Jumpman085 Posted January 23, 2005 Share Posted January 23, 2005 This is my first design and I was wondering if you guys could tell me what i need to work on. Your comments are greatly appreciated.http://www.geocities.com/jumpman085/Lakers.doc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joshawaggie Posted January 23, 2005 Share Posted January 23, 2005 wow, that may be the first time anyone saved it as a .doctry using Los Angeles on one jersey, Lakers on the other, it gets crowded with both . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jumpman085 Posted January 23, 2005 Author Share Posted January 23, 2005 Yeah i dont know how to post the pics on the site. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the admiral Posted January 23, 2005 Share Posted January 23, 2005 the IMG button Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jumpman085 Posted January 23, 2005 Author Share Posted January 23, 2005 When i try to do that, its says You are not allowed to use that image extension on this board. A valid format is: http://www.domain.com/picture.gif, an invalid format is: http://www.domain.com/picture.one.gif. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joshawaggie Posted January 23, 2005 Share Posted January 23, 2005 .doc isnt usually an image extensionuse: .jpg, .gif, or .png Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Jumpman085 Posted January 24, 2005 Author Share Posted January 24, 2005 anybody? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brass Posted January 24, 2005 Share Posted January 24, 2005 Get a photobucket account at http://www.photobucket.comNext, don't save as .JPEG, save as .PNG, this will not smear your picture like .JPEG dose.Good start though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickV Posted January 24, 2005 Share Posted January 24, 2005 I'd leave the players name off the front of the jersey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Discrim Posted January 24, 2005 Share Posted January 24, 2005 that...well, it's a first timer. heck, I remember my first one. the sleeve numbers were way too big and the logos sort of mismatched (Sens/67s). a lot of Discrimesque thoughts here, although if you want the whole name on there either shrink Los Angeles or shrink Lakers. every jersey I know of where both the city and team names were on it was this way except for two (Tennessee men's basketball for many years and early Detroit Pistons). otherwise, get rid of either Los Angeles or Lakersthe mixture of modern and classic elements is a novel one, and I'm actually undertaking a similar endeavor (and also doin something similar) myself. while I like your idea of mixing elements of Minneapolis (the stars around Kobe's name and number), early LA (the blues) and modern styles (the side striping), it's not completely there yet. Keep at it, cus I see potential here. I got a couple pointers:first, the player's name should only be in one place. Either on the back in all its glory or on the front, chillin low key with the number. second, i'm thinking you only have paint for the moment. get a better program when you're able to, but in the meantime keep at it. as my boy Against All Odds can attest, mastery of Paint will only make you better in the long run.third, the stars on the front and back is a good idea, but try to space them out as if you're using a two-digit number. an idea meant for a one-digit number is doomed to only look good on guys who wear single digits (which, as you may know, aint' that many) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FiddySicks Posted January 24, 2005 Share Posted January 24, 2005 itd be cool to keep the last name on the back and put the first name on the front under the #. unless yao yent to the lakers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jumpman085 Posted January 24, 2005 Author Share Posted January 24, 2005 Get a photobucket account at http://www.photobucket.comNext, don't save as .JPEG, save as .PNG, this will not smear your picture like .JPEG dose.Good start though. I can't get an account there since I'm only 15. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FiddySicks Posted January 24, 2005 Share Posted January 24, 2005 Get a photobucket account at http://www.photobucket.comNext, don't save as .JPEG, save as .PNG, this will not smear your picture like .JPEG dose.Good start though. I can't get an account there since I'm only 15. lie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jumpman085 Posted January 24, 2005 Author Share Posted January 24, 2005 Here:My Webpage Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thejroll Posted January 24, 2005 Share Posted January 24, 2005 Kinda looks like a combination of lakers and clippers jerseys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeneralW91 Posted January 24, 2005 Share Posted January 24, 2005 Follow what others have said about the names and having LA on one and Lakers on another and you're on to something really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vicfurth Posted January 24, 2005 Share Posted January 24, 2005 Potential. I like the re-colored logo. That's the best part. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
appleclock Posted January 24, 2005 Share Posted January 24, 2005 I dig the blue but I miss the yellow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jamesjduncan Posted January 24, 2005 Share Posted January 24, 2005 It's an interesting piece. I don't know if I would have it in me to wear it, and I think I would laugh if I actually saw it made, but that's not to say it's bad. In all honestly, I think if you lose the name on the front, maybe just clean it up a hair, you have a nice alternate here. Keep at it. And BTW, if Paint is all you have, it's cool. That's all I use too. Cheers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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