davidmiller5 Posted November 20, 2015 Share Posted November 20, 2015 You mention that Geddes Town is green and purple because of the Geddes tartan pattern. How about incorporating the tartan pattern into the third jersey? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wgeddes122 Posted November 20, 2015 Author Share Posted November 20, 2015 You mention that Geddes Town is green and purple because of the Geddes tartan pattern. How about incorporating the tartan pattern into the third jersey?the tartan also includes red, so I'm just gonna pass Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheGiantsFan Posted November 21, 2015 Share Posted November 21, 2015 Nice concepts all around in this series! The kits have been superior, and the crests just as nice (Williamsport is my favorite of the bunch). I have one critique though: I kinda think the dog and lions in Geddes Town and West Norman, respectively, are a bit small on the crests. With some enlargening, the crests can be a bit more proportioned, in my opinion.Keep it up with these awesome concepts, and don't let the lack of replies bring you down! BEHANCE | PORTFOLIO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wgeddes122 Posted November 22, 2015 Author Share Posted November 22, 2015 First off I want to say thanks to everyone who has commented so far, please keep following the conceptMeekton-The town located on the southeastern point of Gedland known for its green hills and shear cliffs along the coastlineMeekton Unitedpentagonal crest with a gray MHome kit- all white kit with dark gray accents and a multi gray sashAway kit- two tone half and half gray kitthird kit- all green kit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XenonDesigns Posted November 22, 2015 Share Posted November 22, 2015 Meekton looks great! I like the grayscale and the gradient on the green. Also, the amount of replies on soccer leagues tend to be low. I have one myself but I didn't know weather or not it was good because it lacked CC. Keep it up because these are all amazing, kits and crests. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wgeddes122 Posted November 22, 2015 Author Share Posted November 22, 2015 Meekton looks great! I like the grayscale and the gradient on the green. Also, the amount of replies on soccer leagues tend to be low. I have one myself but I didn't know weather or not it was good because it lacked CC. Keep it up because these are all amazing, kits and crests.thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miker Posted November 23, 2015 Share Posted November 23, 2015 I totally am in love with these concepts! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wgeddes122 Posted November 24, 2015 Author Share Posted November 24, 2015 I totally am in love with these concepts!thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
H11K Posted November 24, 2015 Share Posted November 24, 2015 I like the Meekton concept as a whole, The tones of gray really appeal to me , is that template available in .PSD/ i just have to ask haha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wgeddes122 Posted November 24, 2015 Author Share Posted November 24, 2015 I like the Meekton concept as a whole, The tones of gray really appeal to me , is that template available in .PSD/ i just have to ask haha.I don't know about the template, the template is from Raysox. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wgeddes122 Posted November 24, 2015 Author Share Posted November 24, 2015 Olympique Alsace- the other French based team in the league, Olympique have a long standing rivalry with west norman united, however there is a slight difference West Norman is french based were Alsace is a mix of french and german which is reflected in the club and crest. the crest features the white with red stripe design of the flag of Strasbourg typically seen as a german symbol combined with the french fleur di lis.-home kit is a classic all white look with a red sashaway kit- all red kit with yellow stripe gradient side panelsthird kit- all yellow fleur di lis kit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kgrroth Posted November 24, 2015 Share Posted November 24, 2015 I have to say I am really digging this series. Thus far Nairn City is my favorite. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wgeddes122 Posted November 24, 2015 Author Share Posted November 24, 2015 I have to say I am really digging this series. Thus far Nairn City is my favorite.thanks, I don't think i could pick a favorite, I really enjoyed just getting to make up designs and clubs, you have so much more freedom than if you do a redesign of a real club Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wgeddes122 Posted December 4, 2015 Author Share Posted December 4, 2015 Sorry for such a delay, school has been busy. Port Jackson Mariners Kirkpatrick Rovers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted December 4, 2015 Share Posted December 4, 2015 Some great work here. Love the subtle hoops on Jackson's primary, and the dual tone sash on the Kirkpatrick clash. One critique I have would be to try to limit the empty space in some of your crests, particularly Jackson's. It may work to just have the anchor as the crest, with the FC. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wgeddes122 Posted December 4, 2015 Author Share Posted December 4, 2015 Some great work here. Love the subtle hoops on Jackson's primary, and the dual tone sash on the Kirkpatrick clash. One critique I have would be to try to limit the empty space in some of your crests, particularly Jackson's. It may work to just have the anchor as the crest, with the FC.thanks for the feedback, I was having trouble with that crest , Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wgeddes122 Posted December 4, 2015 Author Share Posted December 4, 2015 Theastown Republic FC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted December 4, 2015 Share Posted December 4, 2015 Another classy set. My concern is that this is far too similar to Jackson, with the sublimated hoops and blue and gold. I would for sure flip the green and blue kits, and maybe tweak the clash to be a bit more unique Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wgeddes122 Posted December 4, 2015 Author Share Posted December 4, 2015 Another classy set. My concern is that this is far too similar to Jackson, with the sublimated hoops and blue and gold. I would for sure flip the green and blue kits, and maybe tweak the clash to be a bit more uniqueSo the crest are the same colors, its not like that doesn't happen in real life. and all the kits are different, its not like if they played they wouldn't be able to pick two kits that clash Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MDTrey4 Posted December 4, 2015 Share Posted December 4, 2015 Love whats going on with Theastown. Kind of reminds me of what Notre Dame would do given a professional soccer team. Also on the Jackson team, just something to make those hoops a little more unique would be working the rope from the logo into it. The easiest thing would be to just convert the stripes into the rope Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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