emberstudio Posted September 24, 2015 Share Posted September 24, 2015 This is my first real attempt at a mascot/character logo, so feedback is definitely welcome. Fictional team, just for practice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jrcollis714 Posted September 24, 2015 Share Posted September 24, 2015 This is really nice, and it is a good start to your logo making career. Favorites: Dallas Cowboys, New York Yankees, New York Rangers, New York Knicks, Cam Newton ND Irish Least Favorites: New York Giants, New York Mets, Washington Capitals, Pittsburgh Penguins, Philadelphia Eagles, OBJ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wquarton Posted September 24, 2015 Share Posted September 24, 2015 Really sharp. I feel that there is something slightly off with the turtles eye, and I think I would make the shell sections slightly bigger. But overall its pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
S.Tom.P Posted September 24, 2015 Share Posted September 24, 2015 Agree that the eye needs to be a little larger. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OmegaRed Posted September 24, 2015 Share Posted September 24, 2015 Excellent identity! I can agree that the eye can be made a little larger...it becomes evident in the versions that are green on green.It looks like you are going for an angry tortoise look. In that case maybe....maaaybe you can explore a version with a bit of a snarl or having the mouth open. I think it looks great as is, but just as an idea to take it further. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emberstudio Posted September 25, 2015 Author Share Posted September 25, 2015 Thanks for the feedback everyone! I made some changes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted September 25, 2015 Share Posted September 25, 2015 Oh hey! Im a fan/follower of yours on instagram! You have always done nice work there and this looks pretty good. MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BeerGuyJordan Posted September 25, 2015 Share Posted September 25, 2015 The edit is solid! This is a great concept. Thunder Bay Lynx - International Hockey Association (2 seasons, 2017-18, 2019-20, 2018 Xtreme Cup Champions) | Houston Armadillos - Major League Hockey (2 seasons, 2016-18) | Minnesota Muskies - North American Basketball Association (1 season, 2017-2018) | Louisville Thoroughbreds - United League of Baseball (1 season, 2017, 2017 United Cup Champions) | Las Vegas Thunderbirds - International Basketball League (1 season, 2016-17, 2017 Champions) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PittsburghGuy222 Posted September 29, 2015 Share Posted September 29, 2015 really nice logo, neck seems off a bit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1insaneguy Posted September 29, 2015 Share Posted September 29, 2015 Nice work! It could look a bit fiercer, but that's just a suggestion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chipper12 Posted September 30, 2015 Share Posted September 30, 2015 I like the anger the turtle has looks like its about to go mental. Very nice logo and very slick presentation. Me like me like alot. Spoiler Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
THOL3N Posted October 1, 2015 Share Posted October 1, 2015 I like it! What was the font you used for the wordmark? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZionEagle Posted October 3, 2015 Share Posted October 3, 2015 Great concept. The name is very original as well.Overall magnificent logo "Winners never quit, and quitters never win." ~Vince Lombardi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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