Mings Posted October 20, 2004 Share Posted October 20, 2004 C&C Welcome. Brown jersey is home, white is away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steve-O Posted October 20, 2004 Share Posted October 20, 2004 Looks good but I have a favor. Can you PLEASE tone down that sig. I mean honstly. That thing is a monster. Get rid of a lot of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jezus_Ghoti Posted October 20, 2004 Share Posted October 20, 2004 I second that.Not the part about it looking good, but the signature shrink request. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mings Posted October 20, 2004 Author Share Posted October 20, 2004 gee thanks for the c&c. now how about critiquing my design. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steve-O Posted October 20, 2004 Share Posted October 20, 2004 gee thanks for the c&c. now how about critiquing my design. Lose the sig, then I critique. That crap is seriously 24 lines long. Honestly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mings Posted October 20, 2004 Author Share Posted October 20, 2004 Steve-O if you dont like my sig then turn sig viewing off. Now if anyone would like to critique my design please do so. I would very much appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
twi Posted October 20, 2004 Share Posted October 20, 2004 I really like the fire in the torches. I think the use of the two color flames was used very nicely. My only critical observation is at the size depicted, the ring around the logo looks a little muddled on the helmet. However, this could possibly solve itself when "real life" size. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steve-O Posted October 20, 2004 Share Posted October 20, 2004 Steve-O if you dont like my sig then turn sig viewing off. Now if anyone would like to critique my design please do so. I would very much appreciate it. I like looking at sigs, just not novels. Just lose it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gosioux76 Posted October 20, 2004 Share Posted October 20, 2004 Keep the sig. Lose the concept.I'm joking, of course. It's a nice concept. I don't like brown and orange as the choice for a team called "Olympians." Other than that, it's very well developed. Why is it called the Olympians? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mings Posted October 20, 2004 Author Share Posted October 20, 2004 Steve-O I don't know if you are having a bad day today or something but I have had this sig for a long time and you chose to bring it up now. It would have been best suited to pm me for that. I ask that please critique my design if you would like, and if you would not like to that is fine too. I do not know if I have done anything to you for you to act like this, as I always thought you were a cool guy.TWI thanks for the complimentsgosioux its called olympians after my high school and Indy is kinda like the amature sports capital of the world (at least its billed that way) and the brown and orange were the colors of my old high school. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steve-O Posted October 20, 2004 Share Posted October 20, 2004 I really happen to like the concept to be honest. This is your best work so far IMO. The logo looks good and the uni's look sharp too. I like the font you picked for the numbers, everything is looking pretty solid.As far as your sig. I just chose to mention it now because it is just wrong to see that you can scroll down on one post for 5 minutes.I think you are a cool guy and I don't have any beef with you. Take it easy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mings Posted October 20, 2004 Author Share Posted October 20, 2004 Ok thats cool, I understand I can tone it down some. I guess I did over react a lil( Ive been sick the past couple of days and that makes ya kinda cranky lol). Thanks for your compliments by the way. Its cool thats theres no beef between us, only problem is I'm hungry lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DEAD! Posted October 20, 2004 Share Posted October 20, 2004 Very nice concept. I especailly like the 'I' secondary logo. That style of wreath looks familiar somewhat. Is it anything like the USA olympic logo? I saw, I came, I left. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mings Posted October 20, 2004 Author Share Posted October 20, 2004 yeah i based it on that, cause I couldnt draw one worth anything lol. I did add a line in the middle to make it flow with the logo though lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winters in buffalo Posted October 20, 2004 Share Posted October 20, 2004 Is that black, or dark brown, in the middle of the tertiary logo?Looks a bit too dark.Other than the color choices, which you've explained, it's a solid concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mings Posted October 20, 2004 Author Share Posted October 20, 2004 its black in the middle, i might revisit that though, maybe a brown or orange would be better in the middle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cuss16 Posted October 20, 2004 Share Posted October 20, 2004 Is that black, or dark brown, in the middle of the tertiary logo?Looks a bit too dark.Other than the color choices, which you've explained, it's a solid concept. exactly what I was going to say. A dark brown/red would be much better. You are on fire, joshuamings. Doh! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andrewharrington Posted October 20, 2004 Share Posted October 20, 2004 so i just thought of this, and i know amateur sports are keen on the idea of different and unique helmet designs, i.e. te iowa barnstormers "goggles" helmet and such. so ya know at the olympics how they gave the medalists those wreaths to wear around their heads? okay. so what if you wrapped your wreath design around the helmet so that it looked as if there was a wreath being worn by the player, like put the wreath in the position of the seahawks logo, like a wraparound, except maybe a little higher so its more like a head adornment than a headband haha. I still don't have a website, but I have a dribbble now! http://dribbble.com/andyharry [The postings on this site are my own and do not necessarily represent the position, strategy or opinions of adidas and/or its brands.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthMan Posted October 20, 2004 Share Posted October 20, 2004 that's very cool IMOi just dont like the brown... "We have nothing to fear except fear itself." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wcgslacker04 Posted October 20, 2004 Share Posted October 20, 2004 Yo i agree with steve-o.. the sig is crazy long! i have to look hard just to seperate it from what your actual post says.I think your type choice is good, it's got a rather roman feel to it, but I'm not feelin the brown with the orange. You need something a little more dynamic and bolder for the team name you chose. You have these earth tones that make it so subtle, but the type effects and name don't sit well with earth tones. Spice it up a bit would be my suggestion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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