crashcarson15 Posted November 8, 2008 Share Posted November 8, 2008 I had the idea to use the logo with the state of Florida in it, and here's how it came out:Home:Road:Alternate: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brass Posted November 8, 2008 Share Posted November 8, 2008 I think this needs a little bit of a cleanup. The numbers and letters are very pixelated. Honestly, it looks like you took 5 minutes on this and posted it. Slapped a logo, drew some some lines, coloured them, and that's it. On 4/10/2017 at 3:05 PM, Rollins Man said: what the hell is ccslc? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJ Sands Posted November 8, 2008 Share Posted November 8, 2008 The helmet needs to be white with the white sweater. And change the helmet to black for the other two. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted November 8, 2008 Share Posted November 8, 2008 I think this needs a little bit of a cleanup. The numbers and letters are very pixelated. Honestly, it looks like you took 5 minutes on this and posted it. Slapped a logo, drew some some lines, coloured them, and that's it.Agreed, it is indeed extremely messy. Number placement is off. Socks? I don't think so, if you play hockey you know that both regions would be covered by pants/skates. And it would look bad even if you could see it. Sock striping should be straight. The piping on the back of the white jersey is two different colors. Also, it needs a shoulder logo or TV numbers or both. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuckymack Posted November 8, 2008 Share Posted November 8, 2008 I really like the logo idea, though. The use of the blue and grey in the background almost makes the negative space between the circle and the state look like clouds. Sigs are for sissies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TC Posted November 11, 2008 Share Posted November 11, 2008 quick question. what was your intention with the socks? 1/27/09- It was me, and I am sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crashcarson15 Posted November 11, 2008 Author Share Posted November 11, 2008 quick question. what was your intention with the socks?i'm lazy... its the template... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DelayedPenalty Posted November 11, 2008 Share Posted November 11, 2008 quick question. what was your intention with the socks?i'm lazy... its the template...Clearly. Take more time on your concepts and make them...good. Slapping something together shows that you either don't care, or are just trying to run up your post count. Back to the drawing board from a conceptual basis on this one anyways. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
siegel0572 Posted November 12, 2008 Share Posted November 12, 2008 I had the idea to use the logo with the state of Florida in it, and here's how it came out:Home:Road:Alternate:Not bad overall, needs white in the trim on the blue sweater and grey on the white. Helmet shoud be white on the white sweater. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brass Posted November 12, 2008 Share Posted November 12, 2008 quick question. what was your intention with the socks?i'm lazy... its the template...Then don't post a concept if you're lazy! On 4/10/2017 at 3:05 PM, Rollins Man said: what the hell is ccslc? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
capn89 Posted November 12, 2008 Share Posted November 12, 2008 quick question. what was your intention with the socks?i'm lazy... its the template...Then don't post a concept if you're lazy!Totally agreed. There needs to be SOME effort in concepts if you're going to broadcast them to anyone who makes their way through these boards. I mean if you don't give a damn about the way a concept looks, why make one? Try to pretty-it-up to the best of your ability and use advice you get to make it better. Otherwise it's a waste of everyone's time, including the original designer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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