McCraeWilliamsProductions Posted February 23, 2014 Share Posted February 23, 2014 I've never done a full remake of a Professional logo. I didnt want to full change the logo but made small changes all around. I compare my change to that of the Buccaneers in how they just modernized it. Here you go! I DO UNDERSTAND THERE ARE SOME IMPERFECTIONS AND "TENSION" BUT ITS A ROUGH DRAFThttp://mccraewilliams.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/01/broncos-logo-2.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
turbo72577 Posted February 23, 2014 Share Posted February 23, 2014 Darn good start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alxy8s Posted February 24, 2014 Share Posted February 24, 2014 First reaction - "What's different?" First step to a great modernization, I think. For reference, here's the side-by-side:I love what you did with the mane. You made it look like hair, not like snakes. Also really like the removal of the pupil, which makes the horse look more intimidating.Don't really like the bluntness of the upper lip. The cheek is so round that it looks like the horse is chewing on quite a mouthful. Maybe streamline that a little bit.Great job overall! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_nxche Posted February 24, 2014 Share Posted February 24, 2014 Make the mane flow a bit better, I've never been a fan of the way the middle part just goes up and stays there.Other than that all I can say is wow! This is well executed. If you're doing all the logos I would suggest bringing back a modernized version of their 70's logo. (Your new Bronco over the letter D). Excited to see more of your work! Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCraeWilliamsProductions Posted February 24, 2014 Author Share Posted February 24, 2014 First reaction - "What's different?" First step to a great modernization, I think. For reference, here's the side-by-side:Changed the front snout the line that comes up the side of the head. The contrasting gray lines. The ENTIRE mane. the ears. the eyes. All that I havent added is the nose holes and ear holes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alxy8s Posted February 24, 2014 Share Posted February 24, 2014 Changed the front snout the line that comes up the side of the head. The contrasting gray lines. The ENTIRE mane. the ears. the eyes. All that I havent added is the nose holes and ear holesI see all that. I wasn't saying that you didn't do anything. I was saying that I couldn't have told you what was different about your logo from memory. The NFL isn't exactly my favorite sport, so that's certainly part of it. For a modernization, I think that's a good thing, and that you did a good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TShaw528 Posted February 24, 2014 Share Posted February 24, 2014 A few thoughts:-Maybe simplify the mane? Make it a halt valence between what you did and the current-I'd add on the nose swoop-MMake the orange eye dot a bit bigger-Overall, a great start! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ultramark3000 Posted February 24, 2014 Share Posted February 24, 2014 I like the addition of the grey, and the grey scale in the mane. Overall it is simple but effective change. Great job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCraeWilliamsProductions Posted February 24, 2014 Author Share Posted February 24, 2014 UPDATE.Ichanged the mouth bc it was a little bulky and the chin bc it looked like he had a double chin. Changed the eye and added the snout and ear. In the two pictures below the one on the left is the update and the one on the left was an experiment. another guy said it didnt look like "fire" enough so i made a different mane. tell me what you think. tell me which one is better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheFuture Posted February 24, 2014 Share Posted February 24, 2014 Wow! I like this a lot! I do have one tiny suggestion though: bevel the snout of the logo just like you've done with everything else. Otherwise it looks absolutely great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCraeWilliamsProductions Posted February 24, 2014 Author Share Posted February 24, 2014 Wow! I like this a lot! I do have one tiny suggestion though: bevel the snout of the logo just like you've done with everything else. Otherwise it looks absolutely great!what do u mean bevel? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wonderbread Posted February 24, 2014 Share Posted February 24, 2014 UPDATE.Ichanged the mouth bc it was a little bulky and the chin bc it looked like he had a double chin. Changed the eye and added the snout and ear. In the two pictures below the one on the left is the update and the one on the left was an experiment. another guy said it didnt look like "fire" enough so i made a different mane. tell me what you think. tell me which one is better. the right mane looks better, just because there is less shading and small details that would get lost when this gets reproduced on anything small especially if it was embroidered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCraeWilliamsProductions Posted February 24, 2014 Author Share Posted February 24, 2014 Im thinking about maybe doing another logo in the NFL. does anyone have any suggestions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DCarp1231 Posted February 24, 2014 Share Posted February 24, 2014 Rams, Patriots, Eagles, Bills, Titans, Jets Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Watt Posted February 24, 2014 Share Posted February 24, 2014 I like the updated mane you put on it. It gives a firey, flowing in the wind effect. Great job so far! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soarindude Posted February 24, 2014 Share Posted February 24, 2014 I'd like to see an enhancing on the Raiders logo. I think you could do a great job. This is definitely an improvement. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCraeWilliamsProductions Posted February 25, 2014 Author Share Posted February 25, 2014 I like the updated mane you put on it. It gives a firey, flowing in the wind effect. Great job so far!You like it even without the shading in it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Impaler Posted February 25, 2014 Share Posted February 25, 2014 JMO, but I think with the left one that there is too much detail in the mane. On the right one, the orange isn't broken up at all and just seems out of place and also makes the logo very unbalanced looking. I think on both the detail in the mane doesn't exactly match the style of the detail on the horse head. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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