elliott Posted September 6, 2008 Share Posted September 6, 2008 Well, here is my take on the Thunder. I had been working on a logo for a football team I was going to call the L.A. Goliaths like 6 months ago, with the image of a full body gladiator holding a lightning bolt. I could never really get the crest right so I pretty much gave up on the idea. I tried to revamp the logo for the Thunder, but I could never get it to look right, so I used the image of an arm holding the lightning rather than a full (upper) body. My primary logo here has that image, and also some storm clouds in the background. I think this logo is still a work in progress though and I would love to get some suggestions on how to make it better!So I will continue to work on the full-body crest and if I get it right I will post it. But I did want to post my logo, along with wordmarks and uniforms as a complete rebranding project. So far:-I am happy with the uniforms-I am sort of happy with the wordmarks-I am not completely happy with the logo, and I want to add more logos.Well, I need all the help I can get, but here are the logos/wordmarks:Here are the home/aways:And an alternate for good measure:Thanks for all C+C. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Conrad. Posted September 6, 2008 Share Posted September 6, 2008 hmm...somethin feels weird about the hand in the primary. maybe it needs to be a bit more detailed, it seems over-simplified.number font seems a lil awkward with the low x-height, and i dont really like the rounded bottom of the side panels.the colors are nice tho, and the design of the jersey tops is nice. Red Goat Creations :: Graphic Design Solutions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
loudog024 Posted September 6, 2008 Share Posted September 6, 2008 I agree the hand looks a little odd in the logo and the jerseys overall just feel like college jerseys to me. The number definitely aren't working for this concept. You're on to something though, certainly something better than that garbage they actually chose, it just needs some cleaning up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarsHockey Posted September 6, 2008 Share Posted September 6, 2008 Jerseys are golden. just maybe raise the number, name.the wordmarks are pretty good, could use some work.the primary logo has a good idea/thought. a touch-up would help.but overall pretty nice. 98% of people claim to have "brought sexy back." Well, I'm the 2% that never left.Hometown HeroesDallas Stars- Brenden Morrow // Marty Turco // Loui ErikksonDallas Mavericks- Dirk Nowitzki // Jason Kidd // Jason TerryDallas Cowboys- Terrell Owens // DeMarcus Ware // Terence Newman // Felix JonesTexas Rangers- Ian Kinsler // Elvis Andrus // Marlon Byrd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jake22 Posted September 7, 2008 Share Posted September 7, 2008 hey elliot, i looked at this a few times and thought nothing of it. then i saw something that im not even sure u meant to do. on the home set, the logo on the shorts from far out when u cant see the outline looks like a "T". i think that is the coolest thing ever. also the yellow jersey is amazing, i love yellow basketball jerseys and the slowly thinning. great concept overall!!maby your best yet, maby!!! THE ROCKIES STIRRUP PROJECTPart 1, Part 2...Oregon Duck Tracker 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
boshalladay Posted September 7, 2008 Share Posted September 7, 2008 Love the uniforms, but I was thinking if you flipped the hand upside-down in the logo, you would create a T for Thunder. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted September 7, 2008 Author Share Posted September 7, 2008 Update:-tweaked the number font-changed the pants to unrounded-moved up nameplate and back numeral Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Conrad. Posted September 7, 2008 Share Posted September 7, 2008 i like the numbers and pants design.the logo on the shorts needs to fit inside the color panel, and i dont like the CITY below OKLAHOMA on the away jersey. Red Goat Creations :: Graphic Design Solutions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BBTV Posted September 7, 2008 Share Posted September 7, 2008 Back numbers are waaay too big - you could never fit 33 on there. "The views expressed here are mine and do not reflect the official opinion of my employer or the organization through which the Internet was accessed." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scottysprings Posted September 7, 2008 Share Posted September 7, 2008 Reminds me of a Sabres crossover. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sc8b Posted September 7, 2008 Share Posted September 7, 2008 I like it, but it reminds me a lot of the Chargers crest logo with a lightning bolt. And the various versions that they have had throughout the years cover most aspects of your logo. It's a very nice idea though... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
southpawstu19 Posted September 8, 2008 Share Posted September 8, 2008 looks too much like the pacers if you ask me...keep the color scheme that they actually chose and see what happens Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blitz Posted September 8, 2008 Share Posted September 8, 2008 Looks good.... Not sure about the striping on the jerseys... kinda predator-ish.... better than what they picked though, FAR FAR BETTER!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted September 9, 2008 Author Share Posted September 9, 2008 Here is another update, with a darker orange. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarsHockey Posted September 9, 2008 Share Posted September 9, 2008 Here is another update, with a darker orange.Wow, these colors complement each other very nicely! A+, man. 98% of people claim to have "brought sexy back." Well, I'm the 2% that never left.Hometown HeroesDallas Stars- Brenden Morrow // Marty Turco // Loui ErikksonDallas Mavericks- Dirk Nowitzki // Jason Kidd // Jason TerryDallas Cowboys- Terrell Owens // DeMarcus Ware // Terence Newman // Felix JonesTexas Rangers- Ian Kinsler // Elvis Andrus // Marlon Byrd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
karposter Posted September 9, 2008 Share Posted September 9, 2008 nice workbut can u try a jersey with the real team colors and the real logo... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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