crashcarson15 Posted December 13, 2008 Share Posted December 13, 2008 Okay, so I kind of got this idea after my CBJ stars jersey to do something iconic for each of the teams, so next came the Canucks. I used both the SIR logo and the Johnny Canuck logo. Hope you enjoy.Home:Road:C&C Please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted December 13, 2008 Share Posted December 13, 2008 Ooh, I just do not like those stripes. They are a little too distracting and I don't even focus on the main focus of Johnny Canuck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crashcarson15 Posted December 13, 2008 Author Share Posted December 13, 2008 Ooh, I just do not like those stripes. They are a little too distracting and I don't even focus on the main focus of Johnny Canuck.Yeah, that's the stick from the SIR. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
speedy Posted December 13, 2008 Share Posted December 13, 2008 Woah. Pass. A stripping pattern to that effect could, maybe, work. But the way this is laid out simply doesn't. The sleeve numbers are broken in two and that shouldn't happen. I really have no suggestions on how to get the sticks to work properly, I don't think its possible.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TC Posted December 13, 2008 Share Posted December 13, 2008 yeah not really feeling this, and you should take the time to clean it up because some parts look sloppy. a little work could make it look better. btw, i love this template, could you post a link or something? 1/27/09- It was me, and I am sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted December 14, 2008 Share Posted December 14, 2008 Interesting idea, but it just doesn't look good. The striping on the arms should connect. The arm number placement is completely off. It doesn't look like 22, it looks like 2 (stripe large space stripe) 2. Try a shoulder logo. Stick in rink, preferably. Finally, it's very messy, like most of your concepts. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
siegel0572 Posted December 15, 2008 Share Posted December 15, 2008 I agree with everyone else. These don't work. Those stripes are just to much. I like the use of the Johnny Canuck but that's about it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MVP Posted December 15, 2008 Share Posted December 15, 2008 It's nice that you're being creative with the striping, but it just doesn't look very good. And if the numbers are split onto two sticks, the gap between each number will be way too big. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
capn89 Posted December 15, 2008 Share Posted December 15, 2008 What would happen to players with single digit numbers? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
officeglenn Posted December 15, 2008 Share Posted December 15, 2008 What would happen to players with single digit numbers?That was one of my first thoughts too. Another was, what happens when a player has his arms at his sides, like he will 95 per cent of the time? The effect of the stripes being sticks is completely lost then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigmike Posted December 15, 2008 Share Posted December 15, 2008 Interesting idea, but it just doesn't look good. The striping on the arms should connect. The arm number placement is completely off. It doesn't look like 22, it looks like 2 (stripe large space stripe) 2. Try a shoulder logo. Stick in rink, preferably. Finally, it's very messy, like most of your concepts.I couldnt agree more, it is very VERY sloppy, I mean I know i have done some sloppy stuff in the past but you got to listen to everyone and try and clean it up more, also stripes need to connect at the shoulder and you need to just move the numbers down to the sleeve or something. But you need to work on making it cleaner, the outline on the numbers look distorted and the stripes on the away jersey have white spots on them so you need to work on cleaning it up a bit. Check out my new NFL 2016 Series! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crashcarson15 Posted December 15, 2008 Author Share Posted December 15, 2008 Okay, here goes.This is probably not going to work, its just the way it goes. I still have to brainstorm ideas (if any) as to how to make this work. I will try another concept sometime soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TC Posted December 15, 2008 Share Posted December 15, 2008 Okay, here goes.This is probably not going to work, its just the way it goes. I still have to brainstorm ideas (if any) as to how to make this work. I will try another concept sometime soon.Looking forward to improvements, it was a good idea but it doesn't work on paper (or computer screen, I guess) 1/27/09- It was me, and I am sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KJTALBOT Posted December 16, 2008 Share Posted December 16, 2008 I dislike the John The Baptist head-on-a-platter logo. Everyone loves a roundel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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