CrookedThumb Posted July 20, 2003 Share Posted July 20, 2003 I took everybody's advice on adding more designs to my hockey concepts.homeroad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notch Novelty Posted July 20, 2003 Share Posted July 20, 2003 I like whites the best but thoses pants should be all black no stripes on the side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STL FANATIC Posted July 20, 2003 Share Posted July 20, 2003 Now your getting it. This isn't my favorite jersey, but the striping design is intriguing. JUSTIN STRIEBEL | PORTFOLIO | RESUME | CONTACT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hockeygator Posted July 20, 2003 Share Posted July 20, 2003 I think the road would look better if the pants had white stripes, and maybe even take it down to one stripe. I like the overall design on the sweater except how the color goes to a point on the sleeves. If they just went straight across on the top and then straight across from where it breaks in the chest. Whatcha gonna do when the Ultimate MegaPowers run wild over you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roger Clemente Posted July 20, 2003 Share Posted July 20, 2003 They look good, but the dark one could use some white and/or silver (especially if you're using the silver logo, otherwise use the regular logo). The white jersey could really use more orange in it.I like those pants. If it was a white stripe instead of silver, it's be perfect.Good job.--Roger "Time?" Clemente. Follow me on Twitter if you care: @Animal_Clans.My opinion may or may not be the same as yours. The choice is up to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sc49erfan15 Posted July 20, 2003 Share Posted July 20, 2003 Much better. Not my favorite jersey either, but I think the striping pattern could work somewhere on another team. Production work is getting better, but I still see where you could improve... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrookedThumb Posted July 20, 2003 Author Share Posted July 20, 2003 Well, I changed the pants stripe from silver to white. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VandyDelphia Mike Posted July 20, 2003 Share Posted July 20, 2003 unimaniac:I like how you've went to a unique striping pattern on the hockey jeresey. We don't see that enough in hockey concepts. A lot of people will juist color in between the lines on the template, thinking it's still a kindergarten coloring book.I think this concept suffers if anything other than a single digit number or the #11 is worn, unless the numbers are in a contrasting color from black, in which case the numbers can spill over into the black area. That's not a problem for your road whites, but it would mean the home oranges would need white player numbers.Lastly ... no sleeve numbers? No shoulder patches? Not criticizing, just noticing.Keep up the good work! NCAA Baseball Champions | 2014, 2019 facebook Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrookedThumb Posted July 20, 2003 Author Share Posted July 20, 2003 Lastly ... no sleeve numbers? No shoulder patches? Not criticizing, just noticing.Keep up the good work!I don't know how to put those on. I only have Claris Works paint. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STL FANATIC Posted July 20, 2003 Share Posted July 20, 2003 I've yet to produce a hockey concept in Illustrator. It has been a while since my last one though. But, don't under estimate ClarisWorks. When I was rolling them out, I believe I was thought of as a good hockey designer. That, well actually AppleWorks a slightly newer version, was what I used.To put sleeves numbers and shoulder patches on use your "Transform" option on the toolbar. From their you can "scale" it smaller if you wanna put a logo on the shoulder, and you can also "rotate" it. JUSTIN STRIEBEL | PORTFOLIO | RESUME | CONTACT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jkrdevil Posted July 20, 2003 Share Posted July 20, 2003 The only big problem I have is the logo. It's not you but I hate that 3rd jersey flyers logo. Why couldn't have the just used the regular on with an oranger jersey. After all that is what they had and it was good (well, for the flyers). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrookedThumb Posted July 20, 2003 Author Share Posted July 20, 2003 What does that button look like? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jkrdevil Posted July 21, 2003 Share Posted July 21, 2003 it's the same logo, just without the silver. It looks a lot better. They use it on their home and road uniforms. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-kj Posted July 21, 2003 Share Posted July 21, 2003 I think he meant the button in Claris.I'm not liking them, really. Especially the road, it's too dark for a supposed light jersey.(And I'm still seeing the road as grey.) Buy some t-shirts and stuff at KJ Shop! KJ Branded | Behance portfolio POTD 2013-08-22 On 7/14/2012 at 2:20 AM, tajmccall said: When it comes to style, ya'll really should listen to Kev. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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