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Looks more like “If” than what I assume you are trying to do is “Jf”. Move the feather down or find a new way to display it to fix your problem.

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My initials; JF.  Maybe separate the JF more, And I agree with the lowering of the Feather.  Any thoughts on the Imagery part?  I feel there is room for improvement to make it fit better.

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If it's JF, then you need a different font:

 

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It's different, but not different enough. At least for me.

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32 minutes ago, DG_Now said:

If it's JF, then you need a different font:

 

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It's different, but not different enough. At least for me.

Aww nuts... (get it?)

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Updates:  Tweeks and a new feather,  hopefully revealing more of the JF to make it easier to recognize.

 

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Still not too comfortable on the "Imagery" choice... Need some insparation from somewhere...  And not choosing colours yet.

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Thought #1:  Pick a case with the "JF."  All upper or all lower, but pick one.

Thought #2:  Consider slanting the "JF" to the right to give a sense of forward motion.

Thought #3:  I'm not sure what the symbolism of the feather is intended to convey.  If it isn't obvious it needs to be ditched - or made obvious.

Thought #4:  What is "Imagery" as you see it?  When I think "imagery," the first thought that comes to my mind, honestly, is bull****."

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8 hours ago, Mac the Knife said:

Thought #1:  Pick a case with the "JF."  All upper or all lower, but pick one.

Thought #2:  Consider slanting the "JF" to the right to give a sense of forward motion.

Thought #3:  I'm not sure what the symbolism of the feather is intended to convey.  If it isn't obvious it needs to be ditched - or made obvious.

Thought #4:  What is "Imagery" as you see it?  When I think "imagery," the first thought that comes to my mind, honestly, is bull****."

These are all good thoughts, Thank you for giving me something to think about going forward.

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I like the dual case, as it lends itself well to similar shapes with the J and the F, but the context of the feather and the intended meaning of "imagery" are both very cloudy and confusing.. I'd simplify a bit as others have suggested

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