ESKIMOS-GO COLTS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KCScout76 Posted August 4, 2013 Share Posted August 4, 2013 I like your work - very nice concept.J'aime bien votre travail - très beau concept. (my French is bad-sorry) Kansas City Scouts (CHL) Orr Cup Champions 2010, 2019, 2021 St. Joseph Pony Express (ULL) 2023 Champions Kansas City Cattle (CL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted August 4, 2013 Author Share Posted August 4, 2013 Thank you mates ^^, HAHA French is more popular than what I thought Merci pour le compliment, to FGM13: I can make the changement to see what I come out with.to KC scout76: Your french is not bad... you write it perfectly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FGM13 Posted August 4, 2013 Share Posted August 4, 2013 Thank you mates ^^, HAHA French is more popular than what I thought Merci pour le compliment, to FGM13: I can make the changement to see what I come out with.to KC scout76: Your french is not bad... you write it perfectly Je n'ai pas de clés françaises sur mon ordi, mais je suis totalement bilingue lol. GO OILERS-GO BLUE JAYS-GO ESKIMOS-GO COLTS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted August 4, 2013 Author Share Posted August 4, 2013 Pourquoi ne pas me l'avoir dis ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted August 14, 2013 Author Share Posted August 14, 2013 hey it takes a while but I've finally done an alternative logo, what do you think ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cjt27 Posted August 14, 2013 Share Posted August 14, 2013 hey it takes a while but I've finally done an alternative logo, what do you think ?I thinI think you did a nice fresh look on the logo and like the alternative you made, but would love to see one that focuses more on the history of why they where named the Blackhawks in the first place, For those unaware they are named after the 86th Infantry Division which their original owner was a member of during WWI. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/86th_Infantry_Division_(United_States) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NoleYourRole Posted August 15, 2013 Share Posted August 15, 2013 I like the alternate. My only suggestion would be maybe a roundel anchoring the feather to the C, as done in the hair of the logo. Right now it just looks like it's laying there or floating. Other than that, looks great. Do lose the width of the feather outline on the bottom side coming back into the gold area. Sticks out quite noticeably.Lovin your concepts though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NoleYourRole Posted August 15, 2013 Share Posted August 15, 2013 I've changed the wrinkles and added the black paint on the forehead I just noticed something in the logo as well, the orange feather tip above the roundel, it doesn't follow the curve of the orange feather. Not super noticeable, but I wonder if it would look better red since it lines up more with the red feather. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted August 16, 2013 Author Share Posted August 16, 2013 Ok thanks for your help I'll change it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Funkatron101 Posted August 16, 2013 Share Posted August 16, 2013 I still see the charcoal-gray color. Is this intentional? It seems to be random and unnecessary. It really should just be all black for the outline. Check your color palette if it is not intentional. Also getting nitpicky, but there is a small black line going down the middle yellow hair highlight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oaklandhusker Posted August 16, 2013 Share Posted August 16, 2013 I would change the detail on the yellow feather from blue to green. It's just another color. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted August 16, 2013 Author Share Posted August 16, 2013 OK guys I'll change the details, and for the grey it's not intentional, I select my black but sometimes it's grey . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted September 21, 2013 Author Share Posted September 21, 2013 Hey a bit late but I've made it Latest updates, outline ; yellow outline, round chin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadojoker Posted September 21, 2013 Share Posted September 21, 2013 This and the alternate logo with the "C" w/feathers are very creative,sleek and cutting edge..in other words Sidney you do a very good job in creating concepts!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted September 21, 2013 Author Share Posted September 21, 2013 Thanks mate, I'll work a bit on the alternate and maybe the jersey set if I have Ideas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grampaboy Posted September 22, 2013 Share Posted September 22, 2013 Very cool...almost there. Suggestions:Go back to the design you posted July 28, 2013 - 20:19.Tilt the bottom of the nose line down just a very little towards the face.Delete top of lip line.Make the white of the eye just ever so slightly larger, and stretch it just a very little.Keep the recently angled tan feather, and yes, green on yellow feather instead of blue.Voila! Perfecto! I would buy this alternative jersey in a second! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Le Québécois Posted September 22, 2013 Share Posted September 22, 2013 Bonjour Sidney,Wow! Tu t'es attaqué à quelque chose de sacré en le modifiant de façon extraordinaire. Félicitations!N'y touche plus! ahahahhahaÇa fait du bien de parler français ici! Le QUÉBÉCOIS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted September 22, 2013 Author Share Posted September 22, 2013 Thanks mates Grampaboy; OK I'll try what you said Le Québécois : salut l'ami, merci pour le compliment d'après ce que j'ai vus il y'a pas mal de francophone. Je me permet de t'ajouter a mes contacts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JJHoser Posted September 22, 2013 Share Posted September 22, 2013 I don't particularly care so much for the blackhawks or their logos, but this is pretty great for a redesign. The only thing that gets to me is that it reminds me of the North Dakota University Fighting Sioux logo. Colorado Born and Raised!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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