LogoMark Posted September 2, 2013 Share Posted September 2, 2013 I decided to make a Rays concept, just for fun, on this lazy Sunday. I changed their main colors to purple and yellow to be unique, (many teams use blue) but also as a hint back to their rainbow days. I was going for a more classic baseball look, but I think it is just a bit generic right now. I thought about adding a sun/sunglasses/etc logo, but I was having trouble making one that didn't seem minor league. I'd love to hear what you guys think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ruwisc Posted September 2, 2013 Share Posted September 2, 2013 I like it a lot, but there are a couple of things I'd do differently:- If the team is still the Tampa Bay Rays, I think the away uni should probably read Tampa Bay instead of just Tampa.- I'm also not sure about having drastically different fonts for "Tampa Bay" and "Rays". It looks nice when they're together in the wordmark, but on the jerseys when they're separated they create two really different looks. This is more personal preference, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
St Louis Cardinals Posted September 2, 2013 Share Posted September 2, 2013 never use a script on a hat, always looks bad. also, a sleeve patch would go a long way in terms of getting rid of the generic look Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chrysleraspen08 Posted September 2, 2013 Share Posted September 2, 2013 You might want to fix the TB logo. It looks a bit too busy and is kind of hard to read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
THEANGEL&THEGAMBLER Posted September 2, 2013 Share Posted September 2, 2013 Its really good but more suitable for a college team Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
camly Posted September 2, 2013 Share Posted September 2, 2013 I agree. Definitely take the script off the hat and make the road say "Tampa Bay" The TB logo looks more like BT the way the letters are positioned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCall Posted September 3, 2013 Share Posted September 3, 2013 This is way more generic than their current look. As someone mentioned, this looks too collegiate, like an LSU rip-off. Same with the white panels. The TB logo looks like its a BT. Wordmarks on caps don't ever work for an MLB team. And they don't play in Tampa, they play in St. Petersburg in the Tampa Bay region. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted September 3, 2013 Share Posted September 3, 2013 Not bad, my only gripe is that in terms of cap logos, I think the first letter should be higher than the second. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JJHoser Posted September 4, 2013 Share Posted September 4, 2013 I was intrigued when I read the name of this thread. Then I opened it. This just does not give a Rays feel at all. It looks like the LSU Tigers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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