ColtzFan101 Posted November 3, 2005 Share Posted November 3, 2005 I only did the home jersey sorry C&C Please BUSCH STADIUM III IS COMING,ARE YOU READY?INDIANAPOLIS COLTS (12-4-0) NEXT GAME VS KANSAS CITYTB LIGHTNING (19-20-2) NEXT GAME @ COLORADOATLANTA THRASHERS(24-12-6) NEXT GAME VS PHOENIXCOLTS BACK TO BACK PLAYOFF APPEARANCES 05-06/06-07 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BCBoy Posted November 3, 2005 Share Posted November 3, 2005 I would darken up the light blue you have on the pants so it's similar to the darker blue you have on the pants. The yellow secondary on the sleeve looks out of place IMO, because it is so bright compared to the rest of the jersey. Cool concept though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
powersurge Posted November 3, 2005 Share Posted November 3, 2005 Agreed, the tough decision you have to make here is whether or not to include the yellow...it will either change it and make it better or worse. As we used to say in design class: Just make sure you save the file and try something else Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shumway Posted November 3, 2005 Share Posted November 3, 2005 Actually, white's the road jersey in football, but whatever. the highlights on the pants look really weird to me, aren't they supposed to be a shadow on the pants. Unless you're trying to go for a shiny look....or if, by some chance, those are the stripes you're going with. I agree that the yellow logo is out of place. I'd try to incorporate the yellow in there somewhere. It's a solid start, I'd say just try to work around with it a little, and I think you'll really be onto something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyclopsis Joe Posted November 3, 2005 Share Posted November 3, 2005 I would like it..but the shoulder has a really big BASKETBALL on it. I don't speak for democrats, democrats don't speak for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
msberg Posted November 3, 2005 Share Posted November 3, 2005 Looks good. I would add yellow trim around the #s and maybe yellow stripe on the helmet. Dallas and Wasshington wear white at home Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kingssss Posted November 3, 2005 Share Posted November 3, 2005 Fix up the pants and don't put a baseketball on the shoulder. Good idea. If you work on it, and make some changes, you could have something nice here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHcreative Posted November 3, 2005 Share Posted November 3, 2005 I only did the home jersey sorry C&C Please Nice work dude. The only thing that I would do is make the basketball on the shoulder a little smaller, its kinda too big, I would add just a little yellow but thats just me. I like the highlights on the pants it gives a nice touch to the uniform. Again Nice Work!EDIT: Shumway was right white is supposed to be on the road and dark should be home, but whatever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nwtrailtrekker Posted November 3, 2005 Share Posted November 3, 2005 i think he means the grizzlies basketball home jersey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColtzFan101 Posted November 4, 2005 Author Share Posted November 4, 2005 Brand new update to it. Added darker color,changed around shoulder logo and changed number trim.Is this a big step up from my previous works? BUSCH STADIUM III IS COMING,ARE YOU READY?INDIANAPOLIS COLTS (12-4-0) NEXT GAME VS KANSAS CITYTB LIGHTNING (19-20-2) NEXT GAME @ COLORADOATLANTA THRASHERS(24-12-6) NEXT GAME VS PHOENIXCOLTS BACK TO BACK PLAYOFF APPEARANCES 05-06/06-07 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHcreative Posted November 4, 2005 Share Posted November 4, 2005 NICE!P.S. I love your copyright logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColtzFan101 Posted November 4, 2005 Author Share Posted November 4, 2005 NICE!P.S. I love your copyright logo. Thank you rams and thank you for the copyright logo you made me BUSCH STADIUM III IS COMING,ARE YOU READY?INDIANAPOLIS COLTS (12-4-0) NEXT GAME VS KANSAS CITYTB LIGHTNING (19-20-2) NEXT GAME @ COLORADOATLANTA THRASHERS(24-12-6) NEXT GAME VS PHOENIXCOLTS BACK TO BACK PLAYOFF APPEARANCES 05-06/06-07 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-kj Posted November 4, 2005 Share Posted November 4, 2005 Well, it certainly is the Grizzlies logos on a football jersey. Buy some t-shirts and stuff at KJ Shop! KJ Branded | Behance portfolio POTD 2013-08-22 On 7/14/2012 at 2:20 AM, tajmccall said: When it comes to style, ya'll really should listen to Kev. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColtzFan101 Posted November 4, 2005 Author Share Posted November 4, 2005 I believe i'm in my big break BUSCH STADIUM III IS COMING,ARE YOU READY?INDIANAPOLIS COLTS (12-4-0) NEXT GAME VS KANSAS CITYTB LIGHTNING (19-20-2) NEXT GAME @ COLORADOATLANTA THRASHERS(24-12-6) NEXT GAME VS PHOENIXCOLTS BACK TO BACK PLAYOFF APPEARANCES 05-06/06-07 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHcreative Posted November 4, 2005 Share Posted November 4, 2005 NICE!P.S. I love your copyright logo. Thank you rams and thank you for the copyright logo you made me No problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
f-ing palko Posted November 4, 2005 Share Posted November 4, 2005 whats going on with the pants?I wouldnt mess around with shading like that in Paint. In Illustrator maybe, but the effect is lost here. By using the same light blue on the shoulders as the "shading" on the pants, it just looks like weird stripes. How we to know what is shading and what is actual color differentiation. You know what Im saying? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColtzFan101 Posted November 4, 2005 Author Share Posted November 4, 2005 Ya i kinda went for the shiny look BUSCH STADIUM III IS COMING,ARE YOU READY?INDIANAPOLIS COLTS (12-4-0) NEXT GAME VS KANSAS CITYTB LIGHTNING (19-20-2) NEXT GAME @ COLORADOATLANTA THRASHERS(24-12-6) NEXT GAME VS PHOENIXCOLTS BACK TO BACK PLAYOFF APPEARANCES 05-06/06-07 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jigga Posted November 4, 2005 Share Posted November 4, 2005 I think this is a good start (especially since you're only 13). I agree with the others that aren't feeling the shading effect on the pants, too bad you don't have a vector based program. I also think adding a gold outline to the bear would be a good touch and separate the dark blue helmet from that dark blue outline. Add some TV numbers and some kind of stripes and/or piping to this too...It's solid, but it could be much better with time. No need to hurry. On January 16, 2013 at 3:49 PM, NJTank said: Btw this is old hat for Notre Dame. Knits Rockne made up George Tip's death bed speech. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shumway Posted November 4, 2005 Share Posted November 4, 2005 I think you should've kept the basketball yellow on the sleeves. Now the yellow outline looks out of place. Or, put some yellow piping in somewhere. Not like, Nike piping, but some sorta piping. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitaminD Posted November 4, 2005 Share Posted November 4, 2005 Thin gold piping would work. You went from none to a little too much with the number trim. And since it isn't really anywhere else, it looks even more out of place, though it is part of the Grizzlies' package.Another idea: the Grizzlies deisgned their own custom font for the hoops unis - why not use it here for the sake of continuity? "Start spreading the news... They're leavin' today... Won't get to be a part of it... In old New York..."In order for the Mets' run of 12 losses in 17 games to mean something, the Phillies still had to win 13 of 17. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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