hugevolsfan Posted July 29, 2013 Share Posted July 29, 2013 1. Lips are better2. Keep refining the shape3. Reduce the colors. I count 11. (light tan, dark tan, charcoal, black, yellow, red, different red, green, blue, brown, white)That is way too many. Do more with less and eliminate one of the tan colors, charcoal, one of the red colors, and brown.In fact, If I were you, I would make it black and white to start and see how far you can push that before incorporating color.I agree with this plus I think the nose can be refined more My Fictional Football League Version 3 My Fictional Football Leagues WebsiteMy Church Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted July 29, 2013 Author Share Posted July 29, 2013 OK I'll see what I can do about that. thx for your vision Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abqryan Posted July 29, 2013 Share Posted July 29, 2013 I think each change you've made has moved in a positive direction, which is impressive considering how good it was to start with.I feel it could work as it is and be a great logo but I also agree that you can keep pushing it to be even better.I'd suggest possibly trying not so straight a line on the bottom of the nose and see how that looks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted July 30, 2013 Author Share Posted July 30, 2013 OK mate I'll see what I can do about that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted July 31, 2013 Author Share Posted July 31, 2013 OK after days of tries I finally found something..... I guess. I rounded the nose and added some shape on the nose. so what you think? The eye is a bit bigger too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windell918 Posted July 31, 2013 Share Posted July 31, 2013 Your shape is exponential better. Great job. Any chance you've considered putting the face paint back on the forehead a la:At some point it got removed and replaced with wrinkles because thats intimidating. Just an idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted July 31, 2013 Author Share Posted July 31, 2013 I've changed the wrinkles and added the black paint on the forehead Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sparkychewbarky Posted July 31, 2013 Share Posted July 31, 2013 Looks great Sidney.Are you able to plop that on a sweater so we can see it "in action"? *The Battle of Seattle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted July 31, 2013 Author Share Posted July 31, 2013 thank you Sparky, Sure it's the next step to see how is it in action Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windell918 Posted July 31, 2013 Share Posted July 31, 2013 Fantastic!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted July 31, 2013 Author Share Posted July 31, 2013 So I guess that I get through... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted July 31, 2013 Author Share Posted July 31, 2013 And Patrick Kane score... his first with the Blackhawks's new logo !!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted August 1, 2013 Author Share Posted August 1, 2013 I post two wallpapers for the Blackhawks. Enjoy The second one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbaker19 Posted August 1, 2013 Share Posted August 1, 2013 The logo looks really sweet on those wallpapers. Excellent work! Really nice job using the comments to update and upgrade the logo. Thanks Dolphins91 for the jersey avatars. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted August 1, 2013 Author Share Posted August 1, 2013 Thank you buddy, yes I have to listen to proposals because it brings something new and it looks better. Everybody sees something different to do. Thanks to everyone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vaytch Posted August 1, 2013 Share Posted August 1, 2013 I love the logo, but for some reason it just doesn't feel right on a Hawks jersey. I would suggest updating their look or update the shoulder logo.But I must say it does look freakin' amazing as a wallpaper ! CM Punk Jersey - Daniel Bryan Jersey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted August 1, 2013 Author Share Posted August 1, 2013 Totally agree, I'll try to see what I can do about the jersey and the alternative logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sparkychewbarky Posted August 1, 2013 Share Posted August 1, 2013 The logo's great...Fantastic wallpapers.On the Hawks' jersey, I think that it just needs a thicker black outline and needs to be a TAD bigger, IMO.Nice job on the project overall, Sidney. *The Battle of Seattle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted August 1, 2013 Author Share Posted August 1, 2013 Thank you Sparky I'll fix the problems. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted August 4, 2013 Author Share Posted August 4, 2013 I try an other situation enjoy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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