Heitert's NFL Concepts

[Phitin]

That primary is really well done. Great way to update an aging logo...I think a lot of teams need to revamp old logos in this style (rather than changing the identity altogether and downgrading their sets).

[raz]

Also, the bison are facing the wrong way on the uni.

I kinda like 'em, myself.

Just for laughs, I'd like to see you incorporate the nickel that's your logo now, maybe with alternate nickel pants.

[AHcreative]

Also, the bison are facing the wrong way on the uni.

I kinda like 'em, myself.

Just for laughs, I'd like to see you incorporate the nickel that's your logo now, maybe with alternate nickel pants.

I really thought about including nickel, but then I thought it would be too much. I was almost going to post this with silver/grey pants, but I decided to go with white. I'll see if I can make some updates tonight or tomorrow.

[AHcreative]

Hey I just wanted to bump this up to see if I could get any more comments on my Bills concept. I came back into town for the day and left my laptop at school so I won't be able to update the uniforms until either later tonight, or tomorrow. But I'd love to hear some ideas on what I should do with the uniforms.

Thanks.

[AHcreative]

Well okay, I re-did the Bills uniforms, I tried both nickel and white pants.

EDIT: See update below

[Bmac]

I love the shoulder stripes. And navy looks nice as an accent color like that.

[The Impaler]

Needs tv numbers. I say ditch the nickel, don't really like that. Also, I think you need to add some blue pants option in there, I just think it would look better. Just personal preference on my part, but I have never really cared for the colored yolks or whatever they are called.

[AHcreative]

Aright here are the last Bills updates, I decided to keep the nickel pants because I thought the white ones looked too plain.

Anyway, I'm finished with the Bills, I think I'll tackle the Bengals next. I'll have them up within the next few days.

[LetsGoOakland9]

I really like the design but I hate the grey pants white looks much better

[AHcreative]

Alright, here are the Bengals. I tried to combine a little bit of old, and a little of new.

C&C is appreciated.

[LetsGoOakland9]

I like it. I would make the stripes on the sleeve long and narrow like on the helmet and keep the pants stripe how it is in real life

[BlueSky]

Like the Bengals a lot. The Bills concept suffers from the same problem their current unis have - way too busy.

[AHcreative]

Alright, time to update this after a while.

For this Ravens concept, I replaced gold with silver and made black the dominant color, since of course, ravens are actually all black. I felt that the gold color was a little too bright, I wanted to make this a "darker" concept, both litterally and figuratively. The uniforms are all black because Ravens are completely black. I took the 'B' off of the Ravens head as you can see, I think the 'B' just clutters the logo a bit. Not sure if you can tell, but I also tried to re-size the logo so that it's not so horizontal and stretched out. I used the old script because I love it and I'm tired of the NFL using plain and boring wordmarks.

So, here it is:

As always, C&C is appreciated.

[LetsGoOakland9]

gold is definitely better, it just pops more

[hockey week]

speaking from actual experience, those purple numbers on black uniforms, outlined or not, would be completely unreadable from a pressbox. Niagara University's ACHA hockey team did that, purple numbers with gold outline on black uniforms, and I could not read them even from my table 15 feet from the ice.

Gray numbers outlined in purple might have a chance. A lighter gray would do better. White is ideal. I like where you're going with this, but I figured I'd throw in that tidbit for ya. Keep them coming, and make sure you differentiate the patterns away from lots of shoulder stripes.

[north dakota]

Ravens concept is way to dark, I agree you need to add gold to it.

[Nick21]

If the purple was lighter, it could work for the Ravens.

Love the Bengals concept, especially the old school numbers on them.

[CJworks]

I'll just echo others here, there's not alot of contrast. I don't think that any color other than white would work for the numbers on a black jersey anyways.

[BigKwell]

Alright, I'm finally finished with the bills. What I did with them is, I combined the current logo, and the unused 2002 logo. I was really looking at the 2002 logo and noticed that if I took off the red and blue forming a 'B' I could find some potential. So I took the B off and it pretty much looked like a grey Buffaslug, so I tinkered with the logo, and kinda fused together the current logo and the unused 2002 one.

For the jerseys I went with something a litte different, seeing as though the Bills already have some pretty "out there" uniforms. I know I said earlier in this thread that I don't like white pants, but sometimes they can look alright, so I made both the home and away pants white. This is basically an "I can see the bills doing something like this in the near future" kinda concept.

Here is what I did with the logo:

And here are the uniforms:

C&C appreciated.

Like the updated bison on the helmet - but I would keep the helmet red.

[AHcreative]

Alright, I've decided to continue this thread with a Ravens update.

I lightened the purple and changed the gray to gold.

Oh, and if anyone's wondering, I haven't given up on that Bills logo. I'm still working on it, and I do intend to finish it, I just wanted a break from it and have a little fun messing with some other teams.