suedehead Posted December 10, 2008 Share Posted December 10, 2008 This is my first attempt at anything like this, I've got no artistic ability whatsoever, I'm just a hockey fan. I wish I had the talent and know how some of you do, because you do some truly exceptional work here, but I had to settle for making this with various tools found on the web and ms paint.I wanted something my own hockey team could wear, something pretty classic and traditional but also different colors to the usual black, red or blues, so I've gone with a simple horizontal stripe design and claret and sky blue colors.What do you think? Please criticize the concept and not the execution, I already know that is craptastic compared to yours. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DelayedPenalty Posted December 10, 2008 Share Posted December 10, 2008 What do you think? Please criticize the concept and not the execution, I already know that is craptastic compared to yours.Stop being so harsh on yourself! That is 1000% cleaner than a good bit of the concepts people post here (you know who you are...). As far as the overall concept I think it's very nice. I like the color scheme, and the stripe is very classic. Is the logo your creation as well, or is that an existing logo?For a first attempt at a concept this is great! Keep going and keep posting! Can't wait to see what else you come up with! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayJaxon Posted December 10, 2008 Share Posted December 10, 2008 I agree. Your first concept is a good one (you should see my first) ha ha. You did a good job with the tools you had to work with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-kj Posted December 10, 2008 Share Posted December 10, 2008 That looks like Augsburg College's logo, if I'm not mistaken. Buy some t-shirts and stuff at KJ Shop! KJ Branded | Behance portfolio POTD 2013-08-22 On 7/14/2012 at 2:20 AM, tajmccall said: When it comes to style, ya'll really should listen to Kev. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crashcarson15 Posted December 11, 2008 Share Posted December 11, 2008 What do you think? Please criticize the concept and not the execution, I already know that is craptastic compared to yours.Stop being so harsh on yourself! That is 1000% cleaner than a good bit of the concepts people post here (you know who you are...). As far as the overall concept I think it's very nice. I like the color scheme, and the stripe is very classic. Is the logo your creation as well, or is that an existing logo?For a first attempt at a concept this is great! Keep going and keep posting! Can't wait to see what else you come up with!Yep, that's me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stumpygremlin Posted December 11, 2008 Share Posted December 11, 2008 The logo is a recolor (using sky blue instead of silver) of Augsburg's logo. That said, the jerseys are nice. The only thing I'd fix is the collar on the maroon jersey. I'd make it white. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsM29 Posted December 11, 2008 Share Posted December 11, 2008 The logo is a recolor (using sky blue instead of silver) of Augsburg's logo. That said, the jerseys are nice. The only thing I'd fix is the collar on the maroon jersey. I'd make it white. I disagree, you should never make a collar white. They will turn yellow after the first 5 games. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
habsfan1 Posted December 11, 2008 Share Posted December 11, 2008 What happened to the left arm on the white jersey? You might wanna fix that.Now about the concept, I don't think it's craptastic at all. I don't know where you got that idea, it's really nice! Everything flows well together and this would be fantastic for a junior level hockey team. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TC Posted December 12, 2008 Share Posted December 12, 2008 This is your first. Wow, that is pretty fricken good. Add my name to the list of way-worst first concepts. You are way to hard on yourself. 1/27/09- It was me, and I am sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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