Htown1141 Posted May 12, 2014 Share Posted May 12, 2014 SO I have been working on this project for school and I have to work in a group to make a new country. One of the options to do was make a sports team. I chse football, cuz it is (in my opinion) the best sport ever C & C much appreciated!Bluecliff is my country name ( long story ) so here is their national team I have a dribbble! Thank you jaha32! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FALCON6 Posted May 12, 2014 Share Posted May 12, 2014 The yellow trim really highlights your light blue, although I would not use the wordmark gradient. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Htown1141 Posted May 12, 2014 Author Share Posted May 12, 2014 The yellow trim really highlights your light blue, although I would not use the wordmark gradient. so I would just changed the word mark color on the uniform so it would match the numbers but left it the same on the official wordmark I have a dribbble! Thank you jaha32! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeauxColonels Posted May 13, 2014 Share Posted May 13, 2014 I think the wordmark on the chest needs to be much smaller while the numerals need to be larger. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Htown1141 Posted May 13, 2014 Author Share Posted May 13, 2014 I think the wordmark on the chest needs to be much smaller while the numerals need to be larger. I have a dribbble! Thank you jaha32! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted May 13, 2014 Share Posted May 13, 2014 The colourations of your logo make no sense. Why the yellow/blue gradient? Why not a solid blue or yellow? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Htown1141 Posted May 13, 2014 Author Share Posted May 13, 2014 The colourations of your logo make no sense. Why the yellow/blue gradient? Why not a solid blue or yellow?there are a couple of reasons1: I thought it could be good it I used all of the colors I used for the gradient in the logo on the uniform2: I couldn't decide, so I chose the gradient3: When I posted this, I wanted to have some C & C o the logo as well, so I thank you I have a dribbble! Thank you jaha32! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Htown1141 Posted May 13, 2014 Author Share Posted May 13, 2014 As I said, this was for a school project, and we presented our flags yesterday, so I just finished a team for one of my good friend's countries: Garnarzia1: As well as the flags, we presented something extra. One person in his group did celebrations and the celebration of the sun was the most important of the celebrations because their main religion is based off the sun god.2:The arrows, when on field, will be facing the direction the arrows on the helmet is going, because their country "is always moving forward"Note:I forgot to mention this, but the blackout uniform is for Games played on 11/29 home games (usually played against Garnarzia), is to honor the most important God's birthday in my religion, The water god. The reason I did not put a mainly water oriented uniform and a blackout uniform instead is because the demographics areChristianity: 50%Judaism: 27%Markism(my religion): 23%Here is Garnarzia I have a dribbble! Thank you jaha32! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted May 14, 2014 Share Posted May 14, 2014 Experiment with colours in your lion logo. There are problems in general with using gradients, mainly because they can't be used in all applications, which is a consideration for sports logos. For instance, they're fine for digital presentation, so-so for printing, and don't work at all for embroidery. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Htown1141 Posted May 14, 2014 Author Share Posted May 14, 2014 I kinda just redid the whole logo I have a dribbble! Thank you jaha32! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1clkgtramg Posted May 14, 2014 Share Posted May 14, 2014 That logo is still really messy and the jerseys arent very creative either. Just looks like paint fill. How are you drawing this logo anyway? US and World License Plate Redesign - Fixing the Elite Ice Hockey League - NHL to Soccer Crossover - European Hockey League Twitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted May 14, 2014 Share Posted May 14, 2014 I want to say something nice but that new logo needs some work... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FALCON6 Posted May 15, 2014 Share Posted May 15, 2014 I suppose you might want to try one color set for garnarzia, although I see that you do have an alternate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MojoRoberts Posted May 15, 2014 Share Posted May 15, 2014 I recommend to anyone that wants to design and that uses paint to spend a couple of days reading up on the difference between raster and vector graphics. You really should be using a vector program like Illustrator or at least inkscape(free). Study up on what can be done with those programs, the possibilities are virtually endless. The result can be beautiful graphics with clean line work, symmetrical designs and consistent color. I mean no disrespect to you or your design, obviously you are interested in doing this. I only give this advice to you so you can realize your potential and the paint program will never get you there. Oh and definitely don't think you need to go to design school to get there, I made that mistake. There are plenty of options out there for you to self educate. Now go download inkscape for free, learn to use it study a lot of logo work and try this idea again! http://boards.sports...-league-hockey/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted May 15, 2014 Share Posted May 15, 2014 The best thing about Inkscape for a beginner is that it has a built-in tutorial. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Htown1141 Posted May 16, 2014 Author Share Posted May 16, 2014 Thanks guys, I really do, and I will do what I need to do to reach my full potential. Now can anyone send me the download link for inkscape? I have a dribbble! Thank you jaha32! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted May 16, 2014 Share Posted May 16, 2014 http://inkscape.orgBe mindful of which version you download. I had lots of problems on my old computer because I downloaded the regular version when I needed the 64-bit version.Also, be aware that there is the occasional bug when you save your .svg file as a .png. The easiest way around that is to just do a screen capture of your .svg in Inkscape and then create a .png in Paint from the screen capture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davidellias Posted May 17, 2014 Share Posted May 17, 2014 Given that you probably aren't older then 12, I think you show a huge amount of talent, but like the others said, it does need a little tweeking and refining. Keep up the work man, you could be a professional someday. Also is Bluecliffe a Nationstates country out of curiosity? I know there's a bit of a Nationstates following on this board. I myself used to play it back in the day. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Htown1141 Posted May 18, 2014 Author Share Posted May 18, 2014 I just made a new logo on illustrator and I don't know how to, or even if there is a fill tool that I can use. As soon as I get the uniforms figured out I will post the new logo I have a dribbble! Thank you jaha32! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Htown1141 Posted May 21, 2014 Author Share Posted May 21, 2014 I decided to just put up the logo now I have a dribbble! Thank you jaha32! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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