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Alright guys, me and my buddy on another forum are working on this series. he is making the basic logo and does hte writing, I'm doing the jerseys... the stories are good and he is definitely the brains behind it but what are your thoughts on it. please read the story in order to get an idea of the type of league it is supposed to be...

Episode 1.1 "Making The Jump" => http://www.footballsfuture.com/phpBB2/view...2429600#2429600

Episode 1.2 "Never Again" => http://www.footballsfuture.com/phpBB2/view...2465051#2465051

Episode 1.3 "The New Hero" => http://www.footballsfuture.com/phpBB2/view...2493667#2493667

Episode 1.4 "A Bumpy Ride" => http://www.footballsfuture.com/phpBB2/view...2519354#2519354

Episode 1.5 "At The Helm": => http://www.footballsfuture.com/phpBB2/view...2578523#2578523

Episode 1.6 "A New Jump": => http://www.footballsfuture.com/phpBB2/view...2608610#2608610

Episode 1.7 "Passions": => http://www.footballsfuture.com/phpBB2/view...2637036#2637036

Episode 1.8 "Leading the Way": => http://www.footballsfuture.com/phpBB2/view...asc&start=0

LA Fame set

LAfame.jpg

LAfameawayjersey.jpg

LAfamehomejersey.jpg

LAfamefield.jpg

I will update them as he gives me more of the original logos

oh and the teams that will be coming:

1) Los Angeles Fame

this post

2) Philadelphia Independence

http://boards.sportslogos.net/index.php?s=...st&p=768801

3) Houston Copperheads

http://boards.sportslogos.net/index.php?sh...9703&st=40#

4) Milwaukee Easy Riders

http://boards.sportslogos.net/index.php?sh...id=766325

5) Ohio Rumble

http://boards.sportslogos.net/index.php?sh...id=763908

6) Miami Sawsharks

http://boards.sportslogos.net/index.php?sh...id=776185

7) Dallas Roughnecks

http://boards.sportslogos.net/index.php?sh...9703&st=40#

8) Baltimore Marauders

9) Detroit Trolls

10) The Phoenix

http://boards.sportslogos.net/index.php?sh...id=763871

11) Chicago Mob

http://boards.sportslogos.net/index.php?sh...id=766325

12) Boston Blaze

http://boards.sportslogos.net/index.php?sh...9703&st=40#

13) Seattle Shock

http://boards.sportslogos.net/index.php?sh...id=772730

14) New Orleans Gators

http://boards.sportslogos.net/index.php?sh...9703&st=40#

15) Gotham Glory

http://boards.sportslogos.net/index.php?sh...id=766325

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Who or what inspired Mitch Rosenberg to be the commish? He's one of the cardiologists at one of the hospitals where I work, and he's no Tags, I tell ya that... :P

Interesting stuff. As far as the logo goes, Pontiac might ask the Fame to kindly cease and desist with that logo. If a security guard can bring down the Ravens' logo, certainly GM could get a team in a relatively minor league to change their logo.

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Who or what inspired Mitch Rosenberg to be the commish? He's one of the cardiologists at one of the hospitals where I work, and he's no Tags, I tell ya that... :P

Interesting stuff. As far as the logo goes, Pontiac might ask the Fame to kindly cease and desist with that logo. If a security guard can bring down the Ravens' logo, certainly GM could get a team in a relatively minor league to change their logo.

wow... never thought about that.. anyway.. .yeah.. it's kinda just supposed to be something simple... not like we were trying to make this minor league have a great logo and such... not like it is the XFL.

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must like General Motors:) first the pontiac logo and now the old trans am/firebird logo

wow. this isn't about the logo's it's about the uniforms and how the concepts look as a whole. I honestly don't care if y'all think they look like something else. I am just trying to get the concepts down for the teams...

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LA Fame

i like the overall concept, but the logo kinda reminds me of pontiac and star trek went behind the bush, made whoopie and 9 months later produced the said logo. I'd emphasize the Star and ditch the pontiac logo.

also the 'LA FAME' on the jersey might be a bit hard to see from a distance. i'd axe that off the jersey.

Phoenix The Phoenix?

i'm assuming the team is based in phoenix. Just calling the team The Phoenix might confuse fans as to where the franchise is located. Maybe try Arizona Phoenix. The logo i like but the wordmark gets difficult to see from a distance so that probably isn't needed. i'd go with a more simplistic wordmark if you are going to use it on the jerseys.

Ohio Rumble

This one i like. Distance viewing of the helmet might start to be an issue. The rumble starts to merge with the black. But does have a TCU horned frog feel to it. I'd get rid of the shoulder design. unless you are watching the uniforms up close, most people arent' going to know whats on the jersey.

Gotham Glory

i like the gothic feel to it. I do feel the logo is a bit too detailed and made to be viewed up close and not at a distance. The word mark I love, the logo not so much. The logo itself is cool but you get the full effect upclose and not away. I'd go with a more less detailed logo.

Milwaukee Easyriders

I absolutely love this concept. if only you can make a team named the Ghost Riders. that would be super sweet. however, i don't like the Milwaukee on the pants. i'd go with stripes down the side. The bike logo is awsome and probably is your best concept yet.

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nice guys.

some of the logos are a bit tough to read and perhaps need more time but there are some nice ideas there and i do admire a bloke with a project. will be interested to see how the rest turns out.

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How can you have a Milwaukee team that references Harley-Davidson and not use black, orange and silver for the colors?

The logo is ok, but it doesn't look good on the helmet. I'm not a fan of "Milwaukee" on the pants (although I suppose that could work in your story's continuity if it were smaller and not so prominent) and if you're gonna have red numbers on a blue jersey you need a THICK white outline.

I do like the flames on the jersey, but they would look SO much better if they were orange on a black jersey. Maybe you could try using the flame logo on the helmet instead.

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wow. I thought y'all were gonna roast me for the flames... and yeah, I agree on some of the logos. I didn't make the logos, just the wordmarks... I need to remake a lot of them... and the colors for all the teams weren't my idea at all. it was just what the logo he gave me had for the colors.

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