crkraider22 Posted June 29, 2009 Share Posted June 29, 2009 I know you are a good ways into these, but I can't help but notice that a few of these still have baseball elements within the logos. Its just something that has bugged me and is the first thing I see when you use them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted June 29, 2009 Share Posted June 29, 2009 Okay here are the Reds. I wasn't scared to go modern for the Reds, and I wanted to utilize black because it really can make this set pop. Fairly simple design for the third jersey. That's about it, so here it is!Enjoy! C&C please. Requests are welcome.This set looks pretty good. A cool modern design for the Reds works IMO. The alternate is awesome! I love the logo you used and the simple design. Great job! https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted June 29, 2009 Author Share Posted June 29, 2009 I know you are a good ways into these, but I can't help but notice that a few of these still have baseball elements within the logos. Its just something that has bugged me and is the first thing I see when you use them.Yeah, I know that could be a problem. The reason I don't want to change is because hockey pucks are much harder to resemble than baseballs, especially when they are just a black circle. Also, I am not super great at editing logos, and I want to leave them the way they are. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gonzo20 Posted July 10, 2009 Share Posted July 10, 2009 i was wondering if you could do a diamondbacks version, that would be cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted July 19, 2009 Author Share Posted July 19, 2009 Sorry for the long hiatus, but I'm back. Here are the Cubs to start it back up, but I don't really have much to say about the design. I'm not 100% sold on it, but maybe you guys could give me some suggestions as to how to make it better. The Cubs were a tough team to do.Diamondbacks next.Enjoooooy! C&C. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CJworks Posted July 20, 2009 Share Posted July 20, 2009 Sorry for the long hiatus, but I'm back. Here are the Cubs to start it back up, but I don't really have much to say about the design. I'm not 100% sold on it, but maybe you guys could give me some suggestions as to how to make it better. The Cubs were a tough team to do.Diamondbacks next.Enjoooooy! C&C.I'm not much of a hockey fan, but I do like the jerseys you've came up with. Being a Cubs fan, you gotta have the pinstripes! Nice job It'd be nice to see the alt logo on the home as well Dribbble | Twitter | Facebook | Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted July 25, 2009 Share Posted July 25, 2009 The Cubs set looks good. Not many complaints other than it might be better to have a more classic design for a more classic team. Maybe add an alternate with the C/bear logo? Good job with the Cubs, looking forward to the next team! https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted July 25, 2009 Author Share Posted July 25, 2009 I'm almost done with the DBacks, I just have to decide what I want to do with the alternate. I might update the Cubs, we'll see, but it depends on how fast I get the DBacks done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted July 25, 2009 Author Share Posted July 25, 2009 Okay, I'm really excited to get this DBacks concept out here and see what you guys think. The DBacks were an easy team to be creative with, and I don't think it hurt to go modern, and I even went a bit TATC-ish with the alternate. The home and away were obviously inspired by the Thrashers jersey, and the reason I did it was I didn't want a diamond overload, and it helps make the set unique. I tried to have the colors of the diamonds on the jersey match the colors of the diamonds on the crest, so that is the explaination of the color choice. I knew I wanted to take the team name literal when I made the alt, but I wasn't sure how to do it. I eventually got it pretty good, I thought. It is a bit TATCish as I mentioned, but it still looks pretty good I think.Enjoy! Any requests? C&C. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CJworks Posted July 25, 2009 Share Posted July 25, 2009 Okay, I'm really excited to get this DBacks concept out here and see what you guys think. The DBacks were an easy team to be creative with, and I don't think it hurt to go modern, and I even went a bit TATC-ish with the alternate. The home and away were obviously inspired by the Thrashers jersey, and the reason I did it was I didn't want a diamond overload, and it helps make the set unique. I tried to have the colors of the diamonds on the jersey match the colors of the diamonds on the crest, so that is the explaination of the color choice. I knew I wanted to take the team name literal when I made the alt, but I wasn't sure how to do it. I eventually got it pretty good, I thought. It is a bit TATCish as I mentioned, but it still looks pretty good I think.Enjoy! Any requests? C&C.Looks a bit awkward. Interesting, nonetheless Dribbble | Twitter | Facebook | Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted July 25, 2009 Share Posted July 25, 2009 D'Backs: nailed it! Great job with the diamond design. The home and away are perfect. Cool idea to model them after the Thrashers home jersey. The alternate is awesome! I love the design on the sleeves. That is cool. The design on the back is great. Very neat idea. I love it! A little out there, but it looks pretty cool. Great overall job on the DBacks! https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pflorez513 Posted July 28, 2009 Share Posted July 28, 2009 Colorado Rockies, I think a purple alt. would look nice. