OrangeCrush Posted August 25, 2013 Share Posted August 25, 2013 Here is a logo that I am doing for a friend. I used purple and gold to convey royalty, along with the lion. I've done other logos but never an animal face-on. Hoping for some comments and criticism, with advice, or I could e-mail someone the Photoshop or illustrator file, if they wanted to fix it themselves.Thanks in advance PROUDEST MEMBER OF THE FIGHTIN' TEXAS AGGIE CLASS OF 2005... WHOOP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted August 25, 2013 Share Posted August 25, 2013 Maybe add a crown to the lion, and change his expression to make him look more fierce. You have a nice logo, keep going! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted August 25, 2013 Share Posted August 25, 2013 Looks like a mask. Kep working. Very nice start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soarindude Posted August 25, 2013 Share Posted August 25, 2013 I think the face just looks kinda weird, almost native-american looking. The hair is a bit awkward (mane), maybe over-complicated. But it's a very nice start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OrangeCrush Posted August 25, 2013 Author Share Posted August 25, 2013 @jmoe12 there is a hidden crown in the hair, maybe I should make it more prominent. To make it look more fierce, should I do a large open mouth or just more snarly? PROUDEST MEMBER OF THE FIGHTIN' TEXAS AGGIE CLASS OF 2005... WHOOP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted August 25, 2013 Share Posted August 25, 2013 @jmoe12 there is a hidden crown in the hair, maybe I should make it more prominent. To make it look more fierce, should I do a large open mouth or just more snarly?I see the crown now, but maybe make it bigger or more prominent so it's easier to see. For making it look fiercer I think the eyes need more work than the mouth, right now the lion looks more groggy than angry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OrangeCrush Posted August 25, 2013 Author Share Posted August 25, 2013 @Soarindude I know, I just can't figure out how to simplify it without making it look too simple PROUDEST MEMBER OF THE FIGHTIN' TEXAS AGGIE CLASS OF 2005... WHOOP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joke Insurance Posted August 25, 2013 Share Posted August 25, 2013 Hmmm, aren't those the colors of the street gang, called Latin Kings? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beruud Posted August 25, 2013 Share Posted August 25, 2013 I like it.Only suggestions... have a much lighter accent color... it is very muted overall.Having the crown on the top suggested by orange-crush is an almost must.Let us know how you fair! Please do not fool yourself, the Buccaneers jersey is conceptually and creatively an abomination. Read the "FANFARE" Here... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
St Louis Cardinals Posted August 25, 2013 Share Posted August 25, 2013 I love the hidden rook inside the wordmark #9 LSU vs. TCU Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wildwing64 Posted August 25, 2013 Share Posted August 25, 2013 Not a bad start but it does need some more work. Maybe a more aggressive expression. You definitely need a brighter gold. PotD: 24/08/2017 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ren69 Posted August 25, 2013 Share Posted August 25, 2013 It appears to be at the top of its mane as well,or is it just me seeing that? https://www.behance.net/Ren1969 https://twitter.com/Ren1969_Rene Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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