Pava Posted September 5, 2015 Share Posted September 5, 2015 Fix tail, sharp angles of outline and this will be perfect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wildcomet Posted September 5, 2015 Share Posted September 5, 2015 This looks great! The bright outline around the darker blue colors really make the logo pop. One of the better shark logos I've seen! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
walkerws Posted September 5, 2015 Share Posted September 5, 2015 Clipsails logo looks nice but lose the yellow . It's unnecessary. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spanna65 Posted September 5, 2015 Author Share Posted September 5, 2015 Bump- As I said I'd love some feedback on my Adelaide designFix tail, sharp angles of outline and this will be perfectOk, cheers. I will.Must say, I'm very pleased with the positive feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan24898 Posted September 6, 2015 Share Posted September 6, 2015 This logo has a ton of potential, but it needs a little cleaning up. The shark has a hunchback look going, you need to try to make the shape of the back a little smoother. Not sure what kind of shark you were going for, but if it's a great white the fins need to be much thicker. If it's a mako, they only need to be thickened slightly. Either way, the dorsal fin is the only one thick enough, but it needs to be taller. The tail looks a little strange as well. Finally, the gills are a little too high up on the body. Look at reference photos to help.Once you fix this up though, it's really good looking. I love the color scheme, it's unique and really works well.Also a quick note, I had never heard of a clipsal before, so I looked it up and the only thing I could find was an Australian brand of electrical accessories, not sure if that's what you were going for or not with the team name. Star championship signature credit to packerfan21396 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spanna65 Posted September 6, 2015 Author Share Posted September 6, 2015 This logo has a ton of potential, but it needs a little cleaning up. The shark has a hunchback look going, you need to try to make the shape of the back a little smoother. Not sure what kind of shark you were going for, but if it's a great white the fins need to be much thicker. If it's a mako, they only need to be thickened slightly. Either way, the dorsal fin is the only one thick enough, but it needs to be taller. The tail looks a little strange as well. Finally, the gills are a little too high up on the body. Look at reference photos to help.Once you fix this up though, it's really good looking. I love the color scheme, it's unique and really works well.Also a quick note, I had never heard of a clipsal before, so I looked it up and the only thing I could find was an Australian brand of electrical accessories, not sure if that's what you were going for or not with the team name.Ok,cheers I'm on to it! The name is to be the Clipsails, I think it makes a bit more sense then just the Clipsals, because yes, there is a company called Clipsal that does electrical stuff. I'm not entirely sure what the name means exactly, It was suggested by Silence Of Rams,and I thought it sounded interesting and clever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spanna65 Posted September 7, 2015 Author Share Posted September 7, 2015 Ok, here's an update-Fixed the fin sizes/location-Fixed backWhich of these two versions here do you prefer? With the gold outline or without?WithoutWith Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pava Posted September 7, 2015 Share Posted September 7, 2015 With outline it is better. This angle looks weird. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spanna65 Posted September 7, 2015 Author Share Posted September 7, 2015 Oh, I can see where your coming from now. I'll see if I can fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spanna65 Posted September 12, 2015 Author Share Posted September 12, 2015 BUMP-Fixed tail-added the gold outline Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silence of the Rams Posted September 12, 2015 Share Posted September 12, 2015 Beautiful. Also. OpinionWould this sport fit in the US Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spanna65 Posted September 12, 2015 Author Share Posted September 12, 2015 Beautiful. Also. OpinionWould this sport fit in the USOf course! In fact I'm sure it would be embraced. It would fit right into an arena type spectacle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silence of the Rams Posted September 12, 2015 Share Posted September 12, 2015 Beautiful. Also. OpinionWould this sport fit in the USOf course! In fact I'm sure it would be embraced. It would fit right into an arena type spectacle.Ok just askingKeep em coming Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spanna65 Posted September 12, 2015 Author Share Posted September 12, 2015 Beautiful. Also. OpinionWould this sport fit in the USOf course! In fact I'm sure it would be embraced. It would fit right into an arena type spectacle.Ok just askingKeep em comingNo worries, love your interest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pava Posted September 12, 2015 Share Posted September 12, 2015 Much better. Would love to see next teams Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spanna65 Posted September 12, 2015 Author Share Posted September 12, 2015 Well. I'll leave it to you guys. Which city should I do next.- Gold Coast- Perth- Or Sydney? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pava Posted September 12, 2015 Share Posted September 12, 2015 Sydney Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dan O'Mac Posted September 12, 2015 Share Posted September 12, 2015 I'd vote Perth I like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spanna65 Posted September 13, 2015 Author Share Posted September 13, 2015 Ok.Before I move on to the next team here's an Adelaide court for y'all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silence of the Rams Posted September 13, 2015 Share Posted September 13, 2015 Love the wordmarkAlso is Bathurst considered a city? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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