camcool21 Posted July 23, 2007 Share Posted July 23, 2007 Primary:Wordmark:Spiffy or no? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedFalcon7 Posted July 23, 2007 Share Posted July 23, 2007 no Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DelayedPenalty Posted July 23, 2007 Share Posted July 23, 2007 Ninjas are first off, secondly, I think that's supposed to be a throwing star in the background? but it's way off. The wordmark is plain and nothing more than a simple font. Also, the hand holding the ball has the thumb on the wrong side, ouch! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BB61 Posted July 23, 2007 Share Posted July 23, 2007 noThank you for your contribution. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Billy B Posted July 23, 2007 Share Posted July 23, 2007 The throwing star doesn't look good. Just search "Ninja Star" on Googe. There were a lot good pictures that could be used for reference and really improve this logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ben5 Posted July 23, 2007 Share Posted July 23, 2007 Look at some ninja throwing stars and use them as the basis for yours. Correct the arm lengths and the hand positionings. That should help you improve this one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy! Posted July 23, 2007 Share Posted July 23, 2007 Primary:Wordmark:Spiffy or no? This one...hoo boy.Let's start with the font. It's really plain..as in typed out and Roman. Your wordmark is part of your logo. Have fun with it. With all the font websites out there, you should be able to find a font that better fits either New York or ninjas (heck, maybe even both). And center it under the logo.The football player looks like a character from N.A.R.C. (a classic game) rather than a football player. Was that your intention? At the very least angle your football player so it looks like he's running. As it is, it looks like he's standing up holding a football at a very painful angle with a dislocated right leg. If the helmet is meant to be a ninja mask, give your ninja some eyes. The throwing star is a nice idea. It's a good idea. Spend some time refining it. Sketch out a few ideas first, find one that works, and tackle that. "I secretly hope people like that hydroplane into a wall." - Dennis "Big Sexy" Ittner POTD - 7/3/14 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
camcool21 Posted July 23, 2007 Author Share Posted July 23, 2007 thanx jdub Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcameronh Posted July 23, 2007 Share Posted July 23, 2007 Looks like you went another way with that logo. This is a bit like what I was talking about for my Red Zone Rush logo, like using the upper half of the body, adding the shape and the word mark. Looks good but could still use a bit more detail. Nice work on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
camcool21 Posted July 23, 2007 Author Share Posted July 23, 2007 improvement? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BB61 Posted July 23, 2007 Share Posted July 23, 2007 improvement?Wow. I like that. A lot.There's part of me that would like to see the ninja be a little bigger, but I don't know if that would work. I only say that because one would think that the ninja would be the main aspect of the logo, not the start. That said, I think what you have here works, and I think it's a vast improvement over what you started out with.Good jorb. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
camcool21 Posted July 23, 2007 Author Share Posted July 23, 2007 here's w/ the guy larger compared to the star: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chestnutz Posted July 23, 2007 Share Posted July 23, 2007 Great improvement! erikas | go birds | dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BBTV Posted July 23, 2007 Share Posted July 23, 2007 noThank you for your contribution. In fairness, the OP specifically asked "spiffy or no?" "The views expressed here are mine and do not reflect the official opinion of my employer or the organization through which the Internet was accessed." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shane Does Art Posted July 24, 2007 Share Posted July 24, 2007 I would just have a Ninja head in front of the throwing star. Hi, how are you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
camcool21 Posted July 24, 2007 Author Share Posted July 24, 2007 I would just have a Ninja head in front of the throwing star.That would be too plain IMO. I wanna have it tie into football cuz it's a fantasy football logo... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shane Does Art Posted July 24, 2007 Share Posted July 24, 2007 What if it's a really detailled ninja face There would still be room for a football...somewhere... Hi, how are you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
camcool21 Posted July 24, 2007 Author Share Posted July 24, 2007 shanurr the most complex piece you've posted on these boards is this:having said that, the body + football stays Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shane Does Art Posted July 24, 2007 Share Posted July 24, 2007 shanurr the most complex piece you've posted on these boards is this:having said that, the body + football stays I wasn't taking a direct stab at your work like you did too mine, excuse me for having an idea and not being as "talented" when it comes to making dumb ideas into boring concepts like yours.I wasn't being an ass about anything there. Note the tongue-smiley, but I guess your mind wasn't able to grasp something like that.You asked for comments and criticism, I told you what I thought, you decide to show me something that I have done, sure it wasn't liked and messy but I at least took from that and decided not to take the Patsox path like you did. Hi, how are you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
camcool21 Posted July 24, 2007 Author Share Posted July 24, 2007 NEVER compare me to patsox...because to be compared to patsox, is to be insulted with the strength of 500 million stampeding stallions! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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