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted July 28, 2009 Author Share Posted July 28, 2009 Colorado Rockies, I think a purple alt. would look nice. ThanksYup, Rockies next. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Puck Posted July 28, 2009 Share Posted July 28, 2009 D'Backs: nailed it! Great job with the diamond design. The home and away are perfect. Cool idea to model them after the Thrashers home jersey. The alternate is awesome! I love the design on the sleeves. That is cool. The design on the back is great. Very neat idea. I love it! A little out there, but it looks pretty cool. Great overall job on the DBacks!We must be looking at different things, because I am of the belief it's the weakest concept he's done yet. While the Diamondback pattern is cutesy, it would be better off as trim not a large design element. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted July 29, 2009 Author Share Posted July 29, 2009 D'Backs: nailed it! Great job with the diamond design. The home and away are perfect. Cool idea to model them after the Thrashers home jersey. The alternate is awesome! I love the design on the sleeves. That is cool. The design on the back is great. Very neat idea. I love it! A little out there, but it looks pretty cool. Great overall job on the DBacks!We must be looking at different things, because I am of the belief it's the weakest concept he's done yet. While the Diamondback pattern is cutesy, it would be better off as trim not a large design element.Are you talking about the primaries, the alt, or both? I guess I will do an update after I get back in town. I will for sure make the diamond patterns more subtle, but is there anything in particular that is bad about the diamonds? Too big? Need an ourtine? Completely new design?Thanks a ton for the C&C so far everyone, I will probably get a DBacks update sometime next week, and then hopefully the Rockies a couple days later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sparkychewbarky Posted July 29, 2009 Share Posted July 29, 2009 Overall, I'm impressed with how good the MLB logos look on your hockey sweaters. I think you're on to something. There's a LOT more baseball fans out there than hockey fans. It'd be pretty cool to be able to buy some of these. *The Battle of Seattle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Puck Posted July 29, 2009 Share Posted July 29, 2009 D'Backs: nailed it! Great job with the diamond design. The home and away are perfect. Cool idea to model them after the Thrashers home jersey. The alternate is awesome! I love the design on the sleeves. That is cool. The design on the back is great. Very neat idea. I love it! A little out there, but it looks pretty cool. Great overall job on the DBacks!We must be looking at different things, because I am of the belief it's the weakest concept he's done yet. While the Diamondback pattern is cutesy, it would be better off as trim not a large design element.Are you talking about the primaries, the alt, or both? I guess I will do an update after I get back in town. I will for sure make the diamond patterns more subtle, but is there anything in particular that is bad about the diamonds? Too big? Need an ourtine? Completely new design?Thanks a ton for the C&C so far everyone, I will probably get a DBacks update sometime next week, and then hopefully the Rockies a couple days later.The alt is probably the worst offender.But, why would you go with a single sleeve design for them and not, say, the Braves to match the in-town team that does that? Also, the choice of it seems to go against everything else you've done, which to me, is trying to keep the design as close to the MLB design as possible. So when, where and why you decided to include large diamondback pattern seems very off-the-reservation for you there.I don't know, I think maybe what you did for Cincinnati would have worked just as well for the Diamondbacks, then as an Alt, brought back their purple and teal look for throwbacks sake. