DS729 Posted September 7, 2013 Share Posted September 7, 2013 Nice update to Detroit, the Mexican team (too lazy to look at their name) looks great too, the striping is incredible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted September 7, 2013 Author Share Posted September 7, 2013 Nice update to Detroit, the Mexican team (too lazy to look at their name) looks great too.Yeah, the name's a mouthful. They usually go by Dorado Aguials TC because Guadalajara Dorado Aguilas Throwball Club would be just too much.Wow! I really like this one! The log is definitely your best so far, and i really like the stripes. I'd say this is probably your best overall setThanks, kevsim1! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DS729 Posted September 7, 2013 Share Posted September 7, 2013 Nice update to Detroit, the Mexican team (too lazy to look at their name) looks great too.Yeah, the name's a mouthful. They usually go by Dorado Aguials TC because Guadalajara Dorado Aguilas Throwball Club would be just too much.Wow! I really like this one! The log is definitely your best so far, and i really like the stripes. I'd say this is probably your best overall setThanks, kevsim1!Dang, you're quick! Do you get like a phone call every time someone posts in here... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoHyphenE Posted September 7, 2013 Share Posted September 7, 2013 Dorados TC has a nice logo. The Rev's logo however really needs to be cleaned up because the circles aren't exactly circular. Also adding in a white stroke between the middle circle and the black circle would really help define that area. The letters in the black could also use a stroke. You're getting better though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted September 7, 2013 Author Share Posted September 7, 2013 Nice update to Detroit, the Mexican team (too lazy to look at their name) looks great too.Yeah, the name's a mouthful. They usually go by Dorado Aguials TC because Guadalajara Dorado Aguilas Throwball Club would be just too much.Wow! I really like this one! The log is definitely your best so far, and i really like the stripes. I'd say this is probably your best overall setThanks, kevsim1!Dang, you're quick! Do you get like a phone call every time someone posts in here...No. I basically sit next to the computer and wait. I have no life whatsoever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted September 8, 2013 Author Share Posted September 8, 2013 Didn't have much time today because of church and the Bears game, but here is Empire TC. One of the charter members of NATA, Empire TC has won 4 championships and has earned the 8th most points of any team. However, the team has had several problems with overspending on bust players. Empire looks to turn things around with latest big signing Trey Bennet a super-speedy winger. Straight from the Big Apple, here is Empire TC! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted September 8, 2013 Share Posted September 8, 2013 Didn't have much time today because of church and the Bears game, but here is Empire TC. One of the charter members of NATA, Empire TC has won 4 championships and has earned the 8th most points of any team. However, the team has had several problems with overspending on bust players. Empire looks to turn things around with latest big signing Trey Bennet a super-speedy winger. Straight from the Big Apple, here is Empire TC!I take my comments about the Mexican team being the best, because this one here is BEAUTIFUL. You even put the jewel on the sock-pad. Amazing work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoHyphenE Posted September 8, 2013 Share Posted September 8, 2013 Again, you need to work on the consistency of your lines. The idea is there, but the execution is still lacking. I assume you are making theses in paint, no? I recommend using the free program GIMP. It'll make your concepts much neater and take this to a whole other level. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted September 8, 2013 Author Share Posted September 8, 2013 Again, you need to work on the consistency of your lines. The idea is there, but the execution is still lacking. I assume you are making theses in paint, no? I recommend using the free program GIMP. It'll make your concepts much neater and take this to a whole other level.What would you suggest changing to make this more consistent? I am using paint, but I draw the logos before hand and scan them onto the computer. I did initially try installing Paint, but it was a glitch and put a bunch of viruses on the computer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoHyphenE Posted September 8, 2013 Share Posted September 8, 2013 The lines just aren't straight, they are wobbly since they are hand drawn. The crown isn't symmetrical like most crowns are. You could fix this in several ways, but that is the biggest problem I have with the logo. Just sharper, cleaner lines would really make your concepts pop. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DS729 Posted September 8, 2013 Share Posted September 8, 2013 I really like the incorporation of the apple on the crown, that's sweet! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted September 9, 2013 Author Share Posted September 9, 2013 I really like the incorporation of the apple on the crown, that's sweet!Thanks!The lines just aren't straight, they are wobbly since they are hand drawn. The crown isn't symmetrical like most crowns are. You could fix this in several ways, but that is the biggest problem I have with the logo. Just sharper, cleaner lines would really make your concepts pop.Thanks for the feedback. I'll work on the logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted September 11, 2013 Author Share Posted September 11, 2013 I made Empire's logo more symmetrical. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoHyphenE Posted September 11, 2013 Share Posted September 11, 2013 Much improved! Good update Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted September 11, 2013 Author Share Posted September 11, 2013 Much improved! Good updateThanks! Any more feedback on Empire TC? If not, The Flash of Kingston is next. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted September 11, 2013 Share Posted September 11, 2013 Much improved! Good updateThanks! Any more feedback on Empire TC? If not, The Flash of Kingston is next.Agreed. Very nice update. Excited to see what you can do for the flash! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted September 12, 2013 Author Share Posted September 12, 2013 The Flash of Kingston! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted September 12, 2013 Share Posted September 12, 2013 nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePeam Posted September 12, 2013 Share Posted September 12, 2013 The Flash of Kingston!I like it. But when I hear flash I think red & yellow, rather than green & yellow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted September 12, 2013 Author Share Posted September 12, 2013 The Flash of Kingston!I like it. But when I hear flash I think red & yellow, rather than green & yellow.Green and yellow are the colors of Jamaica's flag. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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