Missouri Attack Concept

[AAO]

Wow, appreciate the input guys. Here's an update--addition of gray, bevel in the wordmark, shortened the bottom of 'ttac' in 'Attack', tweaked the bird some.

And yea i know the jersey design is far out like i said, but who said it was for the NFL? It could work for arena football.

[Bearcats]

And yea i know the jersey design is far out like i said, but who said it was for the NFL? It could work for arena football.

I'm just saying: I don't even think an Arena team would wear piping around the crotch or backside area.

[AAO]

Well who knows, I was just experimenting, moving around, trying different things, which is key in design.

[Gazzzaf]

The primary logo now has greater balance at the top and looks great, likewise with the wordmark. However, your secondary logo with the A does not look right. In my opinion, I would use the birds head at the original angle (as in the top secondary) and possibly incorporate the A into the bird's wing (or even highlight the M shape in the wing for Missouri).

Still, concerning the name, I would find something more traditional such as a bird name or a name that relates specifically to the bird, I'm not too cluey on team names in the US but Firebirds (which I know now has been used after a bit of research), or Bombers (as in dive bombing, borrowed from the AFL), seem ok to me.

The design has a little too much piping, I consider piping to serve mainly as giving the jersey structure. Too much and the design becomes overly complicated and divided. I dont like the piping on the shoulders but do like the piping across the chest, I would like to see red between the gold lines on both to break it up a bit.

Love the silver in the logo as well, a good change.

[AAO]

Cool. Thanks again for the input.

[Grish]

I like the new addtition, I would consider the pant striping as everyone has noted. I say this because at first I did not see what they pointed out and now that is all I see.

I still think you need to tweak the helmet strip and face mask color. Make it more in line with they rest of the striping and concept.

[Wingz017]

The logo looks like a PO'd version of the Louisville cardinal. Overall I give it a 9 out of 10, the piping on the pants is a little extreme with the whole "THIS IS THE CROTH REGION, NOTICE THE STYLISH PIPING AROUND IT" emphasis and I'm not compltely sold on the numbering, but I'd pay good money for that.

[AAO]

haha thanks

[powersurge]

Very cool! Love the unis!

The helmet is interesting....I'd love to see more views of how the stripe would really look, but I like it.

Only thing, and I hate to say anything critical, is the facemask. It has to be either black (my vote) red, or yellow, not gray

other than that GREAT JOB!

[AAO]

thanks bud

[BCBoy]

Awesome job as always, AAO. I never seen a bad or even sub-par concept from you. I love the addition to grey to the logo. The M as a wing is absolutely brilliant!

[AAO]

thanks. glad to see everyone caught the M in the wing.

[RVZ]

Okay, I just want to say this is my first post of all time. I like modern uniforms but i think the piping is a little over the top. If you could tone down the piping I think it would be pretty cool.

[eqtmgr]

From a concept standpoint, I really like the set. It's very forward thinking and looks great. With that being said, from a manufacturing standpoint, it would never be porduced by a major company because they would have to change the way that they cut and sew pants. If you were really to get it made, the entire uni would have to be custom.

But as I started with, this is a really great concept! Great job Ian!

[Lumbergh]

like the logo, hate the unis, too busy for arena or nfl

[FiddySicks]

Have you thought at all about making the area in between the gold piping on the pants and jerseys a different color?