mattb6 Posted March 8, 2015 Share Posted March 8, 2015 Hello, all. I'm in the middle of working on an NBA series- with a twist. But I'm not going to tell you that twist- yet. For now, I'm looking for C&C on the concept, of course, and the presentation as well. First team, in alphabetical order, is the Atlanta Hawks, so I'll share them as a bit of a teaser. Logos, numbers, wordmarks, etc:Home uniform:Away:Alternate:And my first attempt at a personal logo is in the corner. It can be read as a B as it is, or a M turned 90 degrees. I forget who made the template, but thanks to them. Enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PaperThin Posted March 8, 2015 Share Posted March 8, 2015 The wordmark is too big, especially the Atlanta wordmark. Other than that, I really like this. Awesome job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chilton92 Posted March 8, 2015 Share Posted March 8, 2015 Not much to say. I think you pretty much nailed it. Can't wait to see the rest of the league. http://www.manic-expression.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
upperV03 Posted March 8, 2015 Share Posted March 8, 2015 I would suggest putting the chest stripe and wordmark at a less severe angle. Other than that, I think this looks great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GriffinM6 Posted March 8, 2015 Share Posted March 8, 2015 The wordmark is too big, especially the Atlanta wordmark. Other than that, I really like this. Awesome job.Completely disagree. The wordmark should be big on a uniform like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattb6 Posted March 8, 2015 Author Share Posted March 8, 2015 The wordmark is too big, especially the Atlanta wordmark. Other than that, I really like this. Awesome job.Completely disagree. The wordmark should be big on a uniform like this. I tried to fit it as well as possible inside the stripe. It was fairly large on the original incarnation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pHiL Kizer Posted March 8, 2015 Share Posted March 8, 2015 I like this. A Lot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
martymcfry Posted March 8, 2015 Share Posted March 8, 2015 Very nice job here! The combination of past and present is perfect. The yellow alternate is a first, and that's great too. What if you used the ATL script on the yellow jersey instead of Atlanta? I know some people aren't a fan of that though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TVIXX Posted March 8, 2015 Share Posted March 8, 2015 Nailed it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadojoker Posted March 8, 2015 Share Posted March 8, 2015 The wordmark is too big, especially the Atlanta wordmark. Other than that, I really like this. Awesome job.Completely disagree. The wordmark should be big on a uniform like this. This! ! WordMark has to be big. You dont want another New Orleans Pelicans small font jersey?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carolingian Steamroller Posted March 8, 2015 Share Posted March 8, 2015 Lots of great Hawks designs lately. This is one of the best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattb6 Posted March 8, 2015 Author Share Posted March 8, 2015 Very nice job here! The combination of past and present is perfect. The yellow alternate is a first, and that's great too. What if you used the ATL script on the yellow jersey instead of Atlanta? I know some people aren't a fan of that though.I explored doing that, but it just seemed a bit too small inside the stripe so I ditched it. I am a fan of the red alt they have now FWIW. Thanks for the kind words every one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan33 Posted March 9, 2015 Share Posted March 9, 2015 Big fan of the yellow alternate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sportsfan Posted March 9, 2015 Share Posted March 9, 2015 About you're jersey concept for the Atlanta Hawks it's too similiar to another Sportslogos.net User's Atlanta Hawks concept and aren't you ripping off one user's concept because it looks like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattb6 Posted March 9, 2015 Author Share Posted March 9, 2015 About you're jersey concept for the Atlanta Hawks it's too similiar to another Sportslogos.net User's Atlanta Hawks concept and aren't you ripping off one user's concept because it looks like.It's cause it's based off of existing looks the team has already had/has... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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