shiznit1083 Posted January 18, 2005 Share Posted January 18, 2005 Gentlemen, this is a concept for a fantasy basketball team I'm a part of. What do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nitroseed Posted January 18, 2005 Share Posted January 18, 2005 That looks sweet, man. The only thing that really bothers me about it is the difference in the wings. The one at the rear is very thick, while the one in the front is somewhat thin.Otherwise, I really like this. The wordmark is very nice as well. Good jorb, Mikey! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted January 18, 2005 Share Posted January 18, 2005 Awesome job, and what nitro said. The Right Wing is much shorter than the left. Still a cool logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andrewharrington Posted January 18, 2005 Share Posted January 18, 2005 its a great logo. i echo the sentiments about the wings. i think they would be better suited if the front one were larger than the one in the back. my only other gripe is the shape of the head. it looks a tad too "pointy," like an egg. it seems as if it should be more "round" than egg shaped as it is now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiznit1083 Posted January 20, 2005 Author Share Posted January 20, 2005 Well, I finally had a chance to update the logo. I changed the wing as well as simplified the colors and I also created a new wordmark. Let me know what you think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColeJ Posted January 20, 2005 Share Posted January 20, 2005 ooohh... that's an awesome wordmark.nice job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ez Street Posted January 20, 2005 Share Posted January 20, 2005 very nice Mikey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pollux Posted January 20, 2005 Share Posted January 20, 2005 That looks really good! Nice work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barnesdesign Posted January 20, 2005 Share Posted January 20, 2005 I liked your original font choice, but I think that the newer version fits better and is more complete. Maybe put a slant on "Oklahoma City" like the rest of the wordmark. Good job with the changes on the bird. You've got a very clean, very sharp (no pun intended) logo. Good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pagan696 Posted January 20, 2005 Share Posted January 20, 2005 looks good.with the new wordmark check the blue border over the "Tai" in tails something seems off with the depth of the drop shadow. also the "S" and the "s" drop shadow should be curved like the lower part of the "T". and/or add the upper red accents to the "S, i, T, l".(i know... picky, picky) good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AAO Posted January 20, 2005 Share Posted January 20, 2005 I really think i liked your first wordmark better, along with the logo. I loved the wings on the first one. The wordmark on the first one also worked better in sync with the logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_cynic Posted January 20, 2005 Share Posted January 20, 2005 Hmm, I think you have a good start but I don't know what to think about the color on the wings. It almost looks like a butterfly! The head almost looks like the head of a bald eagle as well. Here's my suggestion.........add some more detail to the bird itself, post it on here and we'll go from there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andrewharrington Posted January 20, 2005 Share Posted January 20, 2005 haha please dont. the logo is almost flawless. the wings are much improved. the floating gray piece is gone, and they are in much better perspective. this really looks great. i like both wordmarks. the bold outlines and drop shadows remind me of the new tigercats wordmark, a great one as well. the original was solid and easy to read. its a coin flip for me on the wordmark, but the logo is top notch. one of the best ive seen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiznit1083 Posted January 20, 2005 Author Share Posted January 20, 2005 First of all, I want to thank you guys for the comments, I really appreciate your critisisms. It's helped develop the logo.I will be working on uniforms and secondary logos tonight so expect something soon. Thanks again guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_cynic Posted January 20, 2005 Share Posted January 20, 2005 First of all, I want to thank you guys for the comments, I really appreciate your critisisms. It's helped develop the logo.I will be working on uniforms and secondary logos tonight so expect something soon. Thanks again guys. So that's that? You're not going to do anything else with the primary logo? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
paynomind Posted January 21, 2005 Share Posted January 21, 2005 I vote that the primary has acheived perfection, and should be left alone. As well as the wordmark. i wasnt a fan of the first wordmark, but this one...is brilliams! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthMan Posted January 21, 2005 Share Posted January 21, 2005 really nice i likey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiznit1083 Posted January 21, 2005 Author Share Posted January 21, 2005 First of all, I want to thank you guys for the comments, I really appreciate your critisisms. It's helped develop the logo.I will be working on uniforms and secondary logos tonight so expect something soon. Thanks again guys. So that's that? You're not going to do anything else with the primary logo? I may or may not tweak the primary. I've received enough positive feedback to leave it alone. I read your post but I was going for a less detailed logo. I may tweak it if some more issues with it come forward, but I think it's ok for now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andrewharrington Posted January 21, 2005 Share Posted January 21, 2005 exactly. it needs no more detail. it HAS achieved perfection. an all black helmet with that bird on it would be among the best helmets evar! wait, is this even a football team?shoot. well, it should be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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