shiznit1083 Posted January 29, 2004 Share Posted January 29, 2004 Gentleman, I mad this about a month ago, but I am finally posting it. what do you think?Monmouth Fighting Scotts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NJTank Posted January 29, 2004 Share Posted January 29, 2004 Not too bad www.sportsecyclopedia.com For the best in sports history go to the Sports E-Cyclopedia at http://www.sportsecyclopedia.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiznit1083 Posted January 29, 2004 Author Share Posted January 29, 2004 I really feel like I'm missing something, but I just don't know. You guys are great at seeing things I don't. Hell, my Cougars concept went from the Gene Challot Cat to what it is now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STL FANATIC Posted January 29, 2004 Share Posted January 29, 2004 It looks great.Perhaps a snarl would work better. JUSTIN STRIEBEL | PORTFOLIO | RESUME | CONTACT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil Posted January 29, 2004 Share Posted January 29, 2004 IMO it's missing facial texture and depth definition. The eyes and nose and mouth is good, but everything in between seems to be missing.Sorry, no hilarious human comparison like Gene Shallot, but that's what I feel is missing.Oh, and the perspective of his nose seems a little off... it's like it needs to be rotated clockwise about 30 degrees. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiznit1083 Posted January 29, 2004 Author Share Posted January 29, 2004 Sorry, no hilarious human comparison like Gene ShallotToo bad, I still crack up laughing when I think about it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tajmccall Posted January 29, 2004 Share Posted January 29, 2004 Its the nose...its missingAdd shading for a terriors distinctive snout and accompying fur around it, its kind shaggy is it not?But your definitely on to something, nice job. Store 1 Store 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cuss16 Posted January 29, 2004 Share Posted January 29, 2004 I like the wordmark and the color schemes you chose but I am not too excited about the pictograph sort to speak. Doh! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMac Posted January 29, 2004 Share Posted January 29, 2004 Damn rights... glad something that came from my twisted skull will go down in infamy... and by that I mean the Gene Shallot comment...i agree with sy... somethings missing.... GDB... Brothers from other Mothers www.pifflespodcast.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mikeb7 Posted January 29, 2004 Share Posted January 29, 2004 i LOVE the wordmark.. but I'm not a big fan of the dog illustration itself Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
paynomind Posted January 29, 2004 Share Posted January 29, 2004 I lik eit in general, but for the first 20 seconds I looked at it, I shouldn't figure out what the images was of. It looked like everything below his eyes was the back half of a worm. I was trying to make it into an anteater, or a hippo, then BAM i saw it was a Scottie Dog. I definately think it needs a shadow to define the snout, and a bigger mouth - dogs mouth go most fo the way back on the snout.But you are well on your way. NCFA Sunset Beach Tech - Octopi ΓΔΒ! Going to college gets you closer to the real world, kind of like climbing a tree gets you closer to the moon. "...a nice illustration of what you get when skill, talent, and precedent are deducted from 'creativity.' " - James Howard Kunstler Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ez Street Posted January 29, 2004 Share Posted January 29, 2004 i agree about the nose, it's not distictive. Should have more snout defenition. @DavidStreeter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jeh-see Posted January 29, 2004 Share Posted January 29, 2004 I am on the wagon about the nose, like Sy said, it needs to be rotated and like others said it needs a TAD more fur but dont over do it. Also, I think adding a collar with the club colors would really set it off, but that JMO.~UJ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil Posted January 30, 2004 Share Posted January 30, 2004 Also... IMO the ear on my right looks closer to me than the one on my left... opposite from what it should be, given the perspective.The wordmark is nice... good job on that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stampman Posted January 30, 2004 Share Posted January 30, 2004 Man, I must be half asleep--well it is late--but I thought it was an odd looking bearded man, but now that I've come back and read the comments--okay--a Scottish Terrier--I see it--the snout should be more prominent--still, it's better than anything I'd come up with. Comic Sans walks into a bar, and the bartender says, "Sorry, we don't serve your type here." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steve-O Posted January 30, 2004 Share Posted January 30, 2004 Hey Shiznit, I tampered with your pooch. I hope you dont mind. Here is what I came up with. It was hard to put a snarl on the lil guy. So I just made him looking super pissed. Hope you like! It is a little rough because I tampered with him in paint so please bear with me!http://www.sportslogos.freehomepage.com/images/fightingscotts.jpgComments and Feedback appreciated! -Steve-O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stampman Posted January 30, 2004 Share Posted January 30, 2004 No offense--but, it looks like a sock puppet! Comic Sans walks into a bar, and the bartender says, "Sorry, we don't serve your type here." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steve-O Posted January 30, 2004 Share Posted January 30, 2004 No offense--but, it looks like a sock puppet!Hahaha, you are too tired Stamp. Go to bed bud. It's your eyes...or maybe it's my design....awwww crap! To hell with this I'm headin' to bed! It's 2 am here in Calgary! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stampman Posted January 30, 2004 Share Posted January 30, 2004 Me too. (and about time too) Comic Sans walks into a bar, and the bartender says, "Sorry, we don't serve your type here." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_cynic Posted January 30, 2004 Share Posted January 30, 2004 No offense--but, it looks like a sock puppet!I don't think I would have caught this without that comment but if you really do look at it for longer enough it does start to appear like a sock. Utah Jazz Retired Number's#1 - Frank Layden - #7 Pete Maravich - #12 John Stockton - #14 Jeff Hornacek - #35 Darrell Griffith - #53 Mark EatonRetired Number's To Come#00 The Bear (Best Mascot In NBA) - #4 Adrian Dantley - #32 Karl "The Mailman" Malone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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