T-ROY Posted August 5, 2014 Share Posted August 5, 2014 So this is the first concept I've ever made. I've reworked this concept countless times and I've finally decided that this is the winner. Also used Mr. Wonka's fabulous template (thank you kind sir) so I hope it really pops. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted August 5, 2014 Share Posted August 5, 2014 Maybe make the black jersey teal. I just feel like the black with the orange yoke is too much like their rivals the Ducks. Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Critical Thinker Posted August 5, 2014 Share Posted August 5, 2014 You should leave the orange off completely. There's too much going on here, it's too similar to the Ducks, and orange isn't a team color anyway. It's _____________ and Toledo still sucks.[insert time here] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted August 5, 2014 Share Posted August 5, 2014 You should leave the orange off completely. There's too much going on here, it's too similar to the Ducks, and orange isn't a team color anyway.Yes it is: Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wildwing64 Posted August 5, 2014 Share Posted August 5, 2014 In a bubble, this works well because of your effective use of colour, so kudos for that. But as a Sharks uniform it doesn't, if only because teal is so strongly associated with that team, and it's a shame to see it reduced to a tertiary accent colour on their primary uniform. Sharks fans aren't too keen on orange either, and again, while this is a good overall look in theory, toning down the amount of orange or getting rid of it altogether is probably the way to go.I'd also like to add: for your first concept, you've presented it well with your use of a template, so kudos for that too. PotD: 24/08/2017 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nddurst Posted August 5, 2014 Share Posted August 5, 2014 I think that this idea works much better for the road white than it does for the home black. I agree--teal should remain the primary color (or secondary when paired with black) and on the home jersey it is reduced to the tertiary color. I agree with Kewp80 on maybe changing the black to teal and re-working the striping to incorporate the black. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake88 Posted August 5, 2014 Share Posted August 5, 2014 I love the orange on the Sharks, but only as a trim. Not as a secondary color. Teal is the way to go for a colored jersey since it always been that way, even in the black dominated 90s. It would be almost going in the opposite direction if they did this today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-ROY Posted August 5, 2014 Author Share Posted August 5, 2014 I made the black jersey teal since you've all been asking for it. Personally, I still feel that the black jersey is better, probably because I'm so attached to it. It started out as a alternate that I made until I decided to make an away jersey to go with it. I still feel it would go well as an alternate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Critical Thinker Posted August 5, 2014 Share Posted August 5, 2014 You should leave the orange off completely. There's too much going on here, it's too similar to the Ducks, and orange isn't a team color anyway.Yes it is:Ah, I thought it was just a supporting color for the eye in the logo. My bad. It's _____________ and Toledo still sucks.[insert time here] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1clkgtramg Posted August 5, 2014 Share Posted August 5, 2014 that looks a lot better! Orange definitely compliments Teal but only as a tertiary colour. The amount of Orange you have is just enough. US and World License Plate Redesign - Fixing the Elite Ice Hockey League - NHL to Soccer Crossover - European Hockey League Twitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Christian Legault Posted August 5, 2014 Share Posted August 5, 2014 The yoke looks like it doesn't belong in this concept. Also I wouldn't add a drop shadow to the logo, as it doesn't seem like it's stitched one, if you've watched Dylan's videos he showed you how to add a bit of that embroided look. Apart from that I like the orange it complements the teal well. On the away jersey I think the teal would work better where the black is and vice versa Twitter: @lestoplegault - Email: Christiantlegault@gmail.com Blog: http://legaultdesigns.blogspot.ca/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-ROY Posted August 6, 2014 Author Share Posted August 6, 2014 The yoke looks like it doesn't belong in this concept. Also I wouldn't add a drop shadow to the logo, as it doesn't seem like it's stitched one, if you've watched Dylan's videos he showed you how to add a bit of that embroided look. Apart from that I like the orange it complements the teal well. On the away jersey I think the teal would work better where the black is and vice versaSince I'm using Paint.NET with the .PSD plugin I'm not able to do the type of embroidery in Dylan's video. Without the drop shadow I feel it sinks too much in to the jersey.I completely disagree with you on the yoke. Without it there would be too much negative space and I'm trying to go for something closer to the jerseys before last year. I took your advice and switched the black with teal, but not on the yoke. Trust me, it doesn't look good. I also think that it looks better on the original since the black is the darker color and doesn't mix with the orange as much... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted August 6, 2014 Share Posted August 6, 2014 No yoke would be fine and if you don't like it add numbers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-ROY Posted August 6, 2014 Author Share Posted August 6, 2014 No yoke would be fine and if you don't like it add numbersYou obviously didn't read everything I said and ya I forgot the TV numbers on that jersey but it was just to show the switching of the colors. If you want to see the numbers than look at the other jersey.BTW this is my concept so don't act that way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted August 6, 2014 Share Posted August 6, 2014 ooo boy. he's turning in to a young me. This may get interesting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Christian Legault Posted August 6, 2014 Share Posted August 6, 2014 I like with the teal. Looks good. I feel like the jerseys they have work this year since it's so simple. Simplicity can work sometimes, but I understand you wanting to keep yokes.If ever you do take them off, shoulder patches or numbers would solve that. Twitter: @lestoplegault - Email: Christiantlegault@gmail.com Blog: http://legaultdesigns.blogspot.ca/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted August 6, 2014 Share Posted August 6, 2014 Thats basicaly what i wanted to say ^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-ROY Posted August 6, 2014 Author Share Posted August 6, 2014 ooo boy. he's turning in to a young me. This may get interestingYou're still young you, you're only 13 and you still haven't read the whole thing.BTW here you go... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Christian Legault Posted August 6, 2014 Share Posted August 6, 2014 Very naiiice. *borat voice* Twitter: @lestoplegault - Email: Christiantlegault@gmail.com Blog: http://legaultdesigns.blogspot.ca/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted August 6, 2014 Share Posted August 6, 2014 i like it but can we see a black color Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.