AAO Posted January 15, 2005 Share Posted January 15, 2005 Ok, I sheared the knight/horse more to make it actually look somewhat 'charging', and made the knight/horse look more uniform. I wanted to do a bevel, like the Titans/Nationals/Old Rockets had just to see how it would look, but i cant figure out how to do it. I'm not totally happy with the C/Sword logo so i'll probably play with that idea some more, but here's the package: Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted January 15, 2005 Share Posted January 15, 2005 Looking good. Just a couple nitpicks...The sword across the C (tertiary) can make the logo look like an "E" at smaller sizes.I think the wordmark would read better if the crossbars of the H and the A were dropped lower and curved to follow the curve of the cape.The knight still seems like he and the horse are trotting rather than galloping towards an attack...if you can lean the knight forward more it will look they're charging. Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wheateater Posted January 15, 2005 Share Posted January 15, 2005 Great job, again, AAO.Yeah, the only thing really is making the knight lean forward about 15 degrees. Right now, it looks as if he and his horse are preparing to joust with another knight, but not actually in the process of galloping towards the other guy. The horse looks good, but Sir Chantilly needs to get pumped or else he's dead. Otherwise, fantastic work. Wagner Athletic Group11-2 Saskatoon Steeds (WAFL)-NFL-2014 Western Conference Champions / 8-5 Calgary Pronghorns (TNFF)-CFL-2014 Confederation Cup XI Champions14-6-2 Saskatoon Yellowheads (XHL)-NHL-1st, Gretzky Conference / 5-4-0 Saskatoon Czars (MLH)-AHL-T2nd, Calder Conference7-1-6 VfL Dortmund (Weltliga)-Bundesliga-3rd, League / 5-1-5 West End AFC (WFL)-EPL-T5th, League14-7 Saskatoon Sheiks (AA)-MLB-2014 Founder's Cup Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hrivnak Posted January 15, 2005 Share Posted January 15, 2005 Awesome!As someone who actually graduated from Chantilly, I give it a thumbs up. Though, I liked the Air Force type lightning bolt we used when I was a student there. But I know they've trended back to the knight.By the way, in response to a post in the other thread, our "fight" song was actually "Chantilly Lace." Talk about lame. I had to play it when I was in band there... ack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andrewharrington Posted January 15, 2005 Share Posted January 15, 2005 i agree with jp, but i think it needs more than a lean. hes really not holding the lance high enough. he should be leaned forward about 15 and crouched lower, and he should be holding the lance securely with a hand and have the rest of the handle stuck underneath his armpit. chack out some more reference for a great joust position. also, the flourish, the mane, and the eye still need a visit in my opinion, as well as the text, like jp noted. youre getting there with this one. I still don't have a website, but I have a dribbble now! http://dribbble.com/andyharry [The postings on this site are my own and do not necessarily represent the position, strategy or opinions of adidas and/or its brands.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted January 15, 2005 Author Share Posted January 15, 2005 k thanks for the input guys, my main concern was the c/sword tertiary, when i was putting it together i realized it would look like an E, your right jp. So here's an update: Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stampman Posted January 15, 2005 Share Posted January 15, 2005 Have to agree with those above--more lean...and a bit more flowing of the plume as well will give more movement here--but good work--and it is improving, it just needs that litle tweak... Comic Sans walks into a bar, and the bartender says, "Sorry, we don't serve your type here." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted January 15, 2005 Author Share Posted January 15, 2005 I think the wordmark would read better if the crossbars of the H and the A were dropped lower and curved to follow the curve of the cape..... dude howd i miss that...best idea...too bad im not home right now to do it. thanks Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dilbert Posted January 16, 2005 Share Posted January 16, 2005 Purple/Black/Gray/White is one of the best color combos. I say that mostly because they are my school colors! Signature intentionally left blank Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stupidsuck Posted January 21, 2005 Share Posted January 21, 2005 nice to see a local school, re-doneI went to Broad Run years ago and we were handily killed by Chantilly in football for a few timesnice job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted January 21, 2005 Author Share Posted January 21, 2005 thanks Behance Network || ianbakar.com || Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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