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted July 29, 2009 Author Share Posted July 29, 2009 D'Backs: nailed it! Great job with the diamond design. The home and away are perfect. Cool idea to model them after the Thrashers home jersey. The alternate is awesome! I love the design on the sleeves. That is cool. The design on the back is great. Very neat idea. I love it! A little out there, but it looks pretty cool. Great overall job on the DBacks!We must be looking at different things, because I am of the belief it's the weakest concept he's done yet. While the Diamondback pattern is cutesy, it would be better off as trim not a large design element.Are you talking about the primaries, the alt, or both? I guess I will do an update after I get back in town. I will for sure make the diamond patterns more subtle, but is there anything in particular that is bad about the diamonds? Too big? Need an ourtine? Completely new design?Thanks a ton for the C&C so far everyone, I will probably get a DBacks update sometime next week, and then hopefully the Rockies a couple days later.The alt is probably the worst offender.But, why would you go with a single sleeve design for them and not, say, the Braves to match the in-town team that does that? Also, the choice of it seems to go against everything else you've done, which to me, is trying to keep the design as close to the MLB design as possible. So when, where and why you decided to include large diamondback pattern seems very off-the-reservation for you there.I don't know, I think maybe what you did for Cincinnati would have worked just as well for the Diamondbacks, then as an Alt, brought back their purple and teal look for throwbacks sake.Okay, I get what you are saying, and you are right. I took logo elements rather than identity elements here. The purple alt is a great idea, and I was thinking to do that with the alt, but determined it would be weird to make a throwback alt for just the DBacks and no other team instead of a regular alt. (The Blue Jays have both BTW.) If the purple alt is a good idea, though, then I will for sure make one. Thanks for letting me know! I will have an update next week that connects more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Puck Posted July 29, 2009 Share Posted July 29, 2009 D'Backs: nailed it! Great job with the diamond design. The home and away are perfect. Cool idea to model them after the Thrashers home jersey. The alternate is awesome! I love the design on the sleeves. That is cool. The design on the back is great. Very neat idea. I love it! A little out there, but it looks pretty cool. Great overall job on the DBacks!We must be looking at different things, because I am of the belief it's the weakest concept he's done yet. While the Diamondback pattern is cutesy, it would be better off as trim not a large design element.Are you talking about the primaries, the alt, or both? I guess I will do an update after I get back in town. I will for sure make the diamond patterns more subtle, but is there anything in particular that is bad about the diamonds? Too big? Need an ourtine? Completely new design?Thanks a ton for the C&C so far everyone, I will probably get a DBacks update sometime next week, and then hopefully the Rockies a couple days later.The alt is probably the worst offender.But, why would you go with a single sleeve design for them and not, say, the Braves to match the in-town team that does that? Also, the choice of it seems to go against everything else you've done, which to me, is trying to keep the design as close to the MLB design as possible. So when, where and why you decided to include large diamondback pattern seems very off-the-reservation for you there.I don't know, I think maybe what you did for Cincinnati would have worked just as well for the Diamondbacks, then as an Alt, brought back their purple and teal look for throwbacks sake.Okay, I get what you are saying, and you are right. I took logo elements rather than identity elements here. The purple alt is a great idea, and I was thinking to do that with the alt, but determined it would be weird to make a throwback alt for just the DBacks and no other team instead of a regular alt. (The Blue Jays have both BTW.) If the purple alt is a good idea, though, then I will for sure make one. Thanks for letting me know! I will have an update next week that connects more.Appreciate hearing me out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted August 17, 2009 Author Share Posted August 17, 2009 Here is the DBacks update finally! I have a very subtle diamond design that will only look like diamonds when the jersey is actually being worn, but the design makes it look like the diamonds are unintentional, which is how they are supposed to look. It is basically just a modern design that I feel works well for the DBacks. Also, the away jersey is now sand because I thought it looked better than white. I tried to do two things with the throwback alt. 1. I tried to make it look like the primaries had updated designs from the throwback, and 2. I tried to make the throwback look like a early 2000s jersey with the standard shoulder yolk and pretty standard designs. Enjoy! Rockies are next I believe. C&C please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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