McCraeWilliamsProductions Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 Hi! I'm 15 years old and love to design and redesign logos and uniforms. I make all my own template and dont get any off the internet. I usually find a design I like and make my own templates out of them if that makes any sense. Just trying to clarify that I'm not some kid that uses only paint bucket and says its "designing" anyways here is my first of the "Top 25 College Football Redesigns".Starting with the most obvious..... Bamahttp://mccraewilliams.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/01/alabama-unis.jpg :Bamahttp://mccraewilliams.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/01/michigan-state-unis.jpg :Michigan Statehttp://mccraewilliams.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/01/auburn-unis1.jpg :Auburnhttp://mccraewilliams.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/01/LSU-unis1.jpg :LSUhttp://mccraewilliams.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/01/mizzou-unis.jpg :Mizzouhttp://mccraewilliams.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/01/ASU-unis.jpg :ASUhttp://mccraewilliams.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/01/florida-state-unis-SMALLER.jpg :Florida Statehttp://mccraewilliams.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/01/baylor-unis-smaller.jpg :Baylorhttp://mccraewilliams.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/01/ohio-state-unis-smaller1.jpg :Ohio StateP.S. I make all these, they arent copies.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbaker19 Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 First off, welcome to the boards. Secondly, very nice set you have for Alabama. Only thing I'm not feeling is the BFBS alternate (black for black's sake) or the number font. I'd remove the outline as the font doesn't look too Bama-ish for me. Otherwise, it's a nice simple modernization.EDIT - I just realized the outline is only on the black jersey. Thanks Dolphins91 for the jersey avatars. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRicSlick Posted January 22, 2014 Share Posted January 22, 2014 Numbers are the only thing bama needs on the helmet, the A would look good on one helmet as an alt only. The uniforms are pretty nice as well, great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCraeWilliamsProductions Posted January 22, 2014 Author Share Posted January 22, 2014 Numbers are the only thing bama needs on the helmet, the A would look good on one helmet as an alt only. The uniforms are pretty nice as well, great job. I tried to "break the tradition" by adding the A on the helmet. But I do agree the numbers are very classy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EvanBirchfield Posted January 22, 2014 Share Posted January 22, 2014 Wow for 15 you sure have a skill for this. Great job. I like Alabama how they are, but not too shabby. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DPV713 Posted January 22, 2014 Share Posted January 22, 2014 I like the "throw tradition out the window" look with Bama. They're simple, which doesn't deviate too too far from "traditional" uniform values. But these also give a great modern feel, and if Alabama wasn't known for having overly smplified uniforms for eons, these wouldn't be too far from an ideal 'Bama look. Great work overall; I like these types of concepts and I'll be following this for sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCraeWilliamsProductions Posted January 22, 2014 Author Share Posted January 22, 2014 How do I change the title of my topic. For Ex: "Top 25 colleges...........(added Michigan State)"???? Still getting used to the site Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted January 22, 2014 Share Posted January 22, 2014 How do I change the title of my topic. For Ex: "Top 25 colleges...........(added Michigan State)"???? Still getting used to the siteEdit post #1, press more edit options, or something like that, and you can change it. Good stuff here. I'll be following this one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GriffinM6 Posted January 22, 2014 Share Posted January 22, 2014 I can't see the concept. The link leads me to some broken site. Any way someone can post a pic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted January 22, 2014 Share Posted January 22, 2014 I can't see the concept. The link leads me to some broken site. Any way someone can post a pic?it's HUGE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCraeWilliamsProductions Posted January 22, 2014 Author Share Posted January 22, 2014 I can't see the concept. The link leads me to some broken site. Any way someone can post a pic?it's HUGEGo big or go home hahha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbaker19 Posted January 22, 2014 Share Posted January 22, 2014 beaten to the punch. Thanks Dolphins91 for the jersey avatars. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FALCON6 Posted January 22, 2014 Share Posted January 22, 2014 Good job! Way to keep it simple with bama. The numbers are classy, but the a looks pretty good too. Just maybe drop the white helmet. Can't wait to see what you bring to the boards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCraeWilliamsProductions Posted January 22, 2014 Author Share Posted January 22, 2014 Michigan state http://mccraewilliams.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/01/michigan-state-unis.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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WSU151 Posted January 22, 2014 Share Posted January 22, 2014 Alabama doesn't need the name on the front of the jersey.I know Michigan State has used the triple stripe/Northwestern stripe in the past, but it wouldn't make sense for them to use it now, seeing as how Northwestern has made it such a big part of their identity. Also, take the Spartan heads off the shoulders and replace it with the numbers. Smart is believing half of what you hear. Genius is knowing which half. Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRicSlick Posted January 22, 2014 Share Posted January 22, 2014 As stated before, take off the Spartan heads and replace them with T.V numbers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brando Posted January 22, 2014 Share Posted January 22, 2014 conference logos are usually apart of the upper chest also...but good work. I like where this is going. Look forward to seeing the rest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ben5 Posted January 22, 2014 Share Posted January 22, 2014 First off, you seem to be able to use the tools to make your concepts look well rendered. It's difficult to make them look presentable when you are first starting, and you are doing that. Good job, but keep working to get better. I also like your take on these concepts. Very traditional, which I like. But again, don't be afraid to push the envelope a little more. You can make a traditional looking looking jersey while still doing some cool, innovative things. Keep growing and exploring new things. One more: not everything needs to be posted.Now for specific criticism on MSU. As said before, the Northwestern stripes wouldn't really fly anymore at Michigan State. Also, lose the Spartans on the shoulders. If the Spartan is on the helmet, then why would it appear again mere inches below on the jersey? As it is, one of them is facing forward and the other is facing backward. For the "S" logo, I would use the S from the wordmark (if you need to use it at all). That will link the logo to the wordmark better. My least favorite part of the package are the black pants. I personally don't think the different colored belt area ever works. Have you ever worn any pants where the top 20% of them were a different color than the legs? There seems to be some sort of green stripe between the legs. What does this accomplish? Why have a different colored panel that is so hard to see? I don't really get the pants stripe either. The jersey is primarily black and green, but the pants have a random, abstract white stripe.You have a solid start here. Keep working and improving. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ben5 Posted January 22, 2014 Share Posted January 22, 2014 One more thing, which I have been seeing a lot of lately. The areas circled in red below are the back bumpers. These areas are always white or black. For a realistic concept, they shouldn't be green or some other color. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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