Guest darkpiranha Posted September 12, 2013 Share Posted September 12, 2013 First time checking in since page 2. Great improvement! I love watching someone's talent develop right before our eyes. I think you're ready for something like GIMP. You've probably bumped into many of the limitations of the paint program you've been using, so you'll likely really appreciate and be better able to take advantage of the more advanced drawing tools. But great job so far. And major props for listening to the advice given and putting them into action. Also, major props for the people of this thread for being so supportive and giving great advice. Props all around! Yay, us! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted September 12, 2013 Author Share Posted September 12, 2013 Now that we're one third of the way through Tier 1, It's time to find out which team you like the best! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePeam Posted September 13, 2013 Share Posted September 13, 2013 The Flash of Kingston!I like it. But when I hear flash I think red & yellow, rather than green & yellow.Green and yellow are the colors of Jamaica's flag.Oh ya huh. Looks good then, keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted September 15, 2013 Share Posted September 15, 2013 I voted Dorado, just edging out Empire and Cactus. I can't wait for more, you`re progress is so obvious. And BTW, I still have a soft spot for Archers, which was a VERY good first concept ever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted September 16, 2013 Author Share Posted September 16, 2013 Here are the Great Lakes Pirates! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted September 16, 2013 Share Posted September 16, 2013 Here are the Great Lakes Pirates!I like it. Where are they located? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted September 16, 2013 Author Share Posted September 16, 2013 Here are the Great Lakes Pirates!I like it. Where are they located?Green Bay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DS729 Posted September 16, 2013 Share Posted September 16, 2013 Good to see you back at it, me likey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted September 16, 2013 Author Share Posted September 16, 2013 Good to see you back at it, me likey.Thanks. I'll wait for some more feedback and then post LA. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted September 16, 2013 Share Posted September 16, 2013 Really simple fix, but on the road, the logo on the jersey should have a black outline on the bottom where you cut it. Other than that, I really like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted September 16, 2013 Author Share Posted September 16, 2013 Really simple fix, but on the road, the logo on the jersey should have a black outline on the bottom where you cut it. Other than that, I really like it.Okay, I'll work on that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted September 16, 2013 Author Share Posted September 16, 2013 Here's the update Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted September 16, 2013 Share Posted September 16, 2013 Much better. Maybe one more thig? You ahve a very suiting font for this team so why not use it on the shorts. Just overlap the letters to make 'em a bit cleaner. Making ya work, eh?!?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted September 16, 2013 Author Share Posted September 16, 2013 So you mean overlap the G and L like on the Pirate's "Skirt" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted September 16, 2013 Share Posted September 16, 2013 Yeah. Use the font and overlap and G and a n L on the logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DS729 Posted September 16, 2013 Share Posted September 16, 2013 Much better. Maybe one more thig? You ahve a very suiting font for this team so why not use it on the shorts. Just overlap the letters to make 'em a bit cleaner. Making ya work, eh?!?!Much better. Maybe one more thig? You ahve a very suiting font for this team so why not use it on the shorts. Just overlap the letters to make 'em a bit cleaner. Making ya work, eh?!?!Im pretty sure Kev could request almost anything and get it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted September 17, 2013 Author Share Posted September 17, 2013 Feedback on Great Lakes is still encouraged, but here are the LA Stars. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DS729 Posted September 17, 2013 Share Posted September 17, 2013 LA looks nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted September 18, 2013 Share Posted September 18, 2013 I like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted September 18, 2013 Author Share Posted September 18, 2013 Thanks, here is the Great Lake's fix. Played around with it and found it looked really good on the shorts